IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 685

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than when they are punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the light of a new law that was introduced few years back, which says physically punishing children is a criminal offence, people are putting forward their best argument for and against it. We can be say that students performs well in their life when they are confident about themselves, which in turn comes from rewarding and not from punishing them. While we can say that rewarding a student is necessary, but sometimes punishing students also helps them.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Travel is the source of energy that fuels crowd's soul and give them wings to fly the hard ocean. As travel is a leisure activity, it depends upon family how much they can spend on their holiday. I totally disagree with the view of not going abroad for roaming and go to somewhere in their own country.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people do think that studying about nature is not essential, one can omit nature study during their school life. I am totally disagreeing with the statement. I would say it is key for students taking knowledge about nature and implement it into science and technology.

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Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education and Healthcare plays vital role in our society to build a robust and a healthy country. So, In this easy we will be discussing whether these systems should be easily accessible by providing free services by the government or citizens of the country should be paid. I would also like to share my opinion in the favor of providing free services upto certain extent by the governments.

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In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe ing it is more important do protect the countryside and not build new homes there what is your opinion about this ?

At the moment that problem is very actually. A lot of people need houses but there same people live in the countryside and love there way of the life. My opinion is that people who live in countryside have old outlook on life because they do not want live in the city and they like everything old. But also I understand them because they live next to nature and these are already different emotions and feelings. First, nature is beautiful, for example, in the morning you can go out and have a look at the nice sunrise. Secondly, it is a fresh air, if you look at it from a point of view ecology then living in such place is delightful. In the third, these are sounds: no loud cars and sounds of signals, but only the sounds of birds are the sounds of the wind. But I understand people who need houses and if a lot of people can fit in high-rise buildings. You always have to sacrifice something. People can fit everything if they save space and do not build separate one-story houses.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowle

Nowadays, youths are putting more fats on their bodies, which is becoming problematic for developed nations. There are consequences associated with this burning issue and can be seen mostly in wealthy nations where accessibility of easy lifestyle is possible without sweating much physically . I shall further discuss mingled problems and long-lasting causes rutted with obesity. To start with, a juvenile with a heavy body is suffering from several physical and mental drawbacks. Usually , in developed nations, minors are privileged by a plethora of indoor video games and indoor activity set-ups, which basically intend them to do not step out and explore other options of passing leisure time. Moreover , authorities are more conscious about the healthy eating habits of everyone out there. Furthermore , most parents are working which in-result can not give their full attention in raising a kid, and kids themselves developed eating habits in whatever way they feel good an...

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in the house and apartment and give your opinion.

Shelter is the one of the rudimentary necessity for human beings in the society. When we look at past people lived in houses but as the time passes need of living places has raised day by day so apartments are the best solution for this.Some portion of population prefer house however others in favour of apartments. Irrefutably, both options have their own benefits and drawbacks.

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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

It is true that more and more people, who age thirty or over, tend to settle down as they find this stage of their life by far applicable than as they were younger. Although I consider that this is a negative trend, I also think that people are free in their decision whenever they want to maintain a family.

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City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. To what extent d oyou agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in the urban area can be stressful and there are not many advantages . I agree with the statement given and this essay will present supportive reasons and examples .

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Nowadays an ordinary people can get popular through the Internet and media. Is it a positive or a negative development?

Advanced communication tools such as the Internet and media allow quick information flow. Many people seize the opportunity and become famous via social platforms. Since younesters may perceive altered values and affect our society, I believe this trend can pose negative effects. People see the Internet and media as a golden chance to trigger changes in their lives. For many of those who do not come from a wealthy family, getting a stable job to support their living is the major concern of them. By showing themselves on the Internet, they build a stage for them to shine at a low cost. Emi Wong, one of the popular Youtubers who earn a million dollars a year, was an office administrator before her videos gone viral. She becomes the most popular Youtube user and gains profits from views and sponsorship. It is not a single case that ordinary people turn themselves into key opinion leaders. It allows them to change their boring life or to gain unexpected life exp...

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It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is it the case ? What can be done to solve the problem ?

Dear John and Thomas,

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days there is an increasing for high-experienced workers than ever before. Your work experience is valued more than even your knowledge in a particular field. I agree with this and would like to briefly discuss why advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some People Think The News Has No Real Connection To People’s

I am writing this letter to let you know about that damaged TV delivered by the store.

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Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. I tend to believe that higher education should be free – for the following reasons. Three main factors support the idea of free university education. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many students cannot afford university education, although they truly want to get degrees. Obviously, without enough financial resources, these students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships – the fund should be spent on university education. That is to say, the government would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. A third reason for my belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognised that many young people are reluctant...

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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is errefutable that due to sophisticated era, technology increased day by day which is helpful for individuals as news reproted play also vital role in awaring people. In this essay i will discuss to the statement along with my own perception.

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Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.

Some individuals are of the opinion that the Internet is a reliable source to find out remedies for medical conditions. I do not consider that people should take help of the Internet for medical treatment, yet I would say that the internet does play a minor role to provide cures for certain illnesses.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? (15GT-1;V; 22/1/21)

Entertainment in any form will be good for people. It is certainly true that many people in this modern era are showing more interest to watch crime series as well as, they preferred to read many crime books. This is because crime novels and dramas are having more suspences then other genres. People would love to watch a film or read a book which has more suspences. Moreover, people are expecting that they could not able to predict what will happen next so that they will not lose their interest until the end of the film or a book. For example, crime novels like "The Daughter of Time" had many unexpected suspences till the last page of a novel that gives the more curiosity to the reader. As well as, crime series like " The Doctor's strange" people are eagerly waiting for the next episode this is because of many suspences in crime-related dramas. Most importantly, while, watching crime series people will not feel bored because of unexpected suspences, this makes crime dramas a...

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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, the exchange of intelligence through the latest technology is fast and anybody can have access to it. Some persons think that this system is not safe, and it jeopardizes our security. In my opinion, This new technical advancement has many benefits than its drawbacks with up to date safety measures.

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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being benefical, this is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern Technology is most of the important breakthrough that has been brought to humanity, it is true that these days people can share their information with each other with high speed with any restriction. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant such as it leads to critical health problems, create unemployment, the distraction of people 's work or study and so on.

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New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern times, it is becoming increasingly common for machines to perform physical activities which used to be done by an individual. While there are positives and negatives about technology evolution. I completely agree that new innovations should be executing certain activities.

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