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There are more new towns being built nowadays it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for individual to spend their free time to .what extent do you agree or disagree ...

It is true that town architecture should focus the infrastructure while dividing areas for different public and private sectors.some people reckon that public parks and gyms are crucial in town ,whereas I can understand their concerns but in my opinion shopping malls are equally important as other facilities.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the current trend of globalization and new opportunities , world is evolving day by day in a very fast pace. Some masses believe it is better to accept unfavourable situation and go on without changing the conditions whereas opponents believe to work hard and try new things to improve current situation. I believe that hard work can change anything and person should strive for better. On the one hand, trying new things ...
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Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think​ ​it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Goverments Give lots of support to artists has become an integral part of the rising debate of the present world, While proponents of arguments are in favour, However the opponents arguments are completly againts the relevance of the artists help. In my opinion artist promotion by Goverments has more positive impact than negative in the globe.
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree.

With the advent of modern computerization and technology everything which we desire is now only a click away. The rate of online purchasing is growing in sooo fast pace that it may lead to complete shutting of local markets and open air shops. I partially agree with the above statement and will give my opinion in following paragraphs. On the one hand, online shopping provides large benefits as it is less cumbersome n more comfortable. Due to globalization , society is flooded with large in...
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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent, do you agree or disagree ?

Environmental issues have been confronted not only by environmentalists and politicians but also by individuals as well. Some opponents believe that role of individuals is very less in terms of protection. But I believe individuals also play pivotal role in society and it's their duty to oblige by certain rules and regulations . Firstly , rules are made by government and its duty of the individuals to abide by them . For instance governm...
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Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?

The Western citizen’s diet has become worse according to some critics. Some professors argue that they should chage their diet. I personally agree with these suggestions.
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Many people think the fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world , While the propentsof the arguments are in favour , however the opponents are completely against the relevance of the :Topic" , In my ,opinion TOPIC has more positive impact than negative in the globe.
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

From the past to now, technology has impacted transportation which becomes increasingly at an extraodiary speed. Therefore, in the future, all the vehicles will pursue an automatic system and only carry passengers. These prove to be numerous hindrances as out of employment and the security concerns. From my perspective, the merits clearly outweigh drawbacks.
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It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high portion of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The bar chart shows the percentage of the two genders, men and women in wide range of age groups who regularly exercised in 2010. In overall, women accounted for higher percentage than men in most age groups. The two genders show the opposite trend with the changes, as an increase then decrease was shown, while men started at the peak and decreased then increased back.
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In many countries around the world, shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need. Discuss the reason for this trend. Is it a positive or negative development?

Shopping is the favorite past time of many people, especially teenagers. Some consider shopping as a mode of entertainment instead of providing basic amenities to people. This trend is due to globalisation and consumerism and in my opinion, definitely a positive development.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

The Principal problem for had a bad Job, that means that you don't like to stay there so you don't have the disposition to do your job, or to stay good with your boss, so you will be stressed all the days of your life because you are doing Some thing that you don't like, so if You don't stay in your comfort zone you try and improve Such situations you will have two options, one that you can explore new job oferts and know new people, and If you are a dedicated person you will find your dream job and if you are lucky they pay a good money for do your things and the other option, we have to be realistits, the other option is that you will fail on the things that you do, so thats a hard dicition that you have to choose in your lives because It is a thing that you will do all the days on your live, so you have to choose all the correct option, and you have to be a dedicated person, and you have tostudy the platform that you want, so you will be happy.
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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

There are lots of married couples in the world. Some couples think that having a baby at later age but others think that having a baby at early age.This situation has both advantages and disadvantages.The main advantage of having a baby at early age is growing up with a baby while its main disadvantage is not be able to spend too much time with children.
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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Education now become more costly than ever, so thats so many youth do part time jobs with their studies. Students do not give enough time for their studies and juveniles do not score well in their exam. The main cause of there poor background and for tackle this problem the govenments make
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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that international news as one of the school subjects. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the abroad trending, few people feel that high school children have to study global news as one of the acadamic subjects.On the other hand few people think world news to be one among the school subject.In my stand point, providing secondary school children would be more helpful as it would expose them to outside world eventually buidling up more confidence in them.
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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

A high level of crime content is remarkably increasing in the modern world; then it leads to physical and mental problems for the vulnerable children; however, it could solve with the help of government and parenting. The first issue would be physical, since watching TV takes time away from active exercises and more likely to eat high-fat foods. For example, the study revealed that the average Canadian child watches nearly 14 hours of television each week. Therefore, increasing the number of hours of television viewing associated with an increased relative risk of higher cholesterol levels in children. As a result, it will cause obesity, arteriosclerosis, and diabetes. The second main problem will be mental. This is because youth are good at copying what they see; hence their immature and vulnerable brain tends to capture the abuse while playing abused content. The first step will be a strict prohibition of offensive content on social medial from the government. Perhaps, ...
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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this.

Smoking tobacco in public places such as workplaces and restaurants has been banned in some countries recently. However, other countries have not restricted smoking in public. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. However, It might impact businesses income. Some people who used to smoke in restaurants and coffee shops consider that if government restrict smoking in these areas, It would drive customers away and this can be harmful to businesses. Furthermore, critics of smoking ban also highlight the decrease in the government's revenue which earns from high taxes paid by tobacco manifuctures and smokers. If cigarettes reduced, this would mean lesser taxes and lesser revenue for the government. On the one hand, Those who are against smoking in public places claim that passing a law to prohibit smoking in public places can reduce the possibility of second-hand smoke being inhaled by non- smokers. This result in non-smokers might get lung and heart c...
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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

In today&#39;s generation, many minority languages extinct silently. Some people think it is normal and some are not. The idea provokes a strong argument, which I will consider here. First of all, Supporters think it is normal in globalization because it is generally thought that wide-spread language is made communication more easily. This means if we speak few dialects it can lead to communication more effective and accessible. Secondly, learning a second language is can be challenging. If we spoke one language, it would beneficial for everyone, especially in this era. At least we don’t have to struggle to learn a second tongue. On the other hand, when a language dies, the world loses valuable cultural heritage - a great deal of the legends, poems, and knowledge gathered by generations is simply lost. Most historical documents and culture are written in the old native language. This means losing language is not simple, if we lose dialect it leads to losing everything abou...
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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The people acquire knowledge in two ways, it means that the upbringing is informal and the school is formal. Both are influential for human life, but it is not possible to get a complete knowledge of science and theory from the family. I disagree with this view point and I will explain with this essay.   Firstly, education will be obtained from school, which is with systematic knowledge and professional teaching methods, for children. Formal education leads to the right choice for the future, for children. If kids had a good education from school, they would have an effect on their careers. Additionally, in the process of learning, a person becomes a member of society, it would seem that you know yourself and others.  They will know have to deal with extramarital affairs and will understand many different types of communication. On the other hand, school education is based on academic subjects who are based on family support. Ethical and cultural characteristics are inher...
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it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?

Due to globalisation,whole world tend to be single world society.This would helps to reduce the barrier of commerce and language between the nation.This tend has more positive aspect rather negative .
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art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world, however, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. why do you think that is? what could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts

Art has an intangible benefits and depicts traditional scence that has crucial role to play in all cultures globally. Nevertheless, due to advancement in technology, many people are diverted their focal point from art to science, technology and business.
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