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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some parent spend a little free time with their children today. Why is it so? Why do you think this affects more, parents or children?

It is generally acknowledged that parents share little leisure time with their children in contemporary society. This essay will outline why they do not have enough time to spend with their children and illustrate the impacts on children.

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Some parent spend a little free time with their children today. Why is it so? Why do you think this affects more, parents or children?

It is generally acknowledged that some parents have a little leisure time with their children in contemporary society. This essay will outline why the parents have a lack of time with their children, and suggest why such a trend influences children more than their parents.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In the days before, the massive amount of the population had been chosen to go to their work physically. however, by adding devices and the Internet to the core of our lives many ideas are changed. so, people are trying to do their jobs from other places like home.

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schools should force children to learn a foreign language. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

These days people are keen on learning more than one language. At ,schools kids are learning minimum of three languages. In my ,opinion it's good to know native languages it helps them to communicate with any people across the world.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parenting is a huge challenge for any married couple ,especially how to shape them for the future or if their children's behaviour is worrisome how to tackle this issue and so on? It is believed that adolescents should be boosted by their elders to participate in well-managed exercises in their spare time, whilst it is considered by some masses that it is crucial for teens to allow them to know how to engage themselves on their own. In this essay, I will explain both views along with reasons, and examples and in the end will make my personal views.

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The demand for food is increasing worldwide. Why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation?

Today people consume foods more than ever before and this desire resume to get larger all around the globle. There are some reasons for this trend in my mind such as population growth and economic growth in different pary of the world. Nevertheless still people and governments of the world are able to stop this dramatic growth which i will explain in detail in next paragraphs.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that senior citizens of the society has many benfits to new generation and country. Although old people may be considered as burden to the society, they play imperative role in shape the young population. In this essay, why old people are valued in one society while youth in other cultures, will be discussed.

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Some people think computers and internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some feel that it is important for children to study by utilizing computers and the internet. but, others suppose that it is much better for heirs to go to school and learn with teachers. The essay will discuss both sides of view and I will elaborate my perspective following the paragraphs before leading to a logical conclusion.

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Many people believe social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Technology developments are increased last decades and that affect our personal habits. Social Media is one of the important spending time activities these times. Nowadays, we all use social networking sites such as Twitter and Facebook. Researches show that almost every adult spends at least 30 minutes on social media. Some people believe that these sites have affected individuals and society both. I completely agree that social media has an impact on our lives.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people's lives, especially in the field of education. Nowadays, an increasing number of recruitment rely on computers to research for information and to produce a perfect paper for school purposes. Others have decided to leave the original way of learning to get knowledge through online schools. These changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible decrease of importance of crew in the classroom. Some people believe the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original classroom. For example, in the same classroom, recruitment have different intellectual capacities, thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others’ incapacity of understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own pace using com...

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Some people think computers and internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Computer and internet is the lifeline for the gobal connected world. Although internet and online technology has not yet reached to each and every human in globe but it is enough widespade to safely assume that it is almost everyware. Nowadays, because of this corona virus pendamic schools are being forced to continue via remote learning. As an aftereffect, in many parts of the world people have experiancing the pros and cons about this new way of learning. However, some individuls among us argue that in-person study is always better then online eduction and we should switch back to original metod but most belive that we should keep utilizing this new way of study. Both sides have merits in their arguments but I believe that we should contine utilizing online resources for the eduction in schools in restricted menor.

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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching?

Many people think that the intelligent machine could substitute teacher's responsibilities in the classroom. This way of thinking is totally disagreed. In this essay, Limitation of AI technology in educational system ,as well as different methods to communicate rather than original one (face to face) will be provided.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems- To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Weather children should be engaged with money is a controversy topic. Some people reckon that dealing with money too early is detrimental to children’s mental health, While others think it have more advantages than disadvantages. In the essay, I will discuss both opinion and I think

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In some countries young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

One year vacation after finishing highschool is given to students as an opportunity to gain work experience or travel in some countries. While it has resulted to many advantages, there are several negative impacts that should not be overlooked.

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In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?

It is true that nowadays visiting malls and purchasing different kinds of tools or clothes is becoming a hobby, while in the past it was just an obligatory household task. Some critics maybe disagree with me, but I totally believe that it is a negative change in people's attitudes.

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The pipe running from the solar collector to the tank is filled with an anti-freeze fluid that is heated via the sun

The sun heats the antifreeze that goes through the solar collector to the tank.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try nd improve such situations Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

According to many people, individuals accept a bad situation and they choose an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. But others think that it will be better to try to develop themselves rather than to choose a bad situation. I completely would not think that it is justified for accepting a bad situation and I believe that everybody can be changed this situation if work hard. It will be outlined these viewpoints before concluding this essay.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state one do you think is better?

Marriage is an important decision that one has to take at some point in their life. It is popular in some nations for parents to arrange the marriage of their offspring whereas, in others, individuals select their companions on their own. Although parents are more experienced and know what is best for their children, it is optimum to ask their offspring's opinions prior to fixing their weddings. Personally, I think that involved parties should discuss and understand each other before making a choice.

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When someone achieves greatness thanks to an innovation or other breakthrough, it is usually agreed that the individual has a high level of intelligence. Do you think that inborn thinking skills play the main role in the successful life of people? What role does ‘nurtured’ intelligence play in achievements of a successful person?

Nowadays people tend to believe that academic achievements are the result of inborn skills. It is considered that hereditary and environmental factors are both significant for successful life. This essay will discuss how nature and nurture generate powerful mind

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Today, in spite of the scientifically proven necessity of life-long learning, the idea that innate intelligence (thinking skills) is enough to have a successful life is dominating the minds of people. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays people tend to believe that innate intelligence is the key to prosperous life ignoring the fact that life-long learning is essential to achieve dreams. This essay will discuss the reasons for domination of this idea and suggest a possible solution: promoting self-development.

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