IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 401

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries are claimed to be unimportant as people have access to see historical objects or art works by computer. In my opinion, that action can be categorized as a form of disrespect to the artist, specifically if we view it illegaly, who may had painted with all their money and tears.

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Advantages and disadvantages of working abroad. Why do people prefer to work abroad?

Nowadays, working abroad is one of the most discussed issues among people. Residents leave families and countries looking for more profitable occupations in other countries. In fact this phenomenon is not only positive, but also negative. The following essay will present all the merits and demerits of working overseas

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the world faces a lot more environmental issues than it did in the past and many are increasing rapidly. It is believed by some that the main environmental issue currently is related to the extinction of animals and plants. While others think there are many other major issues to be considered. In the following essay I will be discussing both point of views.

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What is the reason of increasing the number of population in cities?

Cities around the world are getting larger, for majority of modern residents prefer to dwell in urban areas. From my view there are both positive and negative sides of this process. This essay present all the merits and demerits of this issue.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Kids are nation builders, and how we are developing them is going to decide the future of the country . However, it is found that offsprings are being distracted and losing control over studies. Although this could be a result of electronic gadgets and social pressure, implementing mindfulness and cocentration in school curriculam makes things better.

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News plays an important part of most people´s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Nowadays, news have a significant part of most individuals lives, so the news are in tv, papers, magazines , internet or socialmedia in every moment, in every city and country.

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Share your academic and non-academic accomplishments (applicable to undergraduate and vocational students) and any relevant industry experience (only for vocational students). Please elaborate on the processes and skills you've acquired during your previous or ongoing degree program.

I believe discovering joy in learning encourages individuals to approach challenges with unconventional ideas and cultivate innovative solutions. Hence, medical school did not stop me from pursuing my passion. In the past two and half years, I have built a socio-health platform while maintaining my 3.61 GPA. I am grateful because my platforms, Little Scientia and Healthy Higinia, allow me to resolve health-related social issues such as dietary problems and impaired children development directly. Various institutions appreciated my efforts, and I have been awarded funding grants four times.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that clothes can represent about a person’s culture and character. but I argue that type of clothes isn’t link to about a person’s culture and character. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

People nowadays seems to judge people's worth by their status in a social community and their wealth. As a consequence, this new kind of judgment left the old-fashioned values behind. I agree with the new opinion becuase it can open up new opportunity for people to fullfil their needs by making friendship with the rich one.

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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that using laptops and mobile devices may downgrade children's reading and writing abiltities.I disagree with this phenomenon because technological devices has actually improved their writing and reading abilities in these days.

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some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

These days every country use the methods which investigate about it to use in its education system. These methods depends on cultors and countries aim to build its structures. Some people belive that this way which focus on learning facts and not spend enough on learning practical skills is not correct method. I completly agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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Children are having some problems at school and home. What are the causes and how can the parents do to help them?

Children are the backbone of every nation. They are facing some troubles at an educational institution and at home due to learning plenty of subjects, hectic timetables and chores. However, the parents should support and guide their little buds to manage all these. This essay discusses briefly for the following reasons.

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Online shopping has become more popular than before.Discuss causes and effects of this trend.

In the last few decades more people started to use online shopping such as Amazon than in the past. There are some advantage and disadvantage for buying goods in internet. For example it is easy that they do not have to go to buy products. However, we might get bad quality products than buying the products in the store; therefore, these arguments will be important to understand for using these apps.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether zoos should be closed down or not has caused a lot of controversy. Some people believe that zoos are cruel to animals because they disrespect the right of animals and are very dangerous to humans, however, on the other hand others argue that they can be important in safeguarding wild animals. I personally side with those that are against the closing down of zoos.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn. Discuss both views and give your option.

Salaries play a crucial role in people's lives. In a few nations, some mankind gets a high salary. Whether some think that it is fruitful for nations, others say that the authorities should control and limit the wages. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinion is divided whether students should have their own to pursue tertiary education or be compelled to study subjects that are more relevant to the future such as those associated with science and technology. From my perspective, I advocate to the first view albeit some benefits exhibited in the remaining point.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A share of individuals state that museum and art galleries are not required due to people have chance watch these historical objects or art masterpieces online by computer. Partly, I agree with the statement.

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Diagrams illustrating the current planning of a university's sports center and its proposed future plans.

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Some people think that modern technology has more negative effects on our lives than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern epoch, A boost of technology has a direct impact on our lives. modern technology have a lot of pros however, some folk suppose that modern technology has a host of catasrophic effects on our lives. So, I dissagree about this arguee and now in this essay, I will explain why.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent doyou agree or disagree with this statement?

In life individuals have the right to have preferences. Various people claims that currently they have admit a lots of options. In my personally opinion, I agree with this statement about at present society faces very much choice and it has positive and negative sides. I am going to talk about the positive side before moving on to look at opposite side.

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