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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is concurred by many that, governments should devote additional funds to science and technology to develop the nation.However, some believe other subjects have equal importance.I greatly agree with the first statement ,science is an integral part of any country's development and it has improved the life of each and every person in various aspects.I will discuss both viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary era, many would argue that to serve your county is absolutely necessary for the young generations. There are many countries where it is obliged to serve in military forces not only young men but also young women. However, as it can be seen in today's world, it also have been many countries which are not having the army at all.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research business and academic world.while others believe that some information are too valuable to share, discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been a controversial issue: some people think that sharing knowledge about business,technology and education is beneficial while others disagree due to concerns about private information .Although hidden pieces of information and methods have many pros for the development and growth of nations and companies.I believe that this is a positive step to share piece of information and discuss globally for the betterment of technology.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Success can have different meaning for different people ranging from being rich,having a good relationship to be successfull in job or education.There are some ways in which people can achieve success but a large group of people prefer to gain it through occupational and educational opportunities,so do I.

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your family has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his or her parents will be making to your area in the near future. reccomend a place where they can stay suggest the place they can visit offer to do somethng with them

I received your letter yesterday, and I hope you and your family are doing well. Also, I would like to thank you for my suggestion to select a vacation spot for your parents.

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in studies. what are the causes and the solution?

The extreme pressure to study hard has left many young one’s with lack of idle time. This situation is caused not only by parental pressure but also by the limited job opportunities. The plausible solution would be reducing the pressure and government should provide volunteer work.

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in studies. what are the causes and its solution?

The extreme pressure to study hard has left many young one’s student left with lack of idle time. This situation is caused not only by the parental pressure but also by limited job opportunities. The plausible solution would be to reducing the pressure and government should provide volunteer work.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Some people believe, it is crucial to maintain the places that you work and live; and everything has to have specific place. In my opinion, this trend is considered to be positive compared with negligible negative aspects. This essay will provide my personal opinion.

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Opinions on food are changing rapidly and there are many who believe that everyone chould follow a vegetarian diet because it would have a positive impact in our health and the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Discussion regarding the type of food for diet, is a global topics of all the time. Lots of community believe in vegetarian diet for better health and environment. I totally agree on it.

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Some people believe that sending childern in boarding school at a very tender age is good to what extent do you agree or disagree

Home is considered to be the first school of the kids . Few individuals assert that this is a novel idea to send them to residential schools at a very sensitive age . In my opinion, they will not get the love and the warmth that is required at this crucial age but if your child is a spoiled brat then it can be a boon for them

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LEARNING TO MANAGE MONEY IS ONE OF THE KEY ASPECTS OF ADULT LIFE. HOW IN YOUR VIEW CAN INDIVIDUALS BEST LEARN TO MANAGE THEIR MONEY

Money plays an important role in every individual's life. Learning to manage money is something that virtually everyone must do as the ability to maintain a balance between income and expenditure is essential for a stable life. In my opinion, there are several ways members of society can learn to control their budgets.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Over the last few years, more and more people are suffered by a sleep deprivation. There are some underlying factors behind this trend. However, some practical measures could be taken to resolve this problems associated with it.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large portion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Argument regarding "high taxes" is a global subject in the coffee shop. Some people support high taxes on their salary and some are not. But there are views from both of the sides. I will share my opinion in the conclusion but before that, i would like to discuss on both negative and positive parts.

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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valuated by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Science and new technology are highly intensively discussed topics in the last years.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that setting high prices for gasoline is the most efficient way to tackle issues which is related to traffic congestion and contamination.While it seems the truth,I partly disagree with this assertion.

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You shoud spend about 40 minutes on this task. In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative developmant?

It is a common trend for many rural residents worldwide to migrate to urban areas, resulting in a decline in the rural population. This situation has both advantages and disadvantages for both the migrating individuals and the small towns they leave behind.

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Children in rural areas are being left behind in their academic development.why is this the case . What solution can you suggest

Education is an integral part of human lives, people should have all rights to get a quality of education. Children are being moved to the urban places from their home village tremendously for their academic improvement. There are some reasons behind this phenomenon and some feasible solutions can be reduced this. This essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

Amount of customers in developing states who are buying cars for the first time have increased. The main problems this causes air pollution and raised road traffic, and the most viable solution is well-designed public transport system.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that professions in entertainment industries are such a lucrative job, with proponents suggest that the revenue that they receive is beyond average. I tend to agree with this statement, and I also believe that there are other well-paid jobs related to science and medical fields.

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If a product is good or it meets people's needs, people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our society, we used to consume some products with good quality or utility without seeing their advertisements. I strongly agree that buying a product that we need is necessary without watching the promotion first.

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