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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people argue that technological inventions, such as smartphones, are making people less socially active. Do you agree or disagree?

In this technological era,various advancements are being made.Most popular of them are innovations in mobile phones and various types of apps which multitude are using .Some people opine that invention of mobile phones has made people less social active. I am at logger heds with the statement and I will discuss both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs before arriving to relevant conclusion.

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Many people work long hours, leaving little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In modern society nowadays, the majority of workers spend a lot of time working everyday and just a little time for spare-time activities. Although this has several advantages, the drawbacks may be more far significant.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Working in firms for finely paid and having prosperous life is all people wanting now-days. Professional life is an important part of our lives and everyone must experience it is any case of the social and educational backgrounds. There are disagreement wether a person should work in the same organisation until she/he retires or should change her/his job as needed. Both point of view will be critiqued before reaching on a logical conclusion.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Listening to music has always been an enjoyable activity for people from all walks of life. No matter how old or of what social status you are, you are likely to spend a couple of minutes listening to music every single day. The question here is whether this can improve our relationship with other people or not.

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ONLINE SHOPPING IS SIGNIFICANTLY INCREASING. WHAT EFFECT DOES THIS HAVE PEOPLE, WHAT ARE THE DEMERITS AND WHAT ARE THE JOB OPPORTUNITIES?

All people know that online shopping’s popularity is growing day by day. Nowadays majority of products are ordered online, not in real life, because if you compare this with buying in real life, then it is many times faster. For example you don’t need to look for a product in the whole store for hours. Instead of this you can find what you want by one click in online markets.

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We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions?

We are currently in the age of total consumption which is resuliting in spreading amount of rubbish all over the land and oceans. Diversity of approaches towards the Earth's state and distinct lack of recycling factories that surely cause the problem, may be a good foundation to cope with the global waste difficulties.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to flight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Apparently there are many natural disasters happening around the world as consequences of climate change. Some people suggest that global warming should be tried to combat, whereas others think people should accept the current fact and adapt to changes. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays, harnessing energy from the sun is gaining popularity as a major power source in households. This development emerges because people are getting conscious of current environmental issues. Although it is considered to be beneficial to the environment, many believe the technology is too expensive and unreliable. This essay will extensively discuss both aforementioned gains and losses of using solar energy as electricity generator in residences.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Nowadays, some people assume that zoos bring no benefits to our world and should be stopped. In fact, there are one problem zoos bring is keep animals in cages and one way to replace if zoos closed is move animals to national parks. In this essay will discuss about these sides.

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Children weight are increasing over the years. What are the reasons? What can be done?

It is true that an increasing number of kids are getting overweight these years. There are various reasons leading to this problem but steps can definitely be taken to tackle it.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Elderly people are to be taken care of, this could be the duty of the children by virtue and obligation. They end up at Care Centers or Old Age homes when they are felt as a burden to the children or to the Society from a government's point of View. A nurse at such a place can provide the required medical care. In this Essay I will provide my thoughts on the matter with relevant examples.

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Many parents, mostly mothers, stay at home to take care of the house and look after children. Many believe that the government should pay them a wage for this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Child care is the parent's responsibility and often they, mostly mothers, sit at home to do that. Some people think that this work should be paid for by the government. In my opinion, every couple made a decision to have children and they have to think about the future. Analyzing both sides of this question will show it.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the neoteric era, the development of technology is vital. However, some believed that the burgeoning of technology causes the extirpation of traditional cultures. I somehow concur with the idea; however, I almost entirely contest with the notion. A spotlight will be focused on both sides on the ensuing paragraphs.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the neoteric era, development of technology is vital. However, some believed that the burgeoning of technology causes the extirpation of traditional cultures. I somehow concur with the idea; however, I almost entirely contest with the notion. A spotlight will be focused on both sides on the ensuing paragraphs.

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Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally accepted that as children are quick learners, they are more likely to succeed with foreign language studies than adults. For this reason, it is nice to learn languages early on, and I agree with this point as children tend to learn everything we teach and have more time to improve their language skills.

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Children are love to push themselves to try to 1 and be better than their classmates they work together for everyone profit do you think that Vantage outweigh its disadvantages

The relative importance of competition and cooperation is a frequent topic of discussion, when people try to explore the primary aim of education. These days, competitiveness is encouraged more than cooperation. My stand, however, is that both competition and cooperation are equally important to be instilled in children. Therefore the disadvantages of teaching children how to compete at the expense of cooperation are more. There are many reasons why competition is important for children's growth. When children are pushed to compete, their unlimited potential can be tapped. This also helps them to develop confidence. Pressure and competition is all around us nowadays. ln achieving academic excellence as well as doing well in one's career, every person has to compete. There are many examples of people around us who have become successful in their lives by competing in sports events or music contests. At the same time, many educators attach great importance to cultivating coo...

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some beneficial informations was stored in books before the 21th century.Currently, with the recent technological advancements paper treasures is available in the Internet.Actually, this essay will suggest advantages and disadvantages of online reading.

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Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the governments fund huge revenue on every celebration in different countries. Other people believe that the governments could invest in something more profitable. In my opinion, I agree up to a point.

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Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing,discuss the causes and solutions.

Ways of living in towns have drastically transformed in a positive or negative way this essay will discuss the causes and offer solutions to it.

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The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction?!

For years now,the advancement of technology has create a huge impact in our social life.Several people assume that the network will never take over handbooks in academic places.In this essay, I will elaborate on this statement by giving examples and my opinion.

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