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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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the line graph ilustrates the supply of goods transported in the united kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by road,water,rail and pipeline.

The line graph depicts the information regarding the furniture that was shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different means of transport.The data is calibrated in total oodles.

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects better for children's future.

Some people argue that schools should teach children skills however, as for others having a variety of subjects is better for children's future. I strongly believe that these both sides are beneficial for them. And attend to one course would be great.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences arethe key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the social concerns today relates to reducing traffic accidents. Commonly suggested that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. However, others believe that it measures would be more effective in inproving road safety. In my opinion, the goverment has to strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.

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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of them are of the opinion that the government is spending more money than needed on art and this has become a serious issue of argument lately. In my opinion, it is necessary that funds should be allocated towards art in order to preserve the cultural heritage of the country and encourage young and creative artists but in a reasonable manner rather than splurging.

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The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic.

The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic. It is clear that there are a total of 13 stages in this linear process, which can further be grouped into collection, preparation and productions steps. Additionally, a range of specialized pieces of equipment are utilized in this process, although the main raw material is plastic.

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Travelling abroad is a common trend nowadays for different reasons.This essay will discuss two main reasons for this cause and point out the negative impacts that would have on Society.

Many people often in more developing countries travel more and more abroad. The democratisation of travelling for tourism in foreign countries is one of the causes of this upward trend as well as the globalization more generally, with for example the delocalization of companies abroad.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the areas that governments must invest in is the transportation sector. Some people believe that they should spend more money on the railways section than the roads section. It is disagreed that governments should spend money on railways.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantage of technology outweigh the disadvantages

This day, most people using social media to stay updated to their loved ones and other people. I positively agree with this ways to communicate to others.

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

The world is changing fast as a revolution of nanotechnologies in many countries. In this day and age not only electronic furniture, and gadgets are popular but also worker robots became famous. Using it at companies works even houses for relieving tasks for housewives. I believe this civilization is largely equal to positive and negative.

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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activitis which usually involve very little risk To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mass media needs to control the quantity of unsatisfactory information they portray since it dispirit individuals from performing activities that have minimal risk. This essay totally agrees with this statement. I believe that discouraging information effects on human performance, even if, this exercises are not dangerous.

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People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people have different opinions on whether is it important the minimum age for driving 21. In my opinion, except in certain cases, I largely agree with the notion that people should have at least 21 years old because of the knowledge factor besides this a lot of traffic.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

There is no denying the fact that these days there are plenty of places in the world that earn money from tourism. However, tourism that is not well managed can be a huge source issue. The following paragraph will elaborate benefits as well as drawbacks with a responsable conclusion.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Certain individuals believe that rivalry amongs peers should be inspired. However, others consider that youngsters who are educated to collaborate with others rather than match are going be more useful when get older. While competitiveness is healthy and adequate it should remain in the part of children development.

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In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?

In many nations, the older generation does not receive enough esteem from the younger ones. Reasons such as the changing of peoples’ lifestyles gradually and the advancement of technology might be why they get less attention, and lack of awareness causes many negative consequences in communities as an ill effect.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Often shopping is considered a form of waste of time, but it is maybe the most common and less toxic way to get out from our stressful routine, and not only for a juvenile. While someone could relax drinking a bottle of wine, other ones could prefer spend money in useless objects in order to have a moment of fun. We should not criminalize this behaviour, it is strictly linked to our nature as human-beings

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Some people feel that entertainment (eg film stars, pop musicians and story stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of Jobs should be highly paid.

People who work in a profession destinated to entertain other public often have comfortable lives, with a lot of advantages, and high earnings. It is certainly because film stars, football players among others, generate tremendous revenues for cinema industries or for football clubs. Conversely, some professions which appear more important or crucial for the society don't have necessarily the recognition they should have.

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Some people think that technological development can reduce crime, while others think that it would encourage crime.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are controversial perspective heating debate over how technology affects crimes.While some claim that technological advancements help reduce the number of criminal activities, the opposite makes the statement that it actually increases the crime rate.While the latter is valid to some extent,I would consider myself an advocate of the former.

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Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The education system has evolved a lot in this competitive world. There is a group of society which thinks that one should go for higher studies to attain more in-depth ability whereas some people support practical expertise to prosper in their future.

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Some people believe that animal should be allowed to be eaten and experimented on while other think they have equal right as human being, discuss both views and your opinion.

It is often argued by some that ought to permit the slighter of animals as well as for the experiment, it is not a problem. Others argue that animals have the same rights as mankind, they similar living things. While critters should treat nicely and give their rights. I believe that beasts are the best nutrition for humans to take as a meal and should use for testament.

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