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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people choose to learn many foreign languges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

A lot of people want to learn many foreign languges. The pros exceed that of its cons. This essay will discuss both advatages and disadvantages in detail.

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Nowadays most of the parents are working which lead to harmful effects on their children. what are the causes and result.

Adults work so hard to earn money for their existence, especially when they have family. However, this phenomenon creates a negative impact on children. In this essay, I will examine the key factors behind this dangerous effect and the consequences.

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international tourism has bought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is cconcern about its impact on local inhabitants and environment. Do disadvantage outweigh the advantages?

It is believed that a large proportion of the globe depend on tourism to generate income,

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the role of science should be to improve people's lives. Although I agree with the statement above, I believe that scientific advancement must not limit itself to the extent of people's livelihood. This essay will argue that although satisfying people's needs is important we must acknowledge that scientific advancement must also go beyond human-centric conception.

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some people think that girls should take husband's name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition.What is your opinion?

Whether a women keep their name or partner's name after wdding is a matter of personal preferrence. Few individuals believe that after getting married lady shouldd take their spouse's name and others think that no need to stick to the ancient custom. In this essay I would like to explain why i believe it is not necessary to change the label after marriage.

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In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits.

An egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and opportunities. I agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society. Education is an essential factor in personal success in life. All children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for those pursuing a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities and be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.

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Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

Whether a women keep their name or partner's name after marriage is a matter of personal prefferences. Few individuals believe that after marriage women should take their spouse name and others think that no need to stick to the ancient custom. In this essay i would like to explain why i believe it is not necessary to change the name after marriage.

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In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, when our society is in the stage of rapid development, a tendency can be observed to drop in number of people who feel anxiously. It is agreed, that the main reason for this issue is that a bunch of responsibilities and requirements press on them. This essay, firstly, will discuss why depression became common among people, followed by an analysis of solutions wich can be suggested to overcome this emotional problem.

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Violent TV-shows and aggressive video games should be banned on governmental level. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more violent video games and TV-shows have became popular for general public nowadays. Some people think that it is too aggressive and would be banned by authorities, but I desagree with this point of view. This essay will discusse about this subject to get reasons for this.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think is a positive or negative develompent?

While digital realm is enormously developing, it is largely seen that hours spent on smartphones are considerably staggering, especially by children. In this essay, I will examine the background pertaining to this issue and elaborate on why I find this occurrence as a negative development.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This park's north entrance is located near Arnold Avenue, whereas the south entrance is close to Eldon Street. The park has a rose garden in the northwest that has never been destroyed since 1920. The park has changed since 1920 to the present day. Now, I will depict some differences between the two pictures. In the past, a stage was manufactured for musicians who were fans of art and music, whereas nowadays, a modern amphitheater is built instead. In the old park, the seats were located around the park, but now they are concentrated in the center around the central rose garden. Today's park is more pleasant for children because of a special children's play area. Additionally, the park's instructors pay attention to teenagers and have built a café for them instead of a rose garden. People can park their cars in an underground car park, but in the past, these facilities did not exist.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The practice of awarding children financially for their labor work is popular in many areas of world. While some individual opposed this practice, others consider it as a worthy exposure, which can be vital in terms of getting education and involves in maintaining day to day life. However, I believe that one should encourage juveniles toward these lifelong experiences as they prepare them mentally for the upcoming challenges in future. In forthcoming paragraphs, I am discussing both points of view in details, while, elaborating my opinion in this matter.

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Many Offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle these problems.

We live in this era where criminals tend to carry out more problems after their first punishment. These issues can be defined into the primary specific matters which are an going light retribution and crimes after-care issue. Therefore, a detailed probation period and self-development program in the cells are the answers to these issues.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over past few decades, individuals trained with professional skills such as medical and engineering are offered with a broad opportunities to work outside their countries, due to the continually-surging need of professional workers. Many believe that those people need to be encouraged to take the offer, while others oppose this view. As for my personal perspective, I believe that every individual should not work overseas.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own idea (in words, pictures, music of film) in whicever way they wich. There should be no government restrctions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days many artists show their products without any restriction from government or our society. Under this circumstance some people think that government do not need to take action for handling this problem. However, I firmly disagree with this idea because this issue have a negative influence on our society and also it makes decrease worthy of arts.

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“Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The role of parenthood should be equal, mothers deciding to have the baby, often leads to them controlling how the child is brought up. It is agreed that both parents have crucial roles but ultimately the mother has the most influencial role. In this essay, I will discuss how the mother and father's influence is crucial on an offspring, but generally, mother's have the most responsibility in the child's upbringing and spend most of the time with them.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think is a positive or negative develompent?

Certain children wasting hours everyday just to use their smartphones. This can lead to bad impacts in which they can not grow well. Based on my opinion, There are 2 reasons regarding this matter. First, the lack of parental monitoring, and second, the development of technologies have been improved nowadays.

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Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a gorup, rather than learning it individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of individuals think that learn somthing in a team is better than learn in lonelyness. I completely agree with this idea and I will explane with some examples in this essay.

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In some areas of the UD, a 'curfew' is imposed, In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Criminality does not wait for new victims, one of the easiest aims are teenagers avid of knowing new experiences and rebels with paternal authority. As a consequence, most of crimes are committed by them impairing a brilliant generation. To face it, in some areas of the UD, curfews are implemented. This alternative results thought-provoking by sectors of community. In this essay, it will be elucidate some positions and a personal opinion will be provided.

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Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

From my point of view, I believe that technology has done so much good for people in every field. On the contrary, it has made it worse. There are numerous negative effects of technology related to mobile devices, automobiles, computers, and other gadgets.

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