IELTS Writing Samples Band 2.5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 2.5

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Due to so many young people dropping out from school, the rate of unemployment is increasing, and it affects our society in different ways. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce this?

The increasing dropout rate among oung people and its results effect on unemployment is a multifaceted issue.in my opinion,the academic,mental health as well as the social issues is the causes of school dropout and unemployment.

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𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘋𝘪𝘢𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘮𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘭𝘰𝘸 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘢 𝘴𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘰𝘤𝘢𝘭 𝘮𝘶𝘴𝘦𝘶𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘪𝘯 1957 𝘢𝘯𝘥 2007.

The given maps show the changes that had taken place in museum in 2007 compared to the locality in 1957.

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“Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.” Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The children are energetic person. They need spaces where they can play freely. We are responsible for creating space for them.

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Cramming and immersion are becomingly increasingly recognised methods of gaining knowledge in an area, other people disagree and say that only through lifelong learning can a subject be learnt. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

The bar chart provides key information about various ways of transport used to travel from work in one European city in three years in 1960,1980 and 2000. The units are measured in percentages.

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Some people think that hard work and determination are the keys to success in life. Some, on other hand, think that there are other factors behind a successful life. Give your opinion.

Most parents trust their children .They want their children to study at university .They believe that university education is the best way to achieve succes in life .

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The secret to success in life. Getting the right qualifications Contacts You should explain which factor is more important in achieving success, giving reasons to support your answer.

Some people say that university education is the best way to achieve siccess in life ,while others believe it is no longer true.After you finished school you will have one way.They are sdudying university or running your own business.Many younger choose sdudying university becouse they are think studying university is easier than studying school.

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The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of scinece and technology , social media have been the modern contact tools in people daily life. Social medias provide a new communication method to conntect the society. People can share everything in soical media. This essay dicussed that the advantages of the development outweigh the disadvantages if social media replace fact-to-face contact .

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

In modern era, a lot of people try to achive their goals and succes through their career or education, it is kinda difficult and for this they should have a great knowledge. However, it is not always true. In my point view, achieving success make parents be proud of their children and it is really important to them.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in science research, business and academic word. Others believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to sharing information. In this essay, I am going to evamine this question from both points of view and then give my own opinion on the matter.

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Every country should have a free healthcare service, if this means the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For a long centry, healthcare service is being more serious. There are not enough doctor to support. If all of the country change into give a free healthcare support, it will be over stressful for the hospital. Therefore ,i don't agree that it can be provide.

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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Therefore, individuals cannot be expected to change their behavior and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

there is no doubt that after the Industrial Revolution the indutsry sector has grown up rapidly. which resulting to have a lot of companies and factories whom i think have the big resbonsiblties about the envoirmnal problems such as pollution and climate change all around the global

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Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce, not the government. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that individuals and private companies should pay to clean the pollution they produce, and the government should not take the responsibility it. I personally believe that every individual and private companies should take the responsibility of the pollution of their own because it will be a huge pressure for the government, and it is not the government's responsibility.

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Some people say that university education is the best way to achieve success in life, while others believe it is no longer true. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Experts say studying at university is very important and it helps to create your career. However some people oppose this idea.

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Schools should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring and use films tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree and disagree?

While I really appreciate conductong this survey about chools should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring and use films tv and computer instead.I would like to agree using computer is a great option for the following reasons.

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The charts below shoes one government's spending on culture ad education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts gives information about one goverment's using money on Culture and learning

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people say about that social media sites, such as Facebook or Instagram, have a bad impact on teenagers. Besides, youngs have negative effect their ability to form personal relationship. While people highlight the benefits of these applications.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to control what people are saying and doing (for instance, through cellphone tracking and security. cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years , the use op technology to monitor people activities , such as cell phone tracking and CCTV cameras, las become increasingly common. While this development has several benefit, including increased security and conuiniene, it has also raised concerns, about privacy ant potential for abuse, in my opinion the benefits of this technological advacement outweigh the drawbacks , but only if used responsibly al properly regulated .

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security. cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Monitory - it is way to get information about other people through cellphone or security cameras. In Nowadays technologies are well-developed and have some settin which shows private information (location, Biography) of human. This type of news are available for many people. In one hand it is really useful and easy to know about someone's life. In another hand it could be very dangerous. So Why?

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Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I agree with people for waste of money because sometimes someone just has party for two years old kids. And it's definitely strange. I think has good parts both thoughts and bad side. If it make event for birthday party or wedding something like that. Exactly he waste of money but has good parts. For instance you see your family and your relatives. And you will getting enjoy this event because you cohesion for your family. Everyone want to see parents and hang on with they. We was seeing them since born in the world. And we have just really rely people our family. it's due to events, we are going to meeting. But of course events expensive things many time. But likewise are important for relationships. İf we don't have enough money at the time we can go to picnic so we needn't to money all the time. Just want to see family.

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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this? (Write 250 words.)

I believe that, in light of competition that has increased rapidly, citizens in industrialized nations must enhance skills and adapt quickly due to keeping up with economic growth. In contrast many people in developed countries report lower levels of happiness compared to previous degeneration.

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