IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 852

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence.

Nowadays hunting the job and its opportunities is more and more challenging and become competitive among peer. Therefore, the undergraduate students are looking for experiences in advance before attending the tertiary education. For those who learnt with kinesthetic learning have both of knowledges in classroom and practical experiences, they can absorb and have more understanding the lectures than who has not gained the field experiences. However, a few people has their opinion that early age experience is highly influence to the youth when they make professional study.

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat

I hope everything is good at your end. How is Molly doing? I know it can be a hectic routine for a mother with a newborn. Wishing her a speedy recovery from the surgery.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view ?

unarguably, art is one of the important factors of human cevelezation this why some nations spend financial aid on developing art; altough, others incloding myself think financial aids should be spend on improving anpther areas and sectors that may be more helpfull for each country. This essay will berifly explain the reasons.

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Preservation of traditional culture has been a controversial topic for a century, that teenagers should conserve the local custom, differently, some people consider it as the personal behaviour. In my point of view, I totally agree with the statement that the traditional way of life deserves to be sustained by the new generation because if the local culture is not maintained, it will definitely become extinct. Furthermore, the world might lose the diversity of civilization.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

one of the most controversial issues today relates to Employers they ask for people some information such as hobbies or their private life like what their interests for in this essay, l am going to examine this question appropriately and why they apply kind this question some clients effectively from both points of view and then given my own opinion on the matter on one side of argument there are a human who argue that the benefits for academy life and it crucial maybe the person well take better opportune for example he during take changes like good work I believe I see allot of a situation like this, considerably outweigh its disadvantages there complied have a mission to check for there private issues identity also data information nonetheless the main reason give to support this claim is that before five years there is low company stole majority their customers because there trust them and give them private in general despite in other world I could disagree more even like the a...

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Life has many up and downs; although some individuals prefer to avoid these challenges in their life and stick to their ordinary life some on the other hand, think new shifts are necessary and are mostly beneficial in the course of their life. From my perspective flexibility would help us to be more blest in our life.

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Printed materials are disappearing, and more and more E-publications are taking over. What are some of the advantages of E-publications.

E-publications are a growing trend nowadays. In many ways, E-publications make our publishing process easier and more convenient to do. This essay focuses on some advantages of e-publications

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In many countries paying things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, technology became an essential things in human life such as internet and mobile phone. The majority of nations purchasing stuffs by phones such as online banking and PayPal which is being normally now. In the following graphs will be discussed in detail about advantages, before a conclusion is reached.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Public believe that creating competitive environment in current scenaro can be fruitful to the growth of the kids. However, Some protagonists opine that mixing nature and sharing qualities are more vital to grow maturely. I particulary think that Children must be nurtured with care and creating competition among themselves can be deteriorated.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

Sweets is one of the major taste buds in human tongue but an excessive amount of sugar intake could lead to health problems. Moreover, many produced food and drink products were with a substantial amount of it. Thus, this brands should increase their price to encourage people to eat minimal sugar. This essay agrees with the statement mentioned above and will discuss the aforementioned.

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Nowadays, people get information through news and paper, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or corrospondent have?

In today's world, data and papers are a common source of getting information about the world however some people have doubts regarding broadcast. Everyone should rely on the authorised editor and a person should be eloquent in language to be a perfect reporting staff.

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Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should be believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or corrospondent have?

In today's world, data and papers are a common source of getting information about the world however some people have doubts regarding broadcast.Everyone should rely on the authorised editor and a person should be eloquent in language to be a perfect reporting staff.

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In some countries,governments are imposing heavy taxes on fuels to solve environmental problems. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach?

It is true that some nations are raising fuel prices to alleviate the ever-growing environmental issues. While there are positive environmental effects of it but this step certainly has drawbacks for the economic growth of society. On the one hand, the policy of increasing fuel costs definitely helps to control the environmental menace by restricting the number of private vehicles on roads. To elaborate, motor vehicles exhaust obnoxious gases such as carbon monoxide, carbon dioxide etcetera in the atmosphere. Also, these gases are the prime cause of air pollution and the increasing temperature of the earth's atmosphere. Thus, if the fuel costs are hiked, the average commuter prefers the public transport which has a low carbon footprint. Hence, it makes the earth less prone to global warming and mankind to perilous respiratory diseases. On the other hand, drawbacks are associated with it. In most the nations, goods and commodities are being transported from one prov...

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Some people beleive that excessive use of modren technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every story has two sides and modern technology is not an exception. While some people believe

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Many people do not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that mass media provides substantial information to society through newspapers and electronic news yet the validity of this information is doubtful. I believe that people should not have unflinching faith on journalists, and an ideal correspondent should have many traits. Although journalism has delivered vast information to society, people should not totally believe the information or news published by journalists. It goes without doubt that there is a stiff competition among journalists to reach the best rating view or to be the fastest to provide news. Because of the competition, they tend to do everything including manipulating the data to make the information sound more sensational. They usually deliver information as fast as they can without doing deep observation and interview to ensure the validity of the data. It results in the invalidity of the data and information they spread to people. Every kind of profession requires certain qualities, so does jo...

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case ? what could be disadvantages of being self-employed

In the changing times of today, more and more individuals try to involve in the business sector day upon day instead of living in a gigentic firms or MNC. Because self-employed offers for high income and freedom of work. However, it should not be forgotten that this trend has some message with pitfalls too. I would explain my viewpoint in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree

Nowadays it is quite easy to find prisoners doing activities including unpaid community work. For instance, a book about the influence of the volunteer work had been published, then some people believe that it will be great for prisoners. It is agreed that prisoners should join unpaid community work. Analyzing the effect of satisfaction for prisoners, as well as a low claim rate after doing volunteer work.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

From past to today, agriculture industry has achieved to gain important developments. Especially, in terms of efficiency, nearly an increase of 30% was recorded compared to last two decades. Despite all these positive sides, hunger issue plays a serious problem. According to the scientific studies, almost 1/3 of the world is to face with insufficient feed.

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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favour.

Nowadays, Smoking cigarettes is forbidden in public places, like restaurants and offices, in some countries. On the contrary, other countries prefer not to impose laws against using tobacco in public buildings. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay and reach a conclusion.

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Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? Should this be taught in schools?

It is said that children should be ready and learn how to have presentations in public at schools. This would be mainly because speeches become an inevitable part of work and education lives. Undoubtedly, the presentation acquisition at school would be easier than later.

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