IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 918

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregun language is in order to travel ro ot work in foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yours knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that one should learn a foreign language, such as French and German only to travel to other nations whereas other people believe that knowing any language other than their own national language can be valuable. Knowing many languages opens the door for international opportunities and gives benefits to brain development as it is proven by science.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leadership is a very crucial life skill, that has to be improved by people. However, in ,society most of the higher designations in workplaces or organizations are handled by the elder generation. But some people opine that, the young generation has more capacity to fulfil all these responsibilities. However, l agree that young people have leadership skills, and l will discuss this issue using the examples from our lives to demonstrate points and support arguments.

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Vaccinating chidren against preventable diseases is not ony unnecessary but also dangerous

Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are worthless as well as harmful to children's health. This essay will argue the necessity of injections during one's formative years despite some potential risks.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying that highly processed food and drinks containing great amount of sugar have brought siginificant impact on people’ health. Some believe that we should raise the price of sugary products in order to solve this problem. This essay will discuss why I disgree with that since it is not an efficient way and may cause more serious issues.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, there has been an increase of the number of students which are studying abroad as the opportunities are expanding.

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Nowadays, travelling to foreign countries on holidays is more popular than in the past due to many factors. In my opinion, there are several causes of this and various positive aspects why people choose to travel abroad.

To begin with, there are several reasons why many people these days like to travel overseas on holiday. On the one hand, new technology is one of the main reasons to encourage people because it is able to help travelers in managing and planning their trips easier than in the past. For example, they can access the internet to book hotels online or even use a google map platform to visit tourist attractions in virtual for observing those places in advance. Another factor is the development of flight industries. There are various airline companies nowadays and this leads to competition in this business. Therefore, a ticket for air transportation is inexpensive anymore, which may allow ordinary people to travel abroad more than in the past. For instance, some airlines provide a 50% discount, if people book their flight in advance or some offer a ticket with hotels that are very attractive to passengers. This is why we see so many people at present make a trip abroad.

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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

People learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university education should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection. Bellow I will give some of my reasons to support my position.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As it is enunciated by the proportion of the society, science practises with animals should be prohibited while others in contradictory view that thoses practices help to produce human safe health products. Albeit, there is a dichotomy view of this controversial argument, I am of the opinion that animal experiments had done numerous advantages for health field while its's necessary to have such kinds of tests before allow those drugs or medicine to society. I provide an interesting characterization and exemplify the essential elements to justify my claim.

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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.

Celebrities take media attention by showing their good and health living life and always choose to be in public spot light. But it is quite wrong if they complain about media for the interference on their personal life. I partially agree with the above given statement and reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

In the modern era, Individuals, like adults, turn on the television or flip through the pages of a newspaper, they see that society is drawing some distinctions between technologies. As result, a fair number of community believe that crowd should use technology, while others take the view that focusing on soul without technology is more important. Speaking for myself, I wholeheartedly agree with the first point of view because of many reasons such as, saving time, protecting human growth, and being open-minded. This essay will shed light on these views to prove why technology has some unique values.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

In recent days, it is evident that importance of learning language is looming large. According to this propensity, a lot of schools promote language studying to thier students. Therfore, some people think that teach a foreign language to children need consideration due to difficulty it is.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.other.believe that school is a place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion?

E-learning improves the quality of education as it opens doorways to a wealth of information, knowledge and educational resources, increasing opportunities for learning in and beyond the classroom. Previously, sources of information were limited to books, course materials and lectures; however, more access to information and online materials has accelerated and changed the way students learn (Ghavifekr & Rosdy, 2015). The report published by White Paper Education Transformation (2010) indicates that the effects of e-learning increase as technology is more deeply integrated into the educational experience and students and teachers have technology access throughout the day. Indeed, effective E-learning comes from using Information Communications Technologies (ICT), which broaden educational opportunities and help students develop the skills they need to thrive in the 21st century.

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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

I am very excited to hear that you're thinking about applying for Advanced Accounting and Auditing course that I studied at Gujarat University and would be more than happy to answer your questions.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

In the modern globalisation era,more people are travelling.While there are many reasons for their travel,certainly,they are more likely to enjoy benefits of experiencing multiculturalism,and improving the lifestyle.This essay details the case and the achievable benefits in the following paragraphs.

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Many teenagers now have their own smart phone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

Freedom is a birthright for every human beings and so do youngsters.They tends to be an independent in Information Technology devices nowadays.Some people consider it as an positive factor while others refute the notion.Following paragraphs illustrate both point of views in details.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

A considerable number of people believe that most of the household waste is not being recycled; the government should come up with laws so that people follow them strictly. From my point of view, I would like to agree with the statement that there should be some set procedures and systems by which waste recycling can be promoted. On the one hand, the government can introduce a financial reward and penalty system for the citizens. In every local neighborhood there should be a waste deposit booth where people will be able to deposit the household waste and collect some penny in return. For example, ten cents for a plastic bottle, five cents for a kilo of organic waste etc. Similarly, the people who do not dump their household waste in the booth, will be imposed an increased amount of tax liability. These kinds of systems could motivate the citizens to recycle the waste in the designated waste collection zone. On the other hand, the authority should come up with a legal bind...

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Some people think that hard work helps in achieving financial success while others think it is not the only thing that contributes to financial success. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Certainly, hard work is key to success. However, it is considered by some people that hard work plays a significant role in attaining monetary success while the others say that it is mandatory for others purposes also. This essay will discuss both perspectives in the following paragraphs.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school leavers in most countries. How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

Uncertainly, in this competitive era, unemployement is devastating issue faced by most of youngsters. However, in developing countries, most of the literate people are unemployed, eventhough they have basic knowledge and skills for doing works. Except this ,they also faces many obstacles in their life which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give opinion.

As providing equality to both females and males in every field has been the main issue in modern society, women's role in the country's police or military force has been in the spotlight. While some people argue that women should be equally given a chance to serve as police or a soldier, others believe that they are not cut out for these jobs. In this essay, I will discuss both views and will give my opinion on why females ought to have an equal opportunity to work in the national police or military force. he is going to the school which is nearest.

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An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? And do you think it is positive?

A large number of underdeveloped nations are promoting their tourism sector. I believe this trend aids to the country's economy, which is definitely a positive progression.

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