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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

People do not just go to museums to enjoy an art exhibition only, they want to see also the structures, history and aesthetics features of a local museum, which varies depending on each geographical area. For example, a Western museum is surely different from a museum in an Asian country in terms of building materials and also the ways artworks showed there. If online artwork could satisfy art connoisseurs or history enthusiasts, art exhibitions showing Van Gogh paintings would not be sold out quickly. For those who really know how to enjoy a piece of art, there is nothing that can replace the real-time interaction between the viewers and the real art work.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it is a common belief that unpaid community service ought to be a compulsory part of high school programmes. However, I only partly agree. I will shed light on my opinion in the following essay.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree! Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expenence.

Nowadays, people are swayed to buy products because of the powerful advertisement that companies uses, despite not needing these products. I agree to this notion as there are a lot of businesses utilise social media influencers to promote almost anything, as well as confusing consumers with graphics online to make them visit websites.

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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that riding motorcycles for young individuals under 24 must be banned due to the reduction of horrible deaths caused by horrific road accidents. Althrough, I agree that national authorities should establish safe driving laws in order to reduce crashes, it is unnecessary to prevent young people from driving motorcycles.

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Some people think robots can improve human life in future, while others think robots may affect society in a bad way. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology become a part of our lives, and every day we see big changes in technology improvement.

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The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products.

The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products. Looking from an overall perspective, there are 8 steps in the process, beginning with harvesting, and ending with purchasing of coffee products.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

There is the number of people who thinks that schools should focus only on academic success and help students to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught in schools. They state, that these skills can be developed by parents as well as by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples.

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Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Time is precious and many successful leaders consider it as a gift. Some people work long periods of time for their success in their career, while others think that spending time with family and friends is more important. The following essay will discuss both views and provide my opinion.

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In today's fast paced wprlf, many individual struggle with delaying tasks. Discuss a cause of this and suggest an effective sokution to overcome it.

In nowdays life, many people have procrastination habits and it effect a lot to their career. The root cause of this is having problem with time management, yet it can solved by organize and break the task smaller.

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While some think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides

One school of thought holds that the issue with education in economically disadvantaged countries is the method used, while others think that the ironic problem is the insufficiency of financial resources. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favor the former notion.

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Additcted to internet is a widespread problem. What problems does it cause ? What is a suitable solution?

A concerning trend has emerged with regard to be addicted by the internet around the world. The problem is attributable to the parental skills and lack of confidence, but can be addressed by enforcing parents to take responsible to mitigate the amount of time which is used.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think is the cause for this? What a possible solution can you suggest?

The high rate of criminals commit more crimes after being released from jail is reportedly increasing. The underlying cause for this is that the punishment given to the offenders is not strong enough yet it can be tackled by implementing a psychological approach for the criminals.

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33.Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some say that when individuals travel, they should respect the culture of those places, while others believe that people should accept and welcome other civilazation and their way of thinking. This essay would argue that although experiencing other cultures can allow people to know more, humans should accept how individuals are.

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Some students.take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or to work.

Today, some graduates prefer to take a gap year prior to furthering their education at university.While this decision is not without its downsides. I believe it is largely a sensible choice.

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Today children spend a lot of their free time watching TV. Do advantage outweigh the disadvantages if this practice?

It has been argued that children watch Television for long hours in their spare time, this activity will bring negative impact to their health and children do not have productive time.

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Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the Contemporary rapidly changing employment landscape, employers recruit workers in many ways. Some people understand that an interview is a very Convenient method to choose an employee while others argue that there are some other methods which should considered. this essay will delve deeper into this context, presenting arguments and examples to provide a comprehensive analysis.

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prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse to what extent do you agree or disagree

I strongly believe that this academy is best suited for me because this university was established in 1828 and is one of the oldest universities in the UK. This university has received 5 QS stars in excellent facilities, the various facilities provided by this university such as 3D scanning, an Additive manufacturing laboratory, an Advanced composites workshop, an Advertising studio, an Aerospace workshop, an Alston observatory, Analytical laboratories and many more. Even though, all the information provided on the university website is very clear therefore everyone can understand it very easily.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree ?

A countless number of scientific studies lend support to the confirmation that myriad highly processed food and beverages containing a massive quantity of sugary substances can be a contributing factor to various detrimental health issues. With the aim of discouraging individuals’ sugar consumption, it is well asserted that manufactured sugary products are supposed to be rendered overpriced. From my perspective, I partially accord with the proposed regulation.

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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because thay will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In modern society, it is always debatable whether population should read everything online without paying, some argue that smartphones do actually make our lives more convenient, while others think that authors have the right to charge for their creativity. Under essay will discuss this topic.

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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, fast food is the choice for a number of individuals because it is easier to serve and ready to eat. In my opinion, I strongly believe that there are a number of drawbacks from particular fast food, such as high sugar and fat content can lead to numerous diseases.

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