IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 680

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the modern era, pupil mostly spenting a time on their phones or television to watch any movies or web series but in some extent that movies creating a bad impact on younger generation. That is the reason that, some people wants to the government should control on the violence movies or television series to stop the crime in world. It will be discussing in next paragraphs.

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To succeed in business, one needs to know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that having mathematical skill is necessary in enterprise. I partly agree with this statement.

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People are usually confronted with huge amount of advertisements in their life from competing companies. How do you think the advertising industry influences people? And what measures can be adopted to counter the risks of disastrous effects?

It is known that individuals are burdened by numerous promotions on platforms such as the television, telephone applications and social media. This has come as a result of competition for customers from a number of enterprises like KFC ( Kentucky Fried Chicken), Jumia online shopping and Cafe javas. In my perspective, I believe that these adverts have a negative impact on people. In this article, I intend to elaborate these demerits and outline a few solutions to counteract these dangerous effects.

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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

Many people attend institute or college after their high school years for several reasons which they choose by themself. I believe that the most common reason why people attend institute or college to have new experiences in life , to prepare for a development, and to develop the ability of their personality.

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Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

Police, as protectors of his people, should do what they can, and use whatever means they can, to keep people out of harm‘s way. But in the UK, police are on duty without carrying a gun, which is a very bad idea. They are handicapping themselves.

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Some people believe that residents of rural areas face lesser health complications than those living in the urban areas. Do you agree with this statement?

Few individuals think people living the village areas have better health than people residing in cities. I completely agree to the above statement on staying in the rural places are better than urban. I will be highlighting the points to support my stand.

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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and would cause a loss of culture.

English has been used widely in different parts of the world as lingua franca and has accepted as the official language by multitude of countries. There are a group pf people who believe that having such language is essential to minimize and possibly eradicate the language barrier among people from all over the world, while other oppose this notion as they think that this action results in diminish of culture and identity of people from diverse backgrounds. This essay will illustrate my opinion of favouring the cruciality of having one language as formal language for the world.

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Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Wildlife is very important for our ecological system, but some are the extent of getting extinct. Firstly, discussing the advantages of building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species followed by it's disadvantages.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, museums are playing an effective part in presenting history to the people. In our society, there are various museums who charge from public but, on the other hand, few are totally free for individuals. I think, charging people for entrance to museums is not righteousness with people. However, personally, I believe that disadvantages of charging are more than advantages. This essay will provide reasons.

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I am writing to express my interest in the position of Civil Engineer, and have enclosed my CV for your reference.

I was offered the role of a Junior Engineer in a Private Consultancy Firm, where I worked for more than a year in various projects in the areas of Estimation, Drafting and Site supervision with the help of the technical software skills in AutoCAD, REVIT, STAAD.PRO and Microsoft Excel.

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schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Inteenet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The approaches of education in traditional schools are trending to disadvantages.More and more people choose to stay at home and learn from Internet.This is possibly a viable method but I don’t agree that is the best way to get knowledge.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Although , Mankind believed that the early foot on the moon was an achievement to Mankind. I support this statement to a large extend for some reasons. My position is argued further with the explanation. Out of all the bases, the foremost one was the immense fortune of Mankind which brings endless opportunities to explore. To elaborate, It brings hope of a new place to colonise and expand. Considering the population of he the world the area is not enough to accommodate. Nevertheless, the first move towards the neighbour planet gives us also an opportunity to meet the extraterrestrial people if they exist. Furthermore By extending our boundaries to step forward, it brings the inhabitants location to learn and diversify by experimenting and nurturing in a better way. Additionally , I believe in case of doms day or nuclear war the first shelter to the human species would be non-other than the moon .This is because of day-by-day conflicts between first world cou...

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In the last century, The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, some people think it has made little difference in most people’s daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Art is is very important to the country.it should be protected and funded by the Government.To what extend do you agree or did agree?

Craft is an integral part of our society.In order to protect profession, the Government should support the artist to achieve their goals.I agree the statement that , all types of art forms should be protected and an inventor should pay some amount as a reward.

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Some people say now there is less communication between the family members than in the past.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Great changes have been occurring in family life since the dawn of human civilisation and development of mankind.It is believed by some people that, there is less communication between the family members as compared to the past.This essay will highlight that certainly is a rational approach that needs to be opted.

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Some people think that females shouldn’t allow in the military force whereas some think that they should give them chance. So what extent do you agree or disagree.

Even though females have set their feet in all walks of life, yet army is still a male dominant occupation and the recruitment of women is always questioned. However, I believe women should encouraged to work in the sector of defense, despite they may have to face limitation as well.

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The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched natural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging of these natural areas?

Nowadays, in our contemporary societies, the need for oil and gas has become increasingly significant. Some believe that it could be beneficial to search these precious natural resources by drilling in backward areas. this essay will explain the benefits and drawbacks of drilling and provide a logical conclusion

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

International fast foods are replacing traditional foods in almost throughout the world that affects negatively both families and societies. I completely agree with the given statement because it seems to be disadvantageous in certain ways.

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Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead, they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?

It is important to know what type of punishment serves better criminals to keep society safe. While some people are of the opinion that all sort of offender should spend sometimes on the jail, I believe that those who are committed in victimless crime it is better to give them community service instead.

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Being a celebrity – such as a movie star or professional athlete – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?

In this contemporary world, everyone has to be famous at once in their life. In the case of celebrities, some of them might think that it itself creates issues as well as goods things, in which both sides has its own brighter side and darker side. This essay shows how the brighter side of famous people affects their life.

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