Samples Band 8

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8

band

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Some people believe that both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem, while others argue against this. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many children, nowadays, lead a sedentary and inactive style of life, some people believe that the responsibility lies within schools and parents, while others are opposing this. This essay agrees that parents and teachers should educate children about the dangers of an unhealthy lifestyle as well as discussing both points of view.

band

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been a remarkable increase in the number of the society assert that if you have a job which does not satisfied with you, in this case, it is better that you should try to get used to living with this, whilst other groups of people claim that this situation can be altered by enhancing themselves. In this essay, we will examine both sides before drawing a logical conclusion.

band

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree?

The trend of having a sole career is outdated and the new is of having numerous skills and techniques of getting the livelihood and continuing to acquire knowledge in a lifespan is becoming popular. I strongly believe that an individual should not depend on the same origin of cash for the whole lifetime, instead should create multiple sources of livelihood. This essay will firstly discuss the positive effects of this on the work-life balance and secondly, it will explain how it helps in maintaining mental health.

band

An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, the rate of children who are overweighted is increasing, causing several problems in their lives and also to governments, that have to spend more on health services. In this essay, I will discuss some causes and solutions to this problem.

band

The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientists often visit other planets to explore the chances of lives. Some people opine that it is a waste of enormous funds whilst others have contrast viewpoint. Although ordinary people's lives stay the same, I believe these visits can be beneficial for mankind in future.

band

In the future,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is expected that the online medium of reading will reduce the need to buy printed newspapers and books as everything could be read over the phone in the coming years, without any pay.I totally disagree with this statement and believe that the importance of books and newspapers will remain prevalent in future.This essay will state reasons how reading printed books and journals will not be replaced by reading them online in future.

band

Traditional classrooms in the past held lectures with multiple participants. Now that technology makes it easier and faster for students to access information, the need for traditional classroom discussion is becoming less popular. It’s because the internet is a more effective method than the regular classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What is your personal opinion?

Traditional classrooms, since its inception, have been an indispensable part of the formal education structure. However, in the era of the internet revolution, several academicians and reformists have reconsidered the internet's utility as the new generation classroom by observing its feature of easy and fast accessibility. Admittedly, the internet has a myriad of advantages. Still, I would like to go with the motion of the traditional classroom, not becoming obsolete and ineffective in the coming days, which will be discussed in this essay.

band

Most government money should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a strong argument among a large proportion of people that governments ought to allocate more of its annual budget for teaching science than different areas for developing a nation's economy. In my opinion, I am completely against this statement because other subjects are also vital for development and even most of the developing countries have already invested so much in science so far.

band

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Art represents the culture and rich heritage of a nation and its people. However, in certain demographics of society people claim that the administration must stop investing in the artwork and allocate those funds to other public services. I disagree with this notion and believe that art is as important as any other sector like healthcare and transportation.

band

In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

Children are vulnerable and delicate. Some countries prefer to start their formal education at the age of four whilst others prefer it to be at a late age. Although formal education teaches them punctuality, I believe this early education can be stressful.

band

Some people say that best way to improve the health of people is by increasing sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Sound health has always been a matter of grave concern among all. As a result, the possible ways of improving health standards is often argued. While some emphasize on providing more opportunities for physical activities, others believe that this would not affect much and some alternatives are also needed. In my perspective, building sports centres alone is not enough, awareness campaigns are imperative to attract public towards it.

band

The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

After a first landing on the moon, a person who made this said that it is a giant contribution to the future development of humanity, despite this speech for a major part of people changed nearly nothing in their lifestyle. I agree that no difference was brought for many individuals, and money could be spent for the county’s needs, however, significant improvement of the space exploration is worthier than drawbacks.

band

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people argue that the government should allocate its amount on the construction of railways, while others claim that it should be focused on roads. Personally, I think railways are more essential than roads for social and educational reasons.

band

Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

There are some debates about having a set retirement age for everybody is unfair, and workers from certain occupations deserve to retire and receive a pension earlier than others. This is usually defended for people from heavy work. I personally believe that the reason why we have a standard period is to guarantee the equality, regardless of occupation, because just as we have the professions that affect physical health, we also have those that affect the mental health. Ultimately, I disagree about changing the current rule.

band

Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Now, most of the people pass their free time by shopping and it is seen in adolescents especially. From my perspective, there is a useful improvement to this phenomenon. This essay will discuss the reason for this epidemic and also describe the merits and demerits of these aspects.

band

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more people are consuming junk food, which can lead to many health problems. Some people think that governments should increase the tax on fast food as a solution to tackle this issue. In my opinion, I moderately disagree with this point of view. This essay will argue why a higher tax on junk food can not make people change their eating habits and completely solve this problem.

band

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Societies with heritage in the arts had been considered culturally sophisticated and advanced. Few people believe that it is worth spending finances for the betterment of society instead of sculptures, which is a waste of resources. I strongly agree with this view because the government should spend tax-payers’ money not only to generate employment but also to provide free discipline.

band

Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While some advocate that education should serve to guide citizens to become good ones, others state that supporting people to meet their own passion is the main drive. Before forming any opinions, I delve into both approaches in the below paragraphs.

band

it is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people consider that city life is quite better whereas others have confidence in that villages are a more comfortable place to live. I prefer to live in the countryside as compared to the city, but I will shed the light on both views in the following paragraphs.

band

some people believe that mobile phones should be prohibited on public places. do you agree or disagree

Mobile phones have become an essential part of life. Some masses consider that these electronic devices should be prohibited in public places such as shops, libraries and public transport but I have different views about this idea . I don’t agree with this statement.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.