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IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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Some people think that one good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events, while others think that it is not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,international sporting events become more important in people's life.While some people tend towards the viewpoint that a good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events,I would have to support the idea that it is not to promote.
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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although some students in universities aspire to study not only their primary subjects but also different ones, others think spending whole their time and focusing on studying for a qualification is more significant. I believe it is much more vital for university students to study diverse subjects not only specific ones.
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What is enlightenment, and What does it feel like ? How can you tell who is enlightened ?

If you want to understand the word “enlightenment” in Buddhism, you have to understand The four noble truths which is the heart of the Buddha’s teaching. The Buddha has enlightened with The four noble truths that is, Dukkha (Suffering), Samudaya ( The cause of suffering), Nirodha (The cessation of Suffering), and Magga ( the path leading to the cessation of suffering). The cause of suffering is Tanha (Craving or Desire) which has three factors: Kama-Tanha (Craving for sense of satisfaction, Bhava-Tanha ( Craving for existence), and Vibhava-Tanha (Craving for non-existence. Consequently, the cessation of these Tanha is enlightenment, in the other word, its call, Nirodha or Nibbana, which is the highest goal in Buddhism. Whoever can get rid of these Tanha is an enlightened one.
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As well as, making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Agree or disagree?

Into the bargain, earning money and business have social leaderships too.
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Some people suggest that sport helps people learn about teamwork, but others say it can encourage to be too competitive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Sam was looking forward to going out with his friends for the day, but his friends were busy at the last minute. But Sam seemed like he wasn't angry at his friends as he was a kind boy. Sam is a high school student born and raised in Busan, Korea. Sam lived with his grandma, who cared for Sam when he was a baby until he turned into a high school boy because her mother left him when he was born. Sam has asked her grandma about his mother many times; she told him that because of poverty, his mother couldn't afford his life, so his mother had to move to Seoul to find a job to care for Sam. Since Sam's grandma told him about his mother, he has decided that after he graduates high school, he will study college in Seoul and find his mom.
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Governments should spend money on rails rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

State ought to use capital on railways, however highways also needs money.In my opinion, I totally agree that rails needs amount, since it is a better mode of transport.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the best way for people to get the news is newspapers, while others think other media can help them get the news better. I will discuss both views in my essay below.
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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Having higher wages are more crucial than having job satisfaction for all the working people. I completely agree that having higher wages are more crucial than having job satisfaction for all working employees. First of all, I believe people can enjoy a lavish lifestyle, they can get their dream gifts and can be motivated to work harder. Higher wages gives financial stability and offers employee other benefits such as extra Bonus every year. For example, company offers various benefits such as incentive, makes work timing flexible, so people feel motivated and work harder. To sum up, people tend to look forward to jobs having more higher wages compared to job satisfaction.
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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Urbanization has led to numerous problems, like illegal encroachment on the natural environment , water scarcity, and improper waste disposal. The illegal disposal of waste has led to severe problems, like pollution. The solution for this problem could be solved by proper solid and liquid waste disposal system and water scarcity could be sorted out by solutions like rain water harvesting .
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The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.

As technology is becoming a necessary part of everyone's life, it's also affecting the relations between younger and elders.
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Some people say that the use of mobile phones should not be allowed in public places such as libraries, shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often claimed that banning the use of phones in public places should be considered. Although this solution has some merits, I believe,from my perspective, smartphones should not be forbidden due to their popular usage among people and the following paragraphs will elaborate more on it.
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Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in the newspaper and watch news programs on television . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the digital era, News plays a vital role in People lifestlye because it is a centralised medium so humans will get the information anywhere around the world . News more interconnected to the everyone lifestyle but some people thinks knowing information through the medium it is a waste of time.In this essay i will discuss the benefits of learning the news.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

The line graph demonstrates data on the changes in the numbers of average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries, namely UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in the middle of 1967 and 2007.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement.

Nowadays most people turned down buying newspapers because they have been spread all around the internet. I totally agree with this statement because why buy newspapers when youn can them online for free? In this essay I am going to list the reasons of why I support this opinion.
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Today many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problem does this cause? What can be sone to solve this?

Nowadays, there are vast numers of city dwellers who do not know who their neighbours are in the same neighbourhood as a consequence of lacking of communication between them. This circumstance can be tackled by improving the people's communicative skills and relationships.
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Today many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problem does this cause? What can be sone to solve this?

Nowadays, there are vast numer of city dweller who do not know who their neighbours is in the same neighbourhood as a consequence of lacking of communication between them. Though this circumstance can be tackled by improving the people's comunicative skills and relationship.
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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school,sometimes starting from the age of five or six,right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Nowadays, children are forced to do so many exams in the school.Every so often,children take tests and exams from the time they enter grade until they graduate high school.There are obviously some positive and negative appearing for exams at such young age.This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of having kids take exams at school.
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that how do people plan for their life. While it is a commonly held belief that people should do the same things without changes, there is also an argument that they should change their things. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
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Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is thought that cities are the best place to reside in, while others like to live in countryside. In this essay, I will illustrate both point of views and give my opinion.
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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the exitnction of species and loss of biodiversity What are the causes of loss of biodiversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?

Nowadays, a lot of animals do not exist and many different species have become rare to find. Human beings destroy habitats and cause a loss of biodiversity due to the world's development. This essay will discuss all of the factors and will draw my personal solution.
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