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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some school are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, While other schools have a very relaxed dress code. (What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?)

There are several school that put too much focus on school uniforms and the style of their pupils, however, the rest have a low standard about dress code. It lead not only benefits such as disipline and cost-effective but also demerits such as comfort and creativity.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, many people argue about what is the advantages and disadvantages having an elderly population. Some supporters believe that it has some benefits, others do not. I strongly consider that a young country has many advantages than ageing countires. In this essay will illustrate why I disagree by giving examples.

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The plans below shows a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the maps information by selecting and reporitng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the blueprint of Porth Harbour from the year 2000 along with the outline of todays map.

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The plans below shows a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporitng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the blueprint of Porth Harbour from the year 2000 along with the outline of todays map.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulty getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Most of people in our society are not pleased to be falling asleep. The main problem this cause is that workable personal do not pay attention for their daily schedule and the most viable solution is a strongly following of healthy regime, which should correct sleeping time.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people are under impression that travellers to other country ought to pursue local customs and behaviour. Contrary, another idea told that the householder must show the hospitality and accept another culture.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say that study of the past help us understand the present.

People have different viewa as to wether studying history is a futile pursuit or learning history plays an integral role in providing better concepts to understand present. While there are some drawbacks of baing aware of historical information associated with watse of time, l believe that its potential benefits can weigh a greater weight.

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Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently, while others consider that they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the drive to produce a good productivity, there is conflict regarding the business should enrol people who is more on individualistic or cooperate individuals. Any way, I believe that in terms of efficiency, both are important to the companies. In the following paragraph, I will explain on both views in detail.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Children use computers from an early age and spend long hours both disadvantaged and advantage. The topic has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. In the following essay, i will discuss more some of the disadvantages and advantages.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the drive to produce a better world, there are conflicting regarding whether the authorities should let the people be paid higher wages or restrict them. I believe that individuals should be received a good amount of payment.

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more and more business meetings are being conducted online rather tha to person.what are the advantages and disadvantages

In recent years the trend of conducting business meetings online rather than to person has grown significantly.Through by the advancement of technology made it easier to arrange meetings on online by different kind of applications as; zoom meeting,google meet e.t.c.While there are clear advatages to this trend and also has some notable disadvantages.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the reasons that cause stress, and effects

It is an irrefutable fact that, in the contemporary world, stress become the main barrier to. the growth of different countries. Such a trend comes with alot of problems, which demand immediate consideration. This essay will analyze the reasons like the competition level and the high inflation and the impact of these problems on human beings such as mental health issues in the upcoming paragraphs along with examples.

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The line chart details participants according to activity at a social center in the Australian city of Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.

The line chart illustrates the number of participants in various activities at a social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of people argue that Olympic games are captivating events that bring country together. Others have opinion a waste of cost and the money can be acceptable spending on other things. There are same benefits making tournament Olympic games not only it can cooperate different countries with the competition. And It also got a relationship by joined the events. However, it requires much money to develop sport facilities.

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In many countries, the level of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The increase in crime in certain society has been changing during the last century on different scales. Every nation has a specific socio-economic system which is the main cause of inequality worldwide ending in a vast number of crimes due to the poverty nowadays. This essay will discuss the different causes of crime and how individuals can manage them to reduce their consequences.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. Whatare its causes, and what solutions can solution

It is an irrefutable fact that in the contemporary world, children are facing some health problem such as obesity which is usually find in adult individuals. Such a trend could bring about various problems,which demand immediate consideration. This essay will examine the reasons like use of mobile phones and eating processed food and solutions for this trend like more physical moments and healthy diet by using examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Human activity has a damage to different plants and animals. Some people strongly support that is cannot be changed, whereas there others believe that, with persistent working to improve this situation to better side can be taken a change to positive side.

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

We live in the world that has a various cultural difference. Cultures have been occurred due to maintaining the habits and routines of people who lives each other in society. On the other hand, culture is affected by religions, wars, circumstances et cetera. Cultures influence the values of different ages. Every person has a great value and that is not discussible. However, according to some cultures, old people have a higher value than youth. On the contrary, other cultures value the youth more. As a result, we have a two sort of cultures to giving value on different ages.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can couse serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays the rate of emigration has increased significantly and knowing a foreign language plays an important role in that. Moreover, speaking in other languages can be so hard and cause serious problems which depend on that. Honestly, I believe the differences between main languages are so important and maybe can cause many huge problems and put migrators in bad troubles.

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Some people think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Other working people think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Childrencare is a controversial issue nowadays, so some folks prefer centres for nursing their children, while others dislike the idea of centres also they encourge the notion of keeping kids under supervision of a family members like grandparents. In this essay, I shall elaborate on also I reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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