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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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📝 Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Caring of children is believed to be an essential job in any society, because every human should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents to some extent. I agree with this opinion.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Teaching children in order to improve their abilities toward the distinction between accurate or inaccurate ways, has been a vital topic of debate. While some people believe that punishment should be considered as a crucial method in this approach, I strongly do not agree with this viewpoint and believe that children should grow up and learn to make correct decisions by appropriate methods such as grounding.

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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Owing to globalization, many people relocate to different countries. Some people claim that immigrants should learn and get into the local living style and culture, while some others think that they should creat their own minority community group to better adopt the new live. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate about which shold be a better choice, which we will discuss here.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that,in today's world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

All schools have many subjects to learn for students, however In the world some people say history is a more important subject in school. other people think science and technology are more important then history. In this both points are very difficult argument. I will explain about both point of views my next paragraph.

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Development in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

environmental .However,others believe that Development the technology and science will help the

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Consumers should be forced to buy electric-powered vehicles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In the 21st century technology has revolutioned the world in many ways either transport industry or Medical sector.In the upcoming paragraphs ,I shall look into this aforementioned argument .I ,personally agree with this phenomenon.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about this?

Rearranging the job area and own house are really essential as well as cleaning and put the right thing in right place also important, a few people say that. I totally agree with this statement because it makes a stress free life and can focus at work without discruction.

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Directors’ large organisations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees. Some people think it is necessary, but others believe that it is unfair

The company must to consider apropriate salary for their employees. While some people argue that it is unfair if the director's get higher salary than new employees, I side with those who feel that the executive leader should get earn high salary.

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Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, there are lots of animal species which have risks to disapear in the world by human impacts. Therefore, some individuals suppose that the government should have policies to save these animals from dying out, while others assume we should focus on the problems of human beings. I believe the benefit of human development outweiths animals saving, in this essay I will dicuss these views.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Big and small Cities are made up of large and local business, and the bigger a business, greater it is potential for growth and investment. While the largest companies obtain the capital to invest in marketing and promotion and hence increasing they chain, in the local business it is a bit different.

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Nowadays individual take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on individual and on his/her family?

Employees, who can afford to themselves to go on abroad to the business trip with whole family are very benefiting by pleasure family support and company. However, relatives may disturb employee from work by manipulating ways.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The provided plans demonstrate various changes that occurred in Grange Park between 1920 and today.

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Modern technology is now very common in many work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

In today's world, new technology is employed in many organisations. Depending on technology is always a debatable topic in conventional society. This essay will explore the changed occured in offices' due to technological advancement and will discuss whether too much relience on tecnology result in more benefits or demerits.

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It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others, however, prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different points of view about to live in a city or in the countryside. It's not easy to say if one is better than the other because it depends on various things.

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Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extiction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

The forests a good for humans and animals because this is very big oxygen resources for all living things.

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People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on community. What are the causes and solutions? ab

Nowadays, people around the world having less time together with their neighbours which is influences badly to community. This issue causes losing social skills, One of the best solution can be organising event on holidays for neighbourhoods.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.

The world is currently experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This could cause major problems that can possibly affect our future. In the paragraphs below, I will go through each of the problems and the solutions.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,living in a foreign country has become very common and popular but some people that it cause many serious problems ,also practical problems.certainly agree with this view and in this essay, I will support my idea with some examples.

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Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities or towns it leaves only old people in countryside. what are the problems of this issue? what can be done to solve this problem?

In this present day, migration is one of the heated topic. Specially, younger generations are migrating from urban areas to big cities or towns leaving only older people behind in the village. The principal problems caused by this move out are lack of young workforce in countryside as well as burden on older parents, and two possible solutions are well paid employment oppurtunities and better education system policies by the government.

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Some people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life. Others think there are more important factors (hard work or luck). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that have a good consideration is one of the important factor to being success. Others think there are more important factor. To consider the example of successful person in my life, I believe that there are more important factor to success. The factors od being success is unpredictable.

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