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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believed that it is better to live in cities while the remaining people would like to live in the countryside. This writing will discuss both views and shows that living in the city is the best way.
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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email • recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn • explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together.

I am writing this email in regard to the recommendation that you asked me about a new sport that you would like to learn. The sport that I would suggest is football as it is a highly intellectual game and it is one of the best sports in the world. Football keeps you physically fit and it requires certain strategies to win that keep your mind also at work.
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Some people think that the government should decide which subjects should students study at the University while other believe that students should be allowed to apply for subjects they prefer. Discuss both views.

Nowdays the government should select major of students in university. some people believe that the government should choose students major at the University.However other think students have permission to select that major they like. In this essay,I will explain both sides of the subject.
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Nowaday, many government budget money for the sports industry. Why do you think governments are funding sports so heavily? Do you think this an appropriate investment?

I think it gets popular to invest in the exercise field for official departments in recent years because of many reasons such as improving the surface of the government and inspiring the citizens of healthy habitation.
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Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

I agree, as the work culture and job market keep changing with the current needs. Schools and colleges should have options for students who have difficulty learning subjects like Maths and Philosophy. Basic Maths and philosophy can be taught with an option for the student to either continue with the subject or pursue another subject which they believe they are good at and would want to grow in. It is important to have courses in which students can explore and understand their likes and dislikes. The current job market requires a student to have basic knowledge of subjects but more practical experience, with this in mind schools/colleges can have more practical subject courses with limited theoretical subjects. I believe this type of education system would provide the job market with students who would love what they do and excel in their profession.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The map displays a public park called Grange Park when it initially opened in 1920, and how it looks now.
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People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. Agree or disagree ?

It is a moral responsibility that everyone should pays their taxs to their government. However, some induvegul believe that we should take our all earning money and don't need to pay any tax to the authority. I am not agree with this giben statement. I will explain why we should pay tax to our nation.
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People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building. What are the possible causes and solutions? ‌

It is irrefutable that neighbourhood building is being damaged as individuals are not interconnecting with the next doors for most of time. In my opinion, there are plethora of reasons for this disturbing tendency but handul of possible measures will mitigate this problem.
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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe in the notion that more economically developed countries should help poorer ones. I only partly disagree with the above stated.
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In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area. As a result, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages.

Urbanisation has exposed people to many unexplored resources with different cuisines from around the world being one of them. With the curiosity to try new recipes, people are forgetting about their local vegetation and food. In the upcoming paragraphs, I would like to discuss how foreign vegetations have a negative impact on local farming and food.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this proposal?

Music is believed by some to unite people of different ages and cultures. I tend to agree with this statement.
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Some people think that single-sex schools are better than mixed schools. Others believe that mixed-sex schools are the only way for children to learn. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Beyond doubt , there has been much discussion revolving around about whether co-education schools are good or gender based schools are better for learning . From my prespective , mixed schools are a great way for children to learn . Both viewpoints along with my position is argued further.
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In my parts of the world, children's lives were very different from today. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of life for children in the past?

In the past, children were able to reach a very high level. This is because their comprehensive research always kept them busy, finding things that would make their work easier not only technology, but also all science and medicine. Because we know that there were many state wars in the past and they suffered, and they spent their lives doing such research so that they would not suffer. And it can be added that in the past children did not has careers a simple example of this is walking home from school it is much better than taking some children by car.
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Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that good social skills is as important as good qualifications to succeed in job?

Employers look for some qualities in an employee at the time of recruitment .Some people claim that a well qualified job seeker must also possess good social skills in order to be successful in the workplace.I completely agree with this statement,beacause a qualified worker who is social can create a happy environment and healthy competition at work.
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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree or not.

In an ever progressive society, there is disputable question whether if people should invest for their own accomodations or paying for temporary flats. In my opinion, I agree that people should buy their home instead of renitng it.
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many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The number of people believe that buy a home is better than rent it. This writer disagree with this statement. Because it is cheaper than buy a house. Moreover, rent a home is more mobility than another one.
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

By increasing the population, people need to have houses. building houses make life more comfortable, and convenient and can lead to decrease crime rates.
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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with statement or not?

The majority of people said that the best choice is buying the home than renting it. This essay will agree that it is better to buy a house than rent a house.
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Are IT-related jobs valued more by society? Is the quality of products worse than before? What kinds of things do people like to repair by themselves? Why do people like to get their mobile phones repaired in specialized stores?

Today, with the growing society, the demand for using IT inventions is increasing. For example, in medical examination and treatment, instead of the patient having to wait for data to be examined, thanks to the development of IT, it is only necessary to have a citizen’s identity card to be examined, saves a lot of time. Therefore, I think jobs related to the IT industry high appreciated by society
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Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, the global revolution can provide a convenient life for many people. It can be seen that some people like to collect documents of their own memorised by uploading media to social platforms.
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