Samples Band 8

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a world that is far more globalised than ever before, vehicle transportation is one of the most controversial issues today. While some people argue that huge amount of cash should be allotted to building high speed railways, others think that cash should be spent on renovating the current public transportation. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on both points of view and extend my full support to the former view.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is commonly believed by many that in the current era people are more dependent on each other, whereas some are of the idea that individuals have become more independent. In my opinion, I support the latter idea as the modern day individual is more stronger and powerful.

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Dear Mentors, Please evaluate my IELTS ESSAY, Thanks in advance. Nowadays, men’s sport is given far more attention in society than women’s sports. What are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

In recent years, male's sports are becoming increasingly popular, and they are getting far more attention than female's sports. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons for this phenomenon, and I will explain why it is a negative development.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree

Due to the growing popularity of online shops, they will someday replace shops in the real world and lead them to close. In my opinion, I disagree with this as there will always be people who enjoy going to shops and shopping malls rather than shop online.

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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

The modern world has changed by leaps and bounds owing to the advancements in technology, but the education system of schools is still using the old methodology. This spark a debate whether the modern way of imparting education should be based on the practical knowledge and I am completely on the support of this view. This essay will discuss the benefits of experimental learning before arriving at a logical conclusion.

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i. #Globalization | #ForeignTrade - Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (IELTS 10, AC)

Recent years have seen a major change in productions around the world, which forces people to purchase similar things. Notwithstanding, this discourse delves into the rationale behind this occurrence, and subsequently, will put forward my own perspective, in turns.

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People believe that in order to reduce road accidents it should be mandatory for drivers to retake the driving test every 3 years. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

I believe that there should be no requirement for reassessment of driving skills, in order to avoid the incidents on roads. This essay will explain, why reappearing in the driving exam will not have any affect on minimizing the road crashes.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While there are some arguments about whether sports facilities could help in the improvement of public health or not, some people opine that further procedures should be taken to get better results. From my point of view, sports equipment in parks and public areas are essential, along with other measures to help people improve their lifestyle. This essay will debate both viewpoints, and present my personal perspective.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion.

Recently, there has been an increase in the length of life in several parts of the world. This phenomenon has both benefits and drawbacks, however, I strongly concur that the demerits are dominant.

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Should companies (businesses) ensure that they employ a quota (or fixed percentage) of women in all jobs, or is this an impractical concept? Discuss both sides of this debate, and reach a conclusion based on your own opinion.

A firm becomes one of popular in this area for young people, while the number of employees should be a fixed percentage of all women. However, this is things that inaccurate to provide in the business.

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Some people suggest that schools should pay more attention to academic subjects for children because these subjects are useful for their future career. They think that subjects like music and sport are not useful and should be reduced. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, many people believed that schools should strengthen their role in orienting a good future career for students by concentrating on educating academic subjects and eliminate such excessive subjects like music and sport. I agreed that academic subjects are necessary for future jobs, but the minor subjects are crucial too.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

It is irrefutable that the university education is becoming increasingly popular these days.Some people believe that universities should enrol both genders equally in every course.This essay will argue that why it is not feasible to accept equal proportions of male and female students in every subject.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE AS SOME SUGGEST THAT beating IS SOMETIMES CRUCIAL FOR CHILDREN TO GRASP THE DISTINCTION BETWEEN RIGHT AND WRONG WHILE OTHERS HAVE THE MINDSET THAT SUCH SPANKING MAY HAVE DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS ON CHILDREN. IN MY OPINION, AS BEATING AFFECTS CHILDREN NEGATIVELY, TEACHERS, AS WELL AS, PARENTS SHOULD BE VERY CAUTIOUS REGARDING THIS ISSUE, AND PUNISHMENT SHOULD BE AVOIDED BY ANY MEANS.

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As earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on earth. To what extent do you agree with them? What alternatives might there be to exploiting space for natural resources

The speed at which natural resources on Earth have been getting depleted is alarming. Whilst it is believed by some that seeking an alternative solution in space is the best option, I concur with the notion that humans have to confine this quest to our planet only, for the former idea is not sustainable or cost-effective. What would be more appropriate in this situation is resorting to renewable energy.

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is thought by some people that the more complicated hobby is, the more pleasurable experience it would be. Although I agree with this view to a certain extent, I also believe that other non-sophisticated hobbies are enjoyable too.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV,vido games & other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?

Many parents are worried about the rise level of nuisance through digital gadgets and several entertainment ways. Its effects on the child's behaviour and leads towards the bad ways. The problem can be solved by proper monitoring of the child.

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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

While some people consider films simply a source of entertainment, others agree that films should be educational. Personally, I believe that films can be both amusing and educational; however, it is up to what kind of the film is.

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In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether imprisonment or education is a more effective ways to deal with criminals has long been a heated debate in many parts of the world. Regardless of some benefits of the former, I still believe the latter would produce more long-term results.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Emerging technology has impacted on today's generation and some devices have ability to capture all the scenes on the spot where these machines are fitted to get information as well as most of the humans do not aware that they are being captured and tracked. I will discuss both positive and negative sides in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Essay writing. More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is irrefutable that an increasing number of people show a preference for high-end brands over those locally-produced counterparts. Personally, I believe this trend of consumerism might be attributed to the dominance of advertising and the desire for social status. While there are some drawbacks that can arise, I consider it to be far more beneficial.

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