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In the modern world, people no longer need to use food or products from animals, such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with that statement

In the contemporary world,some individuals prefer to avoid eating and wearing animal products.I partially agree with this statement and will will explain why there is still some demands to exploit other species to for the benefit of humans.
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Social media is an addiction is it positive and negative impact .

Social media is growing fast in this modern era.
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pat attention to it

We live in world where marketing is the key index for successful business so try to reach by every platform is available. But some people believe that advertising is useful for purchasing things where others think that advertising can be ignored.
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Visa regulation should be relaxed for overseas students. Do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid advancement in every field, the desire to gain a quality education is a priority across the globe. People are passionate to gain quality education, no matter whatever it takes, hence, I agree with the above statement which says visa regulation should be relaxed for overseas students.
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The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The shipping jam is one of the most serious problems and according to some people the most effective solution for this issue is provided free use of public shipping regardless time. While I accept with this suggestion, I am more convinced that public transit should not be used without any charge.
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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development?

"Technology" and "digitalization" are the two terms that have strong intimacy with each other, which in turn, have made the big difference between our past and present life and that difference in modernization will further extend more conspicuously which, at present day, reminding us to beware and cautious for the changes that could be clement or inclement.
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Many people use distance learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Study is a continuous process of learning that can accelarate a person's intellectual ability, brain functionality as well as adaptibility. To add, aptitude of a person depends a lot on the exposure of different study materials and methods. With the advent of technology, people all over the world have become blessed with a new, innovative and intriguing method of learning known as distance learning which is a smarter way than the traditional learning module that we have been using and become habituated for centuries. From this context, a dispute is ongoing among people regarding the credibility and reliability of the newly evolved method, which is none but the aforementioned "distance learning" in comparison with orthodox face to face communication.
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you are thinking of moving to a new country. Outline some of the factors and questions you must consider before you make a final decision.

To immigrate to Canada, is the biggest and crucial decision I have ever taken in my life. There are various factors which I have considered to make that decision and I would like to explain all those in the next paragraphs.
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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to higher position. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

‘Working hour is proportional to promotion in every position ’. This notorious notion have dominated over 20 centuries, not just only for employers but for even employees. However, in this advanced era, this statement is fairly contraversial. Some people still argue that anyway If a person desires higher level of position, being workaholic is not avoidable. Meanwhile, there is other perspective that working hard do not result in power all the time Overall in modern age, ambitious desire is reflecting to their quantities of working, this writing deal with providing opposite perspective to the old standpoint To commence the introduction, the competitier generation from 20centuries , most of company have encouraged working overtime even some employees tend to extend their working time voluntarily. At some extent, this is very plausible notion. Some people convince that if someone work 2 times longer the result is supposed to be 2 times higher. However in reality this could not result...
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Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?

Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree ?Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs...
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In some countries, many people don’t have enough money to access the Internet. Should governments be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the Internet?

Everyone knows that the Internet is a global computer network, which embraces hundreds of millions of users worldwide. I partly agree, that state should be in charge of making sure that people enjoy the chance of using the Internet, however, it isn’t a serious problem compared to hunger, poverty, infrasture and healthcare.
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Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

This pie chart illustrates the percentage of the used online languages by the end of 2001. The table describes the number of people being online each year from 1997 to 2001.
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Marketing and promotion are the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree?

There is no denying that marketing and promotion play crucial role in the growth of business, but in my opinion the key to a successful business is another factor.
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Some people think that to produce a happier society is to ensure that there is only a small difference on the earnings of the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the outset of the new millennium, there has been a fierce debate over the concern that country's success is completely dependent on economic progress. Whereas, there are other factors also which contributes in development of the country. All the aspects would be scrutinized in the below paragraphs.
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Some people believe that teaching children at hime is best for childern develonpment while others thisnk that it is imporatant for children to go to school.

Some people prefer sending kids to the schools, while others like e-learning programs more. Few students say that using distance learning gives them the flexibility to manage their time, so they can do extra activities and spend more valuable time with friends and family, which is also important, Because not only studying is important, children need time to create and improve other abilities and hobbies.
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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent of do you agree or disagree?

Global warming is on rise due to man-made errors. The repercussions on the environment due to human activities are ignored in many demographic parts of the society. This essay will discuss, how these pressing issues are least exposed despite the damage being happened.
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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

All the above listed problems can be solved if there is proper planning for the infrastructure improvement, usage of public transport and time management.
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Some people opine that entertainment or leisure activities should be subsidized by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

While the worldwide need for entertainment continues to increase , people are having different points of view on whether the rather large distribution of governmental money to maintain various forms of leisure is reasonable. In my perspective , it is vital that the government must continue to sponsor recreation activities . People who argue that a government already suffers scarcity of budget for important sectors like education, healthcare, transportation, trade and agriculture ; it is simply irrational to spend the extra money for leisure and entertainment activities, which they place in a lower degree of importance. Although it is undeniable that the government must not neglect such basic needs of the society , this argument has quite a few large flaws. Firstly , what they do not notice is that such entertainment is essential to the society’s well being – thus affect the overall health. After so many long , long and tiresome hours of work, what the majority of the world’s po...
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The government should take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

It is always a debatable question that whether it is government resoponsibility to take care of the Envirnoment or individual as well. According to my point of view, it is the duty of both to take care of the Envirnoment. In essay I will give some reasons, according to my point of view.
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People think that some countries can be both economically successful and clean their environment, Whereas some of them disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is pervasive stereotype that economic and finantial success in a country is proportional to countrie’s tideness. Normally people imagine of very magnificant city in developed country. Meanwhile, when people normally think of developing countries, some untidiness image comes to mind. Overall this writing will deal with other perspective the development and the cleaness of the city. First of all, many splendid city which is known as success at their economic state such as New york, Paris, London, Beijing ..ect is very far from cleaness. It’s magnitude of economic value is leading however poverty and dirtyness is overshaded in the capital cities. Presumably there are uncleaned area or even tourist attraction area is not well managed. Overall no where is tide seemingly regardless of their economic magnitude whether city is developed or underdeveloped. It is avoidable matter of untidiness , no at least cleanesss. The reason of untidiness of capital city could vary, however in g...
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