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We are facing issues with our PLS nightly cycle, currently, 15% job completed successfully and rest of the jobs are pending. We are getting an autosys error “exit code -655 Owner attribute error. The user name or password is incorrect.". We have reached out to Autosys admin team and they (Emmanual) suspect a change in ACEADMIN account password which might cause this problem. Moreover, Autosys admin team need the password for this ACEADMIN id in order to fix the job error. We have reached out to Chubb ISA team for this but still waiting for their reply. Not only PLS but DRC jobs are also failing due to the same error. We have created P2 ticket INC21504201 for this issue. IBM helpdesk is trying to reach out to Chubb ISA for this issue. We will keep you posted on this. We do not have any clue about the password changed for this ACEADMIN account. Currently P2 ticket is assigned to Chubb ISA team.
The first pie chart illustrates amounts of the power used for various purposes by Australian households, while the second pie chart gives pieces of information about the amounts of greenhouse gas emission which they caused.
Nowadays, consumption of drinks with sugar are increasing. This is serious issue because it affects to the health badly. This essay will consider the general causes of consumption of drink, before proposing two solutions of this issue.
Health is wealth . The busy schedule and habit of delaying have made it hard for some people to focus on their health. It is important to include exercise in daily life to keep the body fit and away from diseases. The people do not have time to perform physical activity nowadays. Some people might have to work for longer hours than usual, so , there are issues of managing time for a workout. The other reason might be that people are really busy in achieving the career goals that they tend to forget about the goals for a health . As there is huge competition at workplaces these days, people may not find a place to include an exercise routine in their schedule. The problem of busy life may be solved by setting up a routine to perform physical activity with work. Employees who use a lift to reach their office use the stairs instead. In addition to that, performing some stretching exercises during break or while sitting on the desk may also help in improving health. A pe...
Nowadays, technology becomes the part of everyone's life. To use these technologies advertising plays the vital role in the high sale for the products even though there is no need to buy. I partially agree with buying things randomly without any use.
A huge number of people often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in theier lives. I strongly agree with this statement for several reasons.
The bar chart illustrates information about the UK’s and the orld’s share of Scotland’s exports in 2014. Overall, it can be seen that the highest-earning for Scotland came from the business services, finance hotels and restaurant services, whereas the highest income from the export to the UK is chemicals and mineral products.
It is often argued that people these days do job for many hours in a day which cause serious problems not only to themselves but also in the family and social life agree that working hours should be reduced and controlled this essay would discuss the negative effect of working hours on the individual and the families and how it is beneficial to restrict working time.
The people's identity is helped by huge networking companies and unions. I am talking about the good and bad points of this essay. And I will give my opinion below.
Crime is inredibly pelevant these days. Some people believe that each type of crime should have fixed punishments, while some people think that situations of a particular crime and motive for doing it should be taken into cinsideration when being convicted. This essay will discuss both these opinions. In my view, the severity of punishment should match the seriousness of the crime.
Many people think that if older men are fitted to task after the age of 60, it gives many problems. According to this I do believe that it could influence to effort.
Following or even in the introduction (especially if the word limit is small) you want to do a summary of other people’s conclusions to this question. This is called a literary review. It does not have to be a long summary, but it needs to show you’ve engaged with the argument beyond your own opinion and you have understood the different points of view from other scholars. It is very important that you engage with genuine scholars in this. Do not just use the web or blogs or Wiki (another article is coming on how to use Wikipedia). Make sure the people you review are properly certified in their field, ideally with published work and a PhD in that area. This section must be well referenced with accurate footnotes and page numbers showing that you have actually looked up these scholars yourself. In a longer thesis the literary review will need to be extensive. In my MPhil my Literary Review was close to 25,000 words. In a short essay you may only be able to use 100-200 words.
Creative artists from all over the world and time are important players to the development of our culture. They are especialized in bringing up discussions, questions, inspiration and to materialize the imagination in artworks and masterpieces. Although they are often criticised for crossing limits and offending some people, I tend to agree that the governments should not interfere in their work.
The given data shows the population of Japan as well as the percentage of elderly population there from 1950 and also gives prediction till the year 2055. As is seen in the given diagram, population of Japan started to decline after 2005 and after 2035 it will sharply decrease. The population over 65 years will be more than 40% of total population in the year 2055.
Nowadays some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory subject of high school because they think that student should know about the community’s condition. Here I state that unpaid community service should not be compulsory subject of high school for many reasons.
While someone think that we should use traditional methods to solve our problems, others say that we shuold use modern methods. I personally prefer to use new methods as they can be more effective and immediate than older one.
Technology is not just a source of learning, but a solution to many problems. Computers and smartphones have drastically changed young minds. Earlier people were not aware of their surroundings but now you can easily update yourself through these gadgets.
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