Samples Band 9

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Nowadays in our society, some children have an obligation only with studies, but others have to divide the time in study and work, maybe to help the family with the budget of the house. Some people believe that is not correct a child makes effort to work, but another part of the population is in accord with the idea that the job is a reward and can help. In this essay, I will examine those reasons, as well as give my own opinion.

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The popularity of computer-based gaming is significantly high among all age-group people all over the world. It is often claimed by the guardians that pupils are not learning anything from this types of gaming. Moreover, it is detrimental to the young generation. I completely agree with the parents thinking, and I believe that addiction to gaming is not only wasting the valuable time of student life but also damaging the physical and mental health of the youngsters.

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Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many are of the belief that past traditions now hold little future value for young people. In my opinion, there are still important lessons young people can learn from their cultural heritage.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. What is your opinion on this? To what extent to you agree or disagree?

It is believed that wild animals should not exist in today's world and it is pointless to spend money to protect them. I completely disagree with the view, and this essay will explain the reasons why the idea is totally absurd.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Increased life span is one of the results of an improved medical care system. It allows people to live longer than ever before. I think that the pros of this development outweigh the cons and I am going to explain why.

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Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals contend that the government fundings must be prioritized for the prevention and health promotion programs instead of squandering on palliative cares. There are certain pros and cons of this strategy but these advocates believe that it is better to nip the evil from the bud. I think that prevention is better than cure.

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Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people who need it; however, others prefer to give money to the national or private charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is a controversial topic about the way of philanthropy, either provide direct support or donate to charities. Personally, I prefer donations rather than direct help in the local community. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and explain my idea with examples.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So advertisements to the children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, advertisement has become one of the important tools in the marketing of a product. Companies influence their consumers specifically, children and their parents, to buy unhealthy food and gaming items through several commercials. A school of people suggests that these types of ads should be restricted on television and I completely second this opinion because of the reasons, discussed in the following paragraph.

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Science and technology have improved the standards of living in all over the world. Some people claim that the role of the arts has become insignificant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, the living conditions have become superior, much of this can be attributed to the growth in sci-tech. There is a view that the significance of art is very less in the improved lifestyles of people across the globe. In my opinion science and technology has aided to a better level of comfort, while, arts and humanities still play an essential role in our lives.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

Investing in roads and motorways instead of public transport systems is a common idea for numerous citizens. I completely disagree with this opinion due to the advantages of spending budget on public transportation and the reasons are outlined below.

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Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether the government should control a human’s meal by-laws has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that every individual has a right to choose what they want to eat and know what is better for themself and this substantially helps the crowd feel pleased and protected physically . On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that to help inhabitants to grow well, they have to obey the rules in order to be supplied with all nutrients necessary. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former for the following reasons.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that parents are the best teachers. Some folks support the idea of teaching how to be a good parent in schools. I disagree with the aforementioned notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on this and will explain the skills needed to be a nice parent as well.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people are of the opinion that students need to study the nature of food by science and how to cook them, others take the view that schools are the places where they should learn academic subjects. I believe the university will encourage them to learn more about basic nutritional knowledge and ways to prepare healthy meals.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Recently, the debate on whether physical or mental strength is more important for success in the sport has been heated. As far as I am concerned, the importance of strength depends on the type of sport. In this essay, I will outline both sides and elaborate on my view.

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Some people believe that children's Leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some think that the free time of children must be filled with educational activities, otherwise their time is wasted. I totally disagree with that statement as kids cannot constantly study and they need to release their energy in non-educational activities.

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Now days many mothers take care of the family and don't go out to work . Some people believe that they should be given salaries by the government . Do you agree or disagree?

Motherhood is one of the toughest responsibility in society today. Many of them have no decent jobs and just stayed at home to take care of their children and family. I am of the view that the government should give them payment for being a hard-working mother.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views these views and give own opinion

It is common for undergraduates to pursue their passion and chose their prefered major. However, a part of society disagrees with this opinion, stating that only learning subjects related to science and technology should be allowed since it could be more practical in the future. The essay will clarify my opinion that university scholars should be able to enrol in whatever they want to study, as well as discuss aspects of the opposite statement.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, the amount of waste has multiplied widely. This situation happens due to the lack of basic education in society, being, thereby, the responsibility of the government to act in favour of settling this setback. In this essay, I will outline why this phenomenon is taking place and what the government can do to reduce it.

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The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

Some opinions that rising the gasoline and diesel is the most perfect method to deal with the global environmental issues. Personally, I completely disagree with this thought.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Several countries are expected to have an aged population in the future years. As far as I concern, this movement has many negative consequences, thus governments should try to slow down the disproportionate growth of the population.

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