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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that there is an increasing desire among people to become entrepreneurs, instead of working for an employer. In my opinion, I think owning a business and being your own boss comes with great advantages, yet the amount of responsibility will be far greater. Many people wish to start a business of their own, one day, for the benefits it will provide them. Being your own boss you are totally free to make any decisions, you are in full control of every transaction that takes place. From choosing your business strategy, flexible working hours, to mobile working conditions. However, this will not be possible for workers, as they need to check in and out with their finger prints. On the other hand, people starting their own business will be at a higher risk. Many business owners end up shutting down their businesses because they did not succeed. Whereas, being employed you will maintain a steady income with no risks what so ever. When launching your business ventures t...

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The plans below show a school library five years ago and the same library now.

The two maps display a school library and how it has changed from five years ago until now.

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Some people think that schools are merely turning children into good citizens and workers, rather than benefiting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is indeed a fact that the primary focus of schooling is to a good national and workers instead of emphasizing on themselves as a human. I certainly agree with the statement and this essay will discuss the logical reasons for my agreement.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The two plans below illustrate the sites of an airport now and after redevelopment next year how it will look. Firstly, while we look at the current airport, we can see there are a total of 8 gates for the entrance and exit of the passengers. While entering the airport they need to overgo the security of their passports. As they pass through security checkups, they can overlook cafes and check-in sections and at ,last they can see one departure gate. Comparatively, after ,redevelopment they will be seeing overall eighteen gates for entrance and exit. When you enter you will be seeing shops. After ,that as you go through security you will see that cafe and check-in sections have been rearranged and additional bag drop sections have been added. Also instead of one departure ,gate there will be two.

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The given pictures compare how the area in New Zealand named Youngsville changed during a period of 25 years between 1980 and 2005.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on health care system in an effort to deal with health issues involved.Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lession in the school curriculum.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch,a greater section of society suffering from obesity.Therefore ,they are more prone to have co-morbidities such as , diabetes,high blood pressure and thyroid.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, with enormous, competition it is necessary that students should be well-equipped to enhance their knowledge with such information available to them. Implementing this worldwide information as a part of the curriculum will help the students to enhance their knowledge and encourage them to perform globally. Having knowledge about what’s happening in the world will give students broader prospects in terms of knowledge and the current scenarios throughout the globe.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The development in technology has led some businesses to generate new ideas of advertisement. In order to gain more popularity many businesses make people think that their product is new some how.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The future of AI is within reach, with the potential for automated vehicles to drive themselves. This essay supports the belief that the AI market will flourish in the near future, granting people control over these machines. It will explore the pros and cons of driverless technology.

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

It has been argued by many individuals that in bygone days most teenagers have done illegal activities in big cities around all over the world that is increasing continuously. This essay shall shed light upon the various reasons along with some ways to address the issues in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive ora negative development?

Over recent years, smartphones have become ubiquitous in many societies, and it is common for children to spend several hours a day using them. While some argue that this is a positive development, I believe that it is a negative trend that parents must take responsibility for.

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Every country in this world has problems with pollution and damage to climate environment. Do you think problems can be solved?

Pollution and climate change are major issues affecting cities globally, and responsibility for these problems lies not only with governments but also with individuals. By taking necessary steps, both parties can work together to save the environment.

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The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to the society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A rise in the number of aged people has been seen in the society. It is to be believed by some people that this age group of people does not contribute to the society by any means which will hamper the growth of the country. I have a biased opinion about the above statement which is discussed further.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that the frequency of advertisements is rising in our daily routines

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The following plans show the layout of the university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It has been a part of a debate from a decade that art as a subject is equally important while studying at school for child’s development. However, the other perception totally contradicts this idea because it results in lack of focus. This essay firmly describes both the views in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays, education quality is very low . Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers . Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the class room . Discuss both sides.

In the modern world, the quality of education in people are decreasing . some assume that scholars should always ask questions and check their tutors' abilities. Whereas , others think that censuring the crew' capability can owing to lack of respect towards their lecturers . This essay will discuss both views along with my opinion.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, top priority has been given to public security due to its significance in maintaining social order. In the meanwhile, whether young criminal should be punished same as adults is debatable. Personally, I hold the opposite view about it.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The debate over whether sharing information related to science, business and academic subjects is useful or not matters. On the one hand, some people believe in publicizing information. On the other hand, others believe that such information is too valuable to be accessible to the public. I, however, tend to agree with the second group for a number of reasons. To begin with, it is vital to take the usefulness of the first group’s approach into count. It can be that for the college students to access scientific researches easily. Particularly, seniors need these resources for writing a thesis and articles in their last year of study. Moreover, it is considered that more people can be informed by having an easy access; as a result, this can increase the level of literacy and knowledge in each society. On the other hand, others are opposed to the former. They believe if ordinary people could know all the subjects in these areas, mental security of the society would b...

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People are divided in their opinion regarding if a high salary is more crucial than job comfort. I strongly disagree that gaining more money is more important than being in a satisfactory work, I will state the reasons for my view.

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