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in this video, an architect ( a woman ), who was educated in Switzerland and China, compares the architecture of Europe and Asia. As an example for the Asian side, she choose Chinese designers, because they don't think about a career or becoming famous( even though, only counted number of people know them by their name ) while European draughtsmen consider writing their names in history ( and most of them are well-known such as Michelangelo or Palladio). At the same time,she mentioned the differences even in their sketches and ideas.However, in China, architects want to make it convenient not only for people's lives but also for the balance of nature and show their respect to the traditions. In contrast , in Europe, they mostly concentrate on the design of the buildings.
Some people argue that nowadays, school are no longer necessary, in my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement, and the following examples will be provide to support my point of viewOne of the most important reasons why students must go to school for learning is that learning form school give more benefit than learning in home school because students can get socialization form school. Children can learn essential social skills, such as teamwork, communication, and problem-solving by interacting with their peers and teachers in school., it was revealed that in Thailand, almost children will go to school for studying and making friend form institute. As a result studying in school is opportunity to get socialization .
The diagrams compare the layout of Grange Park in 1920 and the present day. The most significant changes are the replacement of the central fountain with a rose garden and the transformation of the stage into an amphitheater. Additionally, the pond has been replaced by a children's playground, and a cafe bar has been added. The glasshouse has been removed, making way for a new water feature. Finally, a new entrance for an underground car park has been established.
Without a shadow of a doubt, there are considerable reasons related to this phenomenon. Because of the fact that law-breakers are not recognized by society when they come back, they do not have job security in order to earn a living and they easily reoffend their previous crimes. For instance, in Vietnam, a number of leading corporations such as Vingroup do not accept employees who have criminal records to their company. Therefore, there are abundant justifications contributing to the recommiting of offenders.
The South West airport had some changes after its redevelopment. The departures area was modified to have a bag drop service, along with a cafe and check-in module that were already there before the redevelopment. However, both the cafe and the check-in module changed places to make room for the bag drop. After going through security passport control, passengers and airport staff will be able to purchase stuff at the new stores before their flight. After doing some shopping, the boarding gates wait ahead. There are now is gates, which were 8 before the redevelopment. For this reason, the walkaway installed between the gates has been replaced for a sky train, which will be able to transport people along the different gates. But if you're not leaving the South West airport, you'll be glad to know the arrivals area has also been redeveloped. After going through passport control customs, passengers and airport staff will be able to hire different services. This area was empty before the...
Obesity is one of global health disease nowadays. Obesity can be suffered by all ages gender. There are many factors causing obesity. One of them is sedentary lifestyle. Despite of this, exercise is a treatment to cure and prevent this problem.
Many people argue that building new dwellings and roads is more beneficial than restorating old buildings, which requires tremendous government expenditure. From my perspective, although it is important to develop the city, improving the quality of old buildings plays a crucial role due to several reasons.
Nowadays, in many societies, people are concerned about beating the children at home. However, others believe that smacking is necessary part of discpline. This essay is totally disagree with the following statement.
In today's modernized world, it has become a trend for young people to work or travel after completing their high school education.
Children's free time activities have become a very debatable topic over the years, which divides peoples' opinions into 2 two groups. The first one, is those who believe that any activities should be supervised by adults,especially parents. While the second one is convinced that children should have the opportunity to choose the activity,which they want to practice.
Nowadays it is becoming more and more popular to utilize gadgets in order to make online bonking processes. Most of individuals find it convenient and I agree to this statement
In today’s world, the idea of age of the retire from work should be increase has been a controversial issue for individual. As far as I concerned, there are a couple of reasons for retire age of people should be considerably increase. The illumination of these reasons is provided below.
In Recent decade, There is no doubt that people are becoming more and more busy. Recently, studies showed that social obstancles between children and parents is increasing drammtically. While some part of society believe that the problem is due to parent spending huge time at work , other reject this notion. In my view, parent should place more effort in enjoying time with their children special tennagers, who are the fuel of societies
Usually, can be heard that getting proper job depends on graduation form a university study subject or on the other hand having profesional experiance from a certain profission guarante been emploed from desire fild of work. in my opinion its strongle depends on type of work.
Few people think that university should prize students who have good marks and on the other hand people believe it's necessary to Appreciate the students who get into other types of achievement that is sports, music and good behaviour.
In the modern world, everyone needs to think of nature and the government needs to support it. So, in my opinion, I agree with governments would let humans take care of nature in their area. And this essay, I will discuss the benefits of governments supporting people to take care of their environment.
The pie chart reveals the nature of work done by anthropologist of a university after the completion of their undergraduate program while the table illustrates their allowance after five years of working.It is measured in percentages
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