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Although some people might think that reducing income inequality leads to a happier society, I believe that not only it doesn't increase people's satisfaction with life but quite the opposite, it decreases people's satisfaction. Throughout history, we've seen many examples of a socialism type of economies that incerasing income equality doesn't help people grow. It can result in lower rates of competition in companies and a disfunctional economy.
Leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people are better bosses. I totally support second point of view, that leaders should be younger in age.
The diagram illustrates the process of making tomato ketchup which includes several phases.
Nuclear power gives cheap and fresh energy. This essay disagrees with the given statement because they provides harmful effects in atmosphere and more chance for war.
A lot of people think, when you have a lot of money it is important factor to be happy. Humans go to a lot of situation in our life, and they are have a change. In first time they are may be a poor, but later, after strong works they material life is highest. This people now, how to be a rich and poor. And they a objective on this opinion.
Overall, some facilities in Grange park have been updated, but the location of entrances remains the same place. The park has been changed into a more inclusive space where everyone from children to older people can enjoy the park, and it now holds more audience to watch concerts.
Some people argue that the recent global warming and other climate changes are caused by human behaviours. I believe this is true from both our daily lives point of view as well as human's efforts to expand our territories by destroying nature.
In a lot of countries, a rose number of people live in cities than of living in suburbs. In this essay, will explore the advantages and disadvantages of people who live in cities more than those living in the villages.
There is no doubt that these days type of shopping more popular and different way to shop. the question is the figure of customers increasing to buy shopping online? in this essay, I will discuss the impact of online shopping on companies or individuals.
There is no doubt that these days kids has been spend countless hours in front of screen, some people believes that the TVs had bad impact for the kids. I agree, because it may affect thier social skills and also, thier health.
It is believed that figuring out the solution to the environmental issue would be a duty of international organization,rather than a single country,to have a power to solve environmental problems that are posing serious threats to today’s world.However,I think that protecting the earth is the responsibility of both them.
Nowadays, environment is the most important problem with entire world. In my opinion, tackling environment issues shouldn’t be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government..
In my opinion, that is a great chance for people. Because, it makes easy daily life. Many people use the internet to transfer money due to fast and safe. Furthermore, it saves wasting time. Also, it might be more effective for accountability. If you use internet transfer you can see all the transfer information. Even if you make transferred to anyone five years ago, you can find that transfer.
In Society, few argue that product promotion is a huge success in increase their sales, while others reckon branding certain products has become routine nowadays and customers are not interested to purchase based on branding. This eassy is of the opinion that advertisement is the key to product selling.
The issue of whether businesses have a responsibility to wards society is open debate. I partly agree that companies should have duty to society. On the one hand, one of the culprist is that, first, a company have responsibility society will attract the good attention of many people, that is can building an image of the business. To be more precise that is the company will advertise for more than people to know about their products. For example Vinamilk helps children on highlands by proving their products such as every year. As a result, Vinamilk have more than milions children know to this business. Research has shown that the more companies do this, the stronger society will become. On the other hand, the reason behind this is that a small business have alow capital should try to focus to paying worker's wages. In addition, business has to pay taxes every year, which lead to the request for more responsibilities from them to the public could be too much. As an illus...
The issue of whether businesses have a responsibility to wards society is open debate. I partly agree that companies should have duty to society. On the one hand, one of the culprist is that, first, a company have responsibility society will attract the good attention of many people, that is can building an image of the business. To be more precise that is the company will advertise for more than people to know about their products. For example Vinamilk helps children on highlands by proving their products such as every year. As a result, Vinamilk have more than milions children know to this business. Research has shown that the more companies do this, the stronger society will become. On the other hand, the reason behind this is that a small business have alow capital should try to focus to paying worker's wages. In addition, business has to pay taxes every year, which lead to the request for more responsibilities from them to the public could be too much. As an illus...
Nowadays, shopping is the most popular activity for some adolescent people. In many countries especially in cities, shopping has become the best way for teenagers to rest. It is because for many people it is an immediate and easy side and they don't have to plan in advance. I think this is a positive development and in this essay i will support my stand with valid arguments. At the present in many countries or around the world everyone has social media like instagram, telegram and so on. Everyone knows that instagram in trend now, because on instagram different online stores are developing, different tutorials that help in fashion, different bloggers who dress stylishly, kindly and thus young people started interesting about fashion and they started to go shopping or order clothes online. In my view this is a positive development, because everyone likes well-groomed, stylish and trendy people. It is good in your city to dress stylishly and beautifully, especially nowadays all peopl...
Although lots of people believe that voluntary employment of university students can cause lower quality of education in order to reduce their free time which is related to their studies, I totally disagree with this statement. Part-time jobs for students can provide a better quality of community facilities and also help them to manage their finance aspect of life easier.
First of all, In this World there are many families whose have sufficient activities or obligations in your lives, it's for this reason that they don't have time to spend with their children for many grounds, for example your jobs, or maybe because they travel a lot, also there are families who like to live with their children or do some activities for example they go to the cinema or if it's posible that they can play differents games, moreover this activities are very hilarious and interesting because you are sharing great moments with your family.
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