IELTS Writing Samples Band 1.5. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1.5

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some experts belive that when a country is already rich,any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. do you agree or disagree?

In the world, there are a lot of problems that one of them is economic problems. So a lot of scientists try to find a way to this problem and achieve a result about the effect on society. One of the resources collects from many experts we shaw that if the country is rich, people won't be happy when increasing the economy, otherwise in my opinion it's incorrect and increasing money equals making happy.

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Some people think news has no connection to the people lives. So it is a waste of time to read the news in newspaper and watch television news program. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In conclusion, increasing payouts to employees can help motivate them for the short term, and this comes at a cost to the business; a better way to keep them focused, determined and more productive at work is to introduce increment policies based on their performance which can be given to them in the form of an annual bonus. Other non-monetary incentives like recognition of one's work through awards, such as "Employee of the Month", can also keep the organizations' workers motivated at no extra cost to companies.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

These days everything is change .online shopping became more popular.However,it affects to people and nature. In this essay I will discuss about it.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.What do you think are the main courses of crime?.How can we deal with those causes?.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the rise in crime rates has become a major concern for many countries.This increase can be the result of many different crimes.To my opinion, there are many reasons for crime such as poverty, lack of education, unemployment and peer pressure etc and this essay will be focused on the main causes of crime and possible solutions.

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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the present age, the question of whether to make profits or have responsibility for the community becomes a considerable question for corporations. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that responsibility must be taken by firms.

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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time.

The blueprints depict how the ground floor of a specific building has altered in time.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?

In the recent phenomenon, instead of consulting with a doctor, individuals prefer to have subsidiary treatment. I wholeheartedly think it is the wrong attitude to treat any health issue by yourself.

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In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more common than face to face interaction. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The way people communicate in the office these days is to move from facing interaction to online conversation. This kind of communication makes people can interact with others who stayed far away, so could lower the cost of interaction, but on the other hand, this concept causes the message hard to understand and there is a lot of miscommunication between workers. So, online interaction has two sides that should be considered and I will discuss them in this essay.

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200. More and more people do online shopping. Why is this the situation What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities?

People in the past were used to shopping in shops,which was more hassle extremely.because they visited one shop to another shop.But, nowadays people are interested to buy from online retailers. This trend is more convenient for people, who love to shop online.

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You and your friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special accasion ,and you were very pleased with the food and service.

I am writing to apply for the position of I want to thank you.Although I celebrated my birthday at your restaurant with my friends.I felt happy, thank you for that.Against happiness ,I am visiting again with family. Because it is my sister's birthday soon.Because of that visiting again.Especially, I am very like food and drinks.The most important thing is that the prices are agreed.Thank you for that and I promise to visit again.I hope you will have the same welcome next time.

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Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate. Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience.

Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme.Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

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write a email to the resturant manager for bad experience you had in the resturant

My Name is Nikole, I’m writing this email regarding dissatisfaction which i had in your esteemed organization last week.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

During the last meeting with you, we discussed how to develop the maintenance courses. And Mr Igor and Mr Mustafa asked me about the important plan for BOC employees, so I attached here the two of the most important plan that should be delivered to the BOC trainees, which are vibration analysis and shaft alignment. these development are part of predictive maintenance and include two parts theory and practical part. we need to give priority to these two courses with details.

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Nowadays, some employers thought formal academic qualification are more important than life experience and personal qualities when they look for new employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This day hiring requirements are important for all occupations. So, some people think that the academic qualification are them most requireuments, while other prefer the personal experience. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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The image illustrates the process of creating soft cheese

The image illustrates the process of creating soft cheese. In general, it can be seen that there are 5 stages, beginning with milk and ending with finished soft cheese.

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Government should spend more money on education than sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that governments have a lot of money, but if you think about it governments really do not have a choice to spend it on education. Because of how much time and money others spend on education. let's have a look on the other side, spending money on rebuilding and sports, therefore, spending money on entertainment or education. If you compare these two, education is really powerful. It can make the human body healthy or think about something that they do. The human body works for the first time.

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governments should banned of the sale of bottled water

To begin with, bottled water has enormous risks to the environment. These risks are because people daily consume a lot of plastic bottles which will be thrown in the desert or sea. Thus, the waste will affect the habitats of wildlife and marine life. For example, in 2021, the Green Environment journal reported that 32% of the waste is plastic bottles. Therefore, in order to protect our planet, communities should replace the plastic bottle with a reusable bottles.

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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that environmental problems are becoming the most controversial problem nowadays, some people opine that this problem are too big for individuals to solve, while others opine the contrary, they believe that each individual has to take a step to make the difference, in this essay, I would like to give my opinion and discuss both views.

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What are the most popular sport in your country ? What are the reason behind it's popularity ?

Among various well-known sports across the world,football is the most loved game in my country.It is a game of eleven players in a team where two teams play against each other.There are ample of reasons behind this popularity,first of all,football can be played anywhere wherever there is a space.However,what is even better about this game is that can be played inside or outside which caused football playable at any place.Secondly,playing football is easy it requires only a ball and two goalposts.It does not have any financial barriers you can even manage goalposts with sticks.consequently,football is quiet popular and the most energetic sports all around the world.

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How do the elderly consume the news in your contry ?

As a matter of habit ,for a long time ago ,the elderly buy a newspaper and magazines because they don't know how to work with social media such as some platforms. Moreover, they aren't able to work with smartphones.In my view,firstly ,the elderly nations need to be trained for being familiar with smartphones which is help them by consuming the news .

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