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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

As per the observation in many countries that, students are not willing to learn about science as a subject in their academic programs. In my opinion, young people need to know about the science behind the environment to prevent from the cause for the future.
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Some people think that the goverment is responsible for crime prevention. Others think that it is individuals responsibility to pretocet themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to increase rate of inflation and population , which promoting the crime rate .There is a debate between netizens that government needs to decrease the unemployment rate and giving the free education or loan facilities for students while others arguing that individual needs to learn some self defence techniques to tackle the crisis.This essay will discuss why its neccessary for government to reduce the crime rate.
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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

The is no denying the fact that many people replaced the news, from newspapers or watch Tv news programs to take the information of news from the internet.
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In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

While it is widely claimed that large amounts of foods are wasted across the globe these days as a result of the abundunce of food supplies to match demand of the skyrocketing number of populations, others argue that the keys to tackle with this concern is to emphasis on the detrimental impact of this issue. The aforementioned posible contributors and solutions to this concerning development about food waste will be elaborated on in this essay.
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals often argue that a person's culture and character can be found out by their selection of clothes. I believe this is true because of the fact that people usually purchase garments according to their tradition and also according to their religion. Besides, clothes also helps to understand the nature of the humankind. This essay will discuss how human life is affected by the selection of clothing.
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Some people believe that annual exams are best way of assessment while others believe that regular appraisals are better. Discuss advantage and disadvantage of both.

Some individuals believe that conducting annually assessment system is better to examine the students performance, while others think that exams should be introduced twice in a year. Although former method measures the in-depth strengths but long term time span also causes stress, latter group have several chances of getting the high score still they have to compete with inadequacy of time.
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Some people think public library is necessary, however, others believe that the public library is useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

There no denying the facts that people are not on the same mind when it comes to library.while it is commonly held belief that local library is must there is also an argument that local libabry is not significant. In this essay I will analyse this topic from both point of view and express my opinion .
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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it too late to do something about it. other think that there is still time to take effective action. discuss both sides and give your opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Modern civilisation has been influence damonstrably negative on habitats of a number of animals and plant, in resent decades. It is undeniable that some damages are in giant size, albeit I believe there are some measures to mitigate this current danger situation, will now be discussed.
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In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

Nowadays, people has limited time to spend with their children in several countries. There are two key of reasons such as busy and lazy. This habbit will have more negative effect for children rather than parents.
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ome people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that kids should begin studying when they are really small such as at the age of 5. Despite the fact that others argued that children should start studying formal education more than 7 years. This essay will discuss both views in detail and explain why i reckon that little ones should begin studying when they are 5 years old
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In many countries, the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Speaking a second or other languages rather a mother tongue in a foreign country makes speaker to face a lot of serious social problems, besides practical problems. I totally agree with this idea because immigrants may find it difficult to make communications with others also they become overwhelmed as a result of searching for social credibility among natural speakers.
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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinge upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I am JOSUÉ BALMES AGUDELO PATIÑO, identified officially with a citizenship card from Ibagué, Colombia No. 14.230.923. The aim of this statement is to openly express my desire to sponsor my daughter, who is called MARIA LUCIA AGUDELO MOTTA, identified with a Colombian citizenship card 1.000.713.456 and passport No. AS407908. I will explain the personal and professional reasons to support my daughter to carry out her studies.
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Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other planet, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is widely believed that the governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while the others argue that they should concentrate on solving problems on earth and I also support this opinion.
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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe/regard it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the advancement of technology is regarded can be increasing crime by some people. Whereas, in my point of view the crime can reduce through technology.
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Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school while others belive that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are baised opinion on transportation service for children to school where some people states that government is responsibe for transit. However, on other hand some people believe that parents should personally drop off and pick up their children. prior giving my opinion both the views would be discussed further.
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Nowadays technology in increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras) .in many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that the technology has become a main part of our lives. in other words, the gradually updates of development has discovered by the scientist in the modern days. However, the service works harmfully on the people live within monitoring the persons movement and daily life requirements. In this essay, I will explain the merits and demerits in my view.
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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The theme of this essay, if the family still use more the convenience foods or more prevail preparation food.
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the most important aim of science be improve people lives to what extend agree or disagree

The in no denying the fact about the important of the science and the grow of technology make the lives of people better.
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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's worl, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether pupils should be learn history or science a lot. While history provides variety of advantages to our world, I believe that science and technology subjects are more important in schools.
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The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argue that encouraging people to live in cities rather than countryside is the solution for the traffic and transportation. This essay is totally agree with that motivating indiveduals to live in the countryside is much better for the transportation. I believe that decreasing the number of people who lives in cities and staing under the minimum number of the capacity are the main solutions for the traffic.
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