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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram shows the steps involved in a company’s HR recruitment process. Overall, it explains the process for applications and selection of a successful candidate.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is true that the rural areas are facing a declining trend in relation to the proportion of their residents as a vast majority of people from countryside are immigrating to big cities. I consider this development to be disadvantageous.

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Nowadays, many people prefer eating out rather than cooking at home. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

At the moment a lot of people would like to eat out rather than prepare meals at home . In my opinion, many people would like to eat out so I would rather advantage of the former view.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified food is a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

There is no denying the fact that the shortage of food can be a debatable subject. While It is a commonly held belief that some individuals believe that one of the possible solutions is genetically modification. there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that being rich does genetically modified food will dominate the food sector.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both view and your opinion

It is argued that one of the school material people should learn is History. Meanwhile there is another statement that studying Science and Technology is more important in today’s world. Personally, I agree with the former viewpoint because learning about past could enhance our values in life than focusing on some sci-tech (Science and Technology).

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Given the significant developments in technology, it is thought by many that the demand for purchasing hard-copy versions of newspapers and books will vanish in the future. However, I firmly believe that newspaper and book sales will maintain their sales market regardless of the rapid advancements in E- books and other electronic devices.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health issues. Sugary products should b mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

It is obvious that people are more inclined to suffer from life related disorders due to the consumption of food and drinks with mor sugar. Therefore, these products should be sold on high prices to steer people for healthy alternatives. I strongly agree for this argument because not only being reduced availability but also being unaffordable for the public. This essay will discuss profoundly to justify my notion further.

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In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?

Some people think that in today societies, the lack of respect towards older people represent a real problem, and we will study the possible reasons for this.

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Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Several factors including upcoming technological advancement and an emergence of social medias have resulted in more socialization via the medium. Moreover, improved transportation aggravated in interactions within the different societies. This way the original language of those seems to be decreasing every year. With such condition, some believe that it is okay to be with minimal communication medium. While the others think there are risks involved with such situations. I too consider to converse in our native language is essential and need to preserve.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other believe that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

While it is argued by some that advertisements have been playing a key role in convincing (the) consumers, others believe that advertising has recently become so frequent, that it cannot entice the costumer's attention. I firmly believe that companies have been increasing and maintaining their sales market by applying up-to-date methods of advertising, rather than abandoning it.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is argued that many people think that the old generation's traditional ideas of living is not good for the new generation's development in modern life. While I agree with the fact that the traditional way of keeping up with life is ancient and ancestral expertise, I totally believe that they also have to adapt these techniques to the new world, so I believe that the old contemporaries has a role in our growth in modern life.

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Children nowadays are experiencing health issues, which were previously believed to be exclusive to adults. Obesity, a significant health problem, is widespread among young individuals. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present, obesity is one of the major health challenge to adolescents, moreover, in the past decades people thought that, that disease it's only for adulthood.However, personally, I believe that children become obese due to eating sugary and fast foods and government should impose clear restrictions of not allowing humans to eat such food.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

Nowadays, the number of humans trying to cure themselves by using natural medicines is increasing from time to time. In my opinion, tit means negative development for the country.

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new trchnology and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. to what extand do you agree or disagree with this opinion

I strongly believe that the way people buy and sell products already changed due to the development of technology. This is because technology is able to give a positive experience either for buyers on exploring the details of products or sellers towards the time of selling.

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Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that Celebrities personal lives should not be recorded for the media. In my opinion, the public has no right to know about the various lives of famous individuals.

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It is common for people to travel long distance for work and study.Some argue that longer commute times affect people in a negative way while others disagree. Discuss bothe views and give your opinion.

Even though people are very busy with their jobs as well as studies, they may experience a longer commute time.some people state that travelling long distances for work or study brings negative effects on them while others hold the opposite idea.In my point of view, it depends on the outcome of one's career commitment.In this essay, both views will be analysed to draw a conclusion.

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The top priority of bussiness is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, the enterprise should have a responsibility, which is to support some activity for inhibit local. However, there is some corporations that are not allowed regulation by the government, which will impact the infraction. I personally disagree with that statement; the business should be separated from the budget for social responsibility.

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is often thought that studying in single-sex school provide children with the chances to learn academic information, other people claim that students tend to be more social when they study in a different-sex school. In my opinion, I consider that studying in co-education environment provide students with more benefits.

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Some people think that children should be educated at school about paying taxes and personal budgeting in order to help them better manage their finances when they are older. Others think that parents should teach these things, and that children will understand taxes and how to spend money carefully through life experience in the future. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, there is a group of people who believe children should learn financial education at school, while others think that this is task for the parents at home. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument, and also why I believe that this subject should be learned at school.

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It is common for people to travel long distances for work and study. Some argue that longer commute times affect people in a negative way while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We live in technology age and have different gadgets. Many special programs and some technologies support us and make our live easier every day in some different parts like cooking, conversations, important or funny things. Education and acquisition of knowledge are not exceptions.

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