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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom reaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

The development of science and technology has made things possible which were once unimaginable. Most people opine that online classes have more merits than offline classroom lectures, ,however some argue that there are significant demerits. In my perspective, the advantages of online teaching have more strenght than disadvantages. I will discuss this in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

Many today come to the conclusion that communal libraries should be free of charge ,however, others believe they are a waste because of the easy access to many resources of modern technologies. In my point of view, public libraries should not be free.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, endangered species are one of the most noticeable problems that everyone should recognize. Nevertheless, the majority of people think that all animals which live in the forest must be conserved, but others argue that this issue must be a set priority in some types. This essay will explore debates for both sides and write my point of view.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages

The world has become a global village.One can reach a loved one by just a call or a message.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

As techonogy is incresing with leaps and bounds networks is used by every aged group using social sides and shareing daily routine on network. this has lots of bad cirumstances. I strongely agree with this statement . There are amlpe of disadvantages of sharing but, advantages of it can not be neglicted. i will explain my views with reasons in following paragrapha

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

Noise pollution is everywhere in cities like London, New York, and Japan. Although this happens due to urbanization and the increased number of automobiles in the city, I personally believe that it can be resolved by decentralizing and making online services.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Crime rates among adolescents have surged during the recent years ,especially among teenagers. Doctors which are specialised in the field of psychology have agreed that interpersonal skills in connecting with oneself and others are vital in preventing this dilemma and they are not getting this education be it in school or at home. I personally agree on this issue because during these age, one spends the most of his or her time with family and friends in home or school.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have acess to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have to what extent do you agree or disagree

Nobody would dispute the fact that schooling is the prime factor in the development of a society.However, some people think that all individuals think that all individual has the right to get higher education in university with free of cost.I strongly agree with this opinion

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many high school students take break and start working in any particular field before beginning of their further studies. Some of them travel to places to make themselves feel relaxed and others start working to support their family by financially.What are the advantages or disadvantages of this, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email • describe where you lived when you were a student at the university • recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

I hope you're doing well. It was such joyful news to hear that you've got admission to the university where I have studied. I know that finding accommodation can be a big headache sometimes but I'm definitely going to help you with that.

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Studie suggests that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some researches state that nowadays a large number of teens choose online socialising above meeting another person in real life. This essay will explore why this is the case and what kind of measurements need to be taken to support young people to socialize more in the real world.

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Some people believe that success means earning a lot of money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Success plays a very important role in our lives. While some people are of the view that achievement comes from earning a lot of money, others are of the opinion that success is defined by personal happiness. In this essay, I will be discussing both the views and state my opinion that prosperity comes from satisfaction. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present day, endangered species is one of the most noticeable problem that everyone should recognize. However, the majority of people think that all animals which live in the forest must be conserved, but others argue that this issue must be set priority in some types. This essay will explore debates for both sides and write my point of view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible ina scientific research, bussiness and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Dicuss both the views and give your own opinion?

There is a party who think that everyone should gets access for any types of data while other prefer not to share due to its importance. In this essay, I am going to illustrate both of parties and then give my personal opinion.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Technology has become an important part of our life. Thus, it has made life easier and let us able to buy or do many things with one click only. Nevertheless, it caused many new health problems for humans. Besides that, drugs nowadays are unable to heal the patients and in my point of view they have to go back to the old type of treatments such as therapy treatment.

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Most employers do job interviews before offering position to a person. Do you think it is the best way to do it or are there other alternatives . What is the best way to choosing a employee in your opinion.

Undoubtdly, in this contemperary epoch, a considerable proportion of working orgnisations conduct interviews to recruit employees as they consider it the most appropriate method of selection. However, i am more incline toward this idea. This essay will highlight many other methods to choose workers which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no doubting the fact that the main purpose of putting criminals behind bars is arguable.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I feel that advertising is important in our daily lives because it provides us with information regarding the latest services , technology and medical advancement which we might have never came across before and nobody would want to remain in the dark for this very reason. For example an broadcast on a latest gadget with multiple functions such as the smart phone will not only help us get better quality pictures with its sophisticated graphics and camera but the applications inside such as zoom, whatssapp, botim etc helps us to connect to others across the globe for free via text messages, audio and video calls which we were not able to do in the past. They come with games which stimulate our mind during times of boredom and dating and social applications such as Badoo and tinder which helps us to connect with community nearby in the journey towards finding a friend or a potential mate.

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Some movies are serious designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and answers to support your answer.

In my opinion, I would definitely enjoy both because they leave a positive effect in the hearts of the spectators at the end of the show.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others hold that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Generally speaking, in every setting of governance ,organisation or management, there has to be a proper setting in the hierarchy in maintaining the ordinance of the system . Directors in this case play a pivotal role towards heading the structure and function of these organisations . Most of the time, they are selected through polling or election by a majority of members in the organisation based on their experience, leadership abilities, qualifications , educational background and reputation with the other. Their work are generally tedious, long standing ,more complicated and demands a great deal of responsibility in keeping the organisation successful .

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