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Some people think that violent films and video games have bad effects on people and should be banned. Others think that they are just relaxation sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that violent films and video games has given negative effects on people and should be banned. While the others think that they are just relaxation sources, i belive that both side have pluspoint and minuspoint. For me, i'm torward the relaxation sources side.
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Percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university

The given table indicates the consequences of enquiries about one college in three varied times -2000,from 2005 to 2010.The results are given with the percentage.
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Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that a certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should be benefit from early retirement?

I do agree with the statement that a certain workers deserves to retire and receive pension. 65 years old now a days is too long to wait,in our era, life style, different way of living and eating affects our health, which means life now a days are short compared from the past. Working at the age of 60 above is also risky to some, I believe workers that are in military, police, navy's and fireman should benefit from early retirement. In their young age of duty they spent all their energy as this is their main tools to protect and serve our country. Reaching 50 above age make them physically weaker and make them at risk in the line of their duty. I therefore conclude that they are the one who should benefit from early retirement, they spent most of their time studying, training and working, at 45 atleast, retirement is acceptable for them to enjoy their remaining life with family.
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Many elderly people are no longer after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In this modren era, most of the old people are sent in nursing home by their kids. They are not taken care from familes. However, there are many merits and demerits of this, which I will discuss further.
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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Majority of people are becoming seriously fat. Some people know that the value increase of fattening foods will tackle this issue.The are principal reasons are twofold.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To reduce the gap of wealthy and poor countries, developed countries help the poor ones by sending money. However, this is only scratching the surface of the problem without solving it. In my opinion, wealthy countries should not provide money but other kinds of help to those countries which are not well-developed yet. The reasons will be listed in the paragraphs below.
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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue can be solved?

The are numbers of nations, where habitation is decreasing day be day. According to my opinion new inventions could be the greatest reasion behind this. This essay will elaborate the reason and the possible solution that will reduce the risk of deforestation.
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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, old parents stays in home with other old people. In same case, the government has to pay for this care. For me, the fee of the live of old parents is payed by the member of their family.
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some schools require theire students to wear uniforms because They believe it helps the students focus on their schoolwork rather than on their clothes discuss this view and give your own opinion

It’s required by some schools to wear a specific costum while others aren’t . I think it’s important to specify a uniform so in this essay, we will shed light on different views about this issue.
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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

Today a lot of work are more pressure and the working day is long time.There are many reason for that stress in the job.iwill disscuess it.
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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

This picture illustrates process of making tea products and making cup of tea. In general, there are 18 stages of producing tea from sow tea seeds to drinking and enjoying.
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Caring of children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that children’s care is an essential part of the society. Some people believe that all parents should be required to join training lessons. I completely disagree with this statement, and believe that there no need to go for training courses.
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Some people is like the change in diet society and their own life and one things to stay the safe why do some people want things to stay the same why should change be regard as something positive

There is argue among people who dislike the change while other say that change is essential for development and should be embrashed below I will discuss why individuals dislike the change and it should be regarded as positive.
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You nearly complete your trial work period of two months and desire to become an official employee in the company. Write an email to your manager: Saying why you deserve to pass the trial work period Explaining what benefits you are able to bring for the company if passed Explaining what skills you should improve Stating your long-term career goals if your have an opportunity to work in the company Try to write a minimum of 50 words.

My name is Nguyen Thi The Tam. I am in probation period for the position of Manual Tester and my probation contract will be end next week, so I write to you to express my desire.
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Some people dislike the change in the society and in the I want life and one thing to stay same why should change be regarded as positive

Changes invitable part of everybody's life which not everybody embraces with open arms.Human being are bonded by cultures tradition routines which nobody wants to break easily. This mind set of individual dislike the change and promote stereotype. I will discuss below why change should be regarded at positive.
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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Nowadayy, some parents believe they have an ability to obedient their children whatever they want. However, I don't agree with this view.
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In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs what problems do you think youth unemployement causes for individuals and the society?What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

Over the last 100 years, machines robots and AI have evolved to an automatic process of doing work without much human intervention, 2\3 parts of our daily routine made easier thanks to technologies and in the result, people nowadays have a much more time then people in the past.
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Some people think that government should spend money on the search for life on other planets, while others believe that is a waste of public money because there are still many problems on earth

Many people are of the view is a waste of resources to allocate funds on searching of humans on another planet. Nonetheless, such funds could be allocated to different sectors which are relevant to the people on this earth. I'm here to present my thoughts. The essay will elaborate the writer's opinion.
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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

as a crowd numbers increase, technology get more advanced and it would help us in various ways.one of them is worldwide better health condition which will results in longer life expectancy.this situation comes with its advantages and diadvatages which will be discussed farther.
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"City planners" new design include setting up schools, markets, and commercial places(offices) in different areas of the city. Do you think it will help the city dwellers?

I beleive planning and orgnize a city can help the citizens to live in a high quality f life, in this essay i will explain how it will improve and help the city dwellers.
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