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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, there are many medicines and treatment which are available for everybody. So they refer to them whenever they have some disease or any issues in relation to their body health and use them. In my opinion it is a negative approach and have several adverse impact on them.

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All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school.Use specific reasons to support your answers.

Modern life appears with its blessings and curses.There are always hot issues that demand personal opinion and individual approach .One of those issues concerns students' study of music and art in secondary school.There are always three opposite parts of opinions two polar opposites and a neutral one.As a person, I partially agree that students are among the supporters of music and art. And this position should be discussed and proved in the coming lines of the essay .

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having an own house is considered more significant instead of paying rent for a temperary accomodation by an array of masses in some nations because they believe it is a symbol of prestige. However, there are many drawbacks of this concept, therefore I strongly believe it is not always critically significant to have a home by own, hence, I will examine both reasons and negativities in this essay.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, there are several opinions about closing the zoos because people think zoos are literally a waste. While the others believe that zoos play a vital role in the world and they shouldn’t be closed.

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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Indubitably ,a large number of the population in cities live in houses with little or no courtyard space. Even Though, a segment of society seeks it as a positive development, however, I will elucidate my opinions in the upsurging paragraphs.

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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

It is admittedly true that children can easily learn from others whereas it is not mandatory what object they are learning from such as TV, people , environment, family friends so on. some kids are learn from watching TV which good way to learn but schools should not use TV to teaching kids. In my opinion, I completely disagree with watching TV in school. In this essay, I will discuss how efficiently teach a child.

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some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as televesion, friends,and music.others believe that the family still remains more important.discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Clearly, family has a crucial role in children’s development. Although, some

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Obesity around the word impacts two children. Give your solution.

There is no denying the fact that obesity has a significant impact on our society. It is a commonly held belief that being overweight affects children badly all over the world. This essay will discuss the doable solutions for it.

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in some countries ,it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet, do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

following vegetarian diets now very common in some places, althought it has a lot of drawbacks due to you do not get more protein and lose your weight which some people like to remain fat,however it has good affects on our body in term of mentaly and physically .

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Other, however, believe that boys and girl benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Gender is always an interesting topic. Especially in the education, some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in seperate school. On the other hand, I beleive that boys and girl benefit more from attending mixed school. This essay is going to clarify these opinions.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some politicians often attribute the demographic characteristic of a country to the country's economic performance. In particular, if the nation is constituted with a majority of young adults instead of a retired population, an economic growth is often being expected. Nonetheless, can this point of view withstand any testimony?

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

We can divide countries as per developed, developing and poor according to infrastructure facilities and any other guides relavent to categorization. Most governments spend lot of money for railways than public roads. In this essay, I would like to briefly explain the reasons; for fully agree with this topic.

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Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reason for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is smoking tobacco considerably increasing its popularity in younger society. It is undeniable that smoking tobacco has become an essential part of our lives. However, these days even the younger generation started to use that kinds of abysmal things.

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The beat way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any examples.

The whole world is in one plane now with the blessing of technological development. Even it is people have no enough time to learn about other cultures and values. Working in a multitude of companies is the best solution to getting an idea about other citizens as it facilitates moving with them easily. Hence it is I completely agree with the given statement and hope to discuss it in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether children should study all subjects in school or they should choose especially which one they want to know is still discussed issue. Some individuals discuss that children should take course in special subjects which they desire for that. In my opinion, kids should engage totally with all subjects. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide reasons for both sides.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that ther money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Doyou agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many issues cause negative in the world. A number of issues are everyone spends a lot of money on space research every year. Besides, some individual thinks that everyone needs to improve their living standards from this money. I disagree with the idea and will explain the reason why.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams depict the information about employment levels divided into genders in the United Kingdom measured in 1988 and 2012. Overall, the number of men working full-time jobs decreased while the situation with another sex enhanced.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In contemporary society languages play an important role to exchange the feelings and ideas each other. Speaking a non-native language could be caused to generate a number of despites as social or practical. In this essay would discuss what are the negative and positive impact of them. I strongly disagree with the given statement.

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Should the government support artists, such as musicians, writers, and painters? Is it economically benefical or is it just a waste of money? Why or why not?

Is it sensible for the power to fund troupes, including musicians, writers, and painters? Is it an economically sound decision or would it be a waste of money? In my opinion, a supporting list will surely contribute to a rise in the economic curve. This essay will discuss the benefits of supporting artists.

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

It is widely believed that sooner or later human beings will overcome language barriers to come to unity and use the same language. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement for a variety of reasons.

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