IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 764

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts is considered to be a leisure activity by many, but has a great potential as a profession and culture. This industry is not stable, and thus government intervention is necessary.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

(Intro)Nowadays , there are increasing number of people who drink soda.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Parents and teachers play a crucial role in upbringing of a child. Some people opine that only parents can teach children to be responsible civilian whilst others have contrast viewpoint as they believe only teachers can educate them. Althogh parents are the first teachers, I believe school and home, at both places children learn values to be an efficient meber of society.

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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Instagram and Facebook are full of luxurious pictures, where superstars and film actors share their unbelievable lifestyle. We usually see them in expensive and high-fashion clothes, sitting in the best and exclusive restaurants all over the world. However, besides comfort and opportunities, money also brings envy, hatred, and unhappiness.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been recent trend that individuals decide to spend their vacation visiting different places either in domestic or in overseas. It has been observed that most people prefer spending time at the tourist places which are located in their country rather than going abroad and I agree with their choices because travelling domestically can be less expensive and would not create any communication bearers.

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Some people argue that public libraries have become unnecessary because nowadays information can be accessed from home using the internet . Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Technology is the new headline which makes the human's life easier and flawless.It helps to gain knowledge and providing access to millions of resources wordwild. Well,due to internet ,public libraries are not kept their importance and might be vanished in the future. In my opinion,there are

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Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

The International community is doing lots of things to solve global warming issue. It is a type of continue process since few decades. Western countries along with third world trying hard to resolve this problem. There is no doubt that it is global threat and make a huge impact on the

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Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

A International community is doing lots of things to solve global warming issue. It is a type of continue process since few decades. Western countries along with third world trying hard to resolve this problem. There is no doubt that it is global threat and make huge impact on entire population.

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Modern culture around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons. Is it a positive development or a negative development, in your opinion.

There is no question that the process of the globalisation has changed the ives of myriads. The popular belief is that the traditional features of each country also have undergone tremendous changes owing to modern developments. In my view, these changes are mostly adverse and in this essay, I'm willing to provide causes of this trend and reasons to support my opinion.

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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Now a dyas, many people move towards the city area which allows to make new construction in order to fullfill the requirement. Many people think that the new construction should be controlled by government whie other people belive that who spend money and time to built that building should be free to design it as they see fit.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.other.believe that school is a place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is a highly debatable issue as to who should take the responsibility of teaching children on how to be good members of a society. I would like to share my opinion and draw a conclusion.

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Paying all employees the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Paying all employees the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues. I strongly disagree with this statement for several reasons.

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Nowadays, children are forced to do so many exams in their school life, and sometimes for a very early age, and that provide a large debate. Some people believe it is the best way to know the students ability. However, some others think it is very stressful and it could be sometime unfair. This essay will explain the opinions on both sides, following by what I think is right.

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Today people are living in a throwaway society where they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems can it lead to?

In present time, humans are living in the world where they think that all things are disposable. Folks dump things plainly not thinking about the consequences it might lead. Hence, people are becoming more and more materialistic and that's the reality in the current world we live in. This habit has adire effect to the environment which can lead to the destruction of the Mother Nature.

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People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

While there are people who believe raising animals for human consumption is cruel, others do not feel in the same way. I strongly agree with the former point of view. Animals have the same right as humans do. Killing living things for one’s taste of the tongue is cruel and irresponsible.

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wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Staying happily in any situation from the heart is called real happiness. As it is generally seen that everyone is busy with making more and more money in their life, having good bank balance does not lead to happiness. Whilst it tends to be a luxurious life, I believe that there are other factors that are contributed to achieving real joy in life. This essay will highlight those aspects in order to be happy.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, majority of people around the world are colliding with fatness. This is a serious issue because people suffer and can hate themselves because of obesity. This essay will consider the general causes of overweight, before proposing some solutions.

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Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed.However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animal.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Today, Regard of some animals raised in zoos, the pponent of zoos deem it is unfair or unnecessary for animals to leave their natural home or be in charge of zoo’s staff.However, I stand for another group who think it is practical to take care of some animals in the zoos, especially endangered animals.

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It is sometimes suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do you think that the advantages of this suggestion outweigh the disadvantages?

Forest education is one of the modern schooling methods which is favourable to parents. While considering the learning outcome for linking young students with the nature, an increasing number of adults believe such a teaching method has more benefits than its disadvantages.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Having more than one job is gaining popularity these days. Unlike the olden days, dedication to only one career is becoming outdated. In fact currently it is not uncommon to have multiple career paths to become rich, and sustain such a lifestyle learning throughout life is essential. This essay will argue that being in one profession can be less beneficial than being able to multitask even it means constantly educating and updating our knowledge.

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