IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 624

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many parents, mostly mothers, stay at home to take care of the house and look after children. Many believe that the government should pay them a wage for this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Child care is the parent's responsibility and often they, mostly mothers, sit at home to do that. Some people think that this work should be paid for by the government. In my opinion, every couple made a decision to have children and they have to think about the future. Analyzing both sides of this question will show it.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the neoteric era, the development of technology is vital. However, some believed that the burgeoning of technology causes the extirpation of traditional cultures. I somehow concur with the idea; however, I almost entirely contest with the notion. A spotlight will be focused on both sides on the ensuing paragraphs.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the neoteric era, development of technology is vital. However, some believed that the burgeoning of technology causes the extirpation of traditional cultures. I somehow concur with the idea; however, I almost entirely contest with the notion. A spotlight will be focused on both sides on the ensuing paragraphs.

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Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally accepted that as children are quick learners, they are more likely to succeed with foreign language studies than adults. For this reason, it is nice to learn languages early on, and I agree with this point as children tend to learn everything we teach and have more time to improve their language skills.

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Children are love to push themselves to try to 1 and be better than their classmates they work together for everyone profit do you think that Vantage outweigh its disadvantages

The relative importance of competition and cooperation is a frequent topic of discussion, when people try to explore the primary aim of education. These days, competitiveness is encouraged more than cooperation. My stand, however, is that both competition and cooperation are equally important to be instilled in children. Therefore the disadvantages of teaching children how to compete at the expense of cooperation are more. There are many reasons why competition is important for children's growth. When children are pushed to compete, their unlimited potential can be tapped. This also helps them to develop confidence. Pressure and competition is all around us nowadays. ln achieving academic excellence as well as doing well in one's career, every person has to compete. There are many examples of people around us who have become successful in their lives by competing in sports events or music contests. At the same time, many educators attach great importance to cultivating coo...

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some beneficial informations was stored in books before the 21th century.Currently, with the recent technological advancements paper treasures is available in the Internet.Actually, this essay will suggest advantages and disadvantages of online reading.

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Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the governments fund huge revenue on every celebration in different countries. Other people believe that the governments could invest in something more profitable. In my opinion, I agree up to a point.

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Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing,discuss the causes and solutions.

Ways of living in towns have drastically transformed in a positive or negative way this essay will discuss the causes and offer solutions to it.

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The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction?!

For years now,the advancement of technology has create a huge impact in our social life.Several people assume that the network will never take over handbooks in academic places.In this essay, I will elaborate on this statement by giving examples and my opinion.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the cause of this ? what can be done to solve this problem.

Natural environment was disturbed by increased human production of goods. Most outputs made up by natural such as products of wood, sand, wool or stone. Generally speaking, human could protect our nature.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life other think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People are doing work to complete their essential need such as shelter and cloths, food. Most people are prefer to do work in same place in whole life however, individuals think that that it is good idea to change organisation work place. In this essay i will discuss both aspects and I give you my opinion in coming paragraphs.

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Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With it’s increasing popularity and effectiveness, the Internet finds itself being used extensively in almost every household. When it comes to accessing news, majority have shifted from depending on newspapers to the Internet, while some sections of the society still stick to reading newspapers. Yet, most people cogitate that newspapers will stay as the most prominent news source. This essay explores arguments strongly against this idea, giving analysis as to why the Internet has convincingly replaced our traditional news source.

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The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

Advertising plays a crucial role in helping sell a number of goods to consumers. Some people believe that selling large amount of products to certain buyers is directly related to to how much the product is advertised in most cases ,even though, in other few cases the actual need of the people is also important for a product to be sold. In this essay, I will argue why advertisement is such an important tool for selling a number of goods to consumers and how powerful it is in increasing revenue of a company.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Today many people are priortise and feeling more comfortable in renting houses,because of inflation in real estate market rates. This essay will give an outline and discuss, some of the prons and cons of renting a property.

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Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the development of internet technology, a lot of online chat application emerged, lots of people like like it, because it provides a new approach to communicate with others, and than make friends. Like most of new stuff, it usually brings some problems, together with benefits. In this essay, I would like to disscuss the pros and cons of it, and give me opinion on it.

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Gone are the days when children dreamed of becoming doctors and nurses – today’s children want to become YouTubers or vloggers. According to a survey of 1,000 children aged six to 17, more than three quarters of them say they’d consider a career in online videos. It is dangerous for kids to aspire to become a YouTube sensation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There was a time when every student dreamt of becoming either a doctor or a teacher but nowadays the scenario has reversed and becoming a YouTuber or a vlogger is in trend. Approximately 75% of youngsters consider their future in online videos. Through this essay, I will discuss this change of shift and will give my viewpoint on it.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this mordern era , many individual rely on the technical devices for their work . Use of the computer by the youngsters as daily routine have many drawbacks then benefits . I totally agree with this statement .

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Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Give advantages and disadvantages of the TV. Include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Communication can occur between two or more people. In my perspect, I am not agree that television is destroy the conversation in the groups of people but internet is. Television is suitable for older age people more than worker age or teenagers.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, some people are imitate person who are look good in lifestyle ,so they buying a unessential things that make yourself look better. No-brainer people only care the sight of other human.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Nowadays, education for children is very important, especially about the issue of teaching children how to differentiate the right thing and the wrong thing. And there are arguments about whether or not parents and teachers should use punishment as a compulsory method in delivering that goal. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the use of punishment and I suggest other good teaching methods which can help students know the right thing to do without suffering from punitive measures.

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