IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 289

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision.

While we are living in the renaissance era nowadays and the internet becomes available in each home , thus it has led to some drawbacks which are reflecting on the children, in this essay, I shall elaborate on , also I shall reveal my point of view.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

In last years, many people leaved their rural town and moved to cities. This phenomenon identified in many countries around the world. From my point of view, this phenomenon represent a positive development for some reasons.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication hurts young people's reading and writing skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days the digital devices are one of the most important communication method . The question is , dose the increasing usage of these devices like mobile phones and computers affect? in this essay I am going to explain many different reasons for how these devices can be an ineffective for young reading and writing skills for young age people .

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The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The argument on use of physical money over plastic cards has been happening for certain period. because, credit card is new mode of payment considering traditional payment methods. some individuals are under impression to continue use of paper money over card payments. In my opinion payment using card is easy and safe in current upgraded era over carrying hugh cash.

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All parent want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

This dabate whether today's curriculum need to enrich real life skills or not have sereval serious arguments from opposite angles. Some people claim that children should lern more theoretic knowladge in school, while I believe to gain some skills is more facilitative for children future.

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Several discussions surround the opinion that gaining overweight has becomed negatively impacts for public areas, especially wealthy lands. However, while people continually conflict about this issue

Several discussions surround the opinion that gaining overweight has becomed negatively impacts for public areas, especially wealthy lands. However, while people continually conflict about this issue, this essay will shed light on the matter by showing both sides of the equation have their positives, albeit a stronger argument showing both reasons and measures for this risky situation, which will be presented in the next paragraphs.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In contemporary society, some argue that personal price tag is judged through social achievements and material possessions. While some believe that the worth of a person is priceless qualities like honor, kindness and trust are more necessary. Due to these statements, this essay below will illustrate my personal perspective about these problems.

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Many manufacturered food and drink products contain high lever of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In these days, obesity phenomenom became a very serious socity obsticle, one of the main causes is sugary products. So, some argue that the sugary consumables must be very expensive, while others believe that the main soultion for this problem is found in the consumer behavior. This essay will discuss both views and will draw my personal conclusion.

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some people usually appreciate others according to social status or material possessions and they think ol-fashioned values include honor, kindness, trust are not important in the digital era.

In the present day, some people usually appreciate others according to social status or material possessions and they think ol-fashioned values include honor, kindness, trust are not important in the digital era. I will give my own opinion in the below paragraphs.

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People all in modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologist’s claim that parents and other society members often set a bad example. Discuss the causes & some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern-day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Using drug trendings are a new normal norm among adolesons whether are illage or legal allowances. Some sociologist believe that parents and others label using drug as a chain of negatives. This essay will show the media influences as the reason and educate the drug awareness in early schools.

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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?

In all time of history perants words had a huge impact on their children. So, some argue that the kids must be told and tought that they can not live in their perfect dreams, and they will give up on that, while others belive that they can be told that they can achieve their targets as long as the put an enourmes effort in it. In this essay I will discuss both ideas and will draw my personal conclusion.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In the future, things in stores using cash will be not paid by people, with all payments may transfer to via cards or mobile devices in my opinion. It looks like it will happen as soon as. I am going to explain the purpose in this essay.

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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you thibk, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

"Working from home" has become an integral part of rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. While components of the argument, are in favor, however the components are completely against the relevance of the working from home. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a situation and draw a conclusion.

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hildren should take part time jobs in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

Children should do partial work in their leisure time or they should totally pay attention to their studies. This essay will discuss and articulate both the aspects merits and demerits along with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this opinion?

These days the many of people imortant in the popular events . So , some people think support of the idea because that filling for their habitat and making another chalnnage between their . While other belive that makes a lot of enemies . This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my opinion .

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

These days many well-qualified white-collar workers from medical, engineering and information techies from low-settled nations are moving to well-settled nations for high-salaried positions in big multi-national companies. If this practice continues these low-settled countries will lack good talented professionals who can help this nation to grow.

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Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some indivisual claim the it is good to advice young children to have a heallthy diet at school while others believe that parents responsibility to educate their children to have a healthy food. This eassy will discuss both aspects and articulate the given problem along with my opinion and logical conclusion.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Exploring far-flung natural places can bring more benefits to visitors despite one conquerable downside. By travelling to an island that is unknown to the vast majority of people, for instance, travellers may have a chance to participate in exotic religious practices and experience a whole new way of life. Although such a trip could be potentially dangerous with climatic differences or animal attacks, these risks can become less serious with the aid of modern technology such as drones or heat sensors. It is therefore believed that visitors should take a trip to novel destinations for once in their lives.

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The char below gives information about science qualificatiin held by people in two countries.

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals with science qualifications in two nations (Malaysia and Singapore)

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Some people think that children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while others believe that adults should prevent them from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are a number of people believe that children can be freely to make mistakes, while the rest think that adult must prevent them from wrong action. Children who have freedom tend to development in education and health field, however, it also make them become perfect and have impact on social and technology. In my opinion, prevent children from making mistake is best way to live.

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