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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a common man has to pay a plethora of taxes on different services and products. The government should have considered to wave-off the education-related taxes if parents are not sending their kid to the public school. This essay will argue why giving tax exemption to those families, whose wards are studying in the private institution is not a good idea and why those taxes are important to society and country.

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Cities around the world are continuing to expand as people leave the countryside .Some people prefer to live the city, while other like to live in the countryside. Discuss both views.

In this era of globalisation, the world has witnessed a paradigm shift in migrating and these days more rural inhabitants are becoming city dwellers. Choosing a place to live has been a matter of great concern from the time of antiquity. Urbanisation, being the buzzword of the day, few among the mass believe that urban sector forms the ideal place to thrive, whereas others favour rural life. Let us discourse below the pros and cons of life in a city to that of a countryside.

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People eat more processed food than they did in the past. why is this? what are the effects of this?

People ate healthy food in the past than in the present. A fast-paced routine has forced them towards processed food resulting in poor health.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Owing to the advance developments in Science and Technologies, people tend to migrate to seek for a better opportunity. I agree that immigration plays a vital role in the society.

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Some people think it is better to spend and enjoy their money once they earn it. Others think it is better to save their money and enjoy it in the future. Which stand do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Having monetary stability is very important in today’s life. Earning and spending power of people has increased immensely due to the availability of multiple IT jobs in the market. Some people believe in spending their money as they gain it, while some believe in saving it for future and security. I support the thought of saving monetary resource for the future.

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion

impact on our mental health.It helps us in learning some valuable lessons in life like team work and how to compete. Sports have a multidisciplinary impact on human life.

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Some women think that they should not marry as they are financially independent

In a society like ours women have always been told that marriage is a thing that brings them financial support. So, most people just relate marriage with financial stability rather than relating it to a bond that provides you with a constant support At early stage due to biological reasons : men having more strong bodies and women being emotionally strong, it was decided that it’s the men who will go out for hunting and women will take care of the house and children but nowadays things have changed .Women are just no longer the fairer and weaker section of the society.

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Apart from keeping us physically fit ,sports do have certain positive impact on our mental health.It helps us in learning some valuable lessons in life like team work and how to compete. Sports have a multidisciplinary impact on human life.

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Many working people get little or no exerciseeither during the working dayorin their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examplesfrom your own knowledge or experience

People are getting lethergic because of their hectic schedule and they are so stressed that in their leisure time they just prefer to take rest at home so, this will result into the helth issues. For curb this problem the near or dear once should take some intiative by encouraging them. The upcoming essay will elaborate more about its notion.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages

The economic boost that accompanies a successful travel industry is quite well recognised and Thailand is the best example. The entire Thai economy revolves around tourism and the country had been able to uplift its socio economic status through its flourishing hospitality sector. Egypt is another nation that is heavily dependent on its hospitality sector. The growth in the number of incoming tourists leads to innumerable prospects in terms of local entrepreneurship & employment generation. This is also associated with international investments and infrastructure development. The national authorities, in order to ensure safety of the international visitors provide better law and order enforcement, improved transportation and healthcare facilities, which in turn benefit the local population.

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many museums charge for admission while others are free. do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

Children are motivated to compete each other because this would benefit both public as well as the society.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Number of people visiting shopping centres has significantly increased over the past few years. Because of this habbit, several small shops are being forced to shut down permanantly because of less business. This essay will discuss both the positive and negative side of this trend and findout which weighs more.

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Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We see an increasing number of people who prefer the vegetables over the meat. Almost everyone is proud to share this information through the social services nowadays, but as we may know from our ancestors diversity in the ration is crucial for surviving. So, let's discuss in detail whether is good or not to be a vegetarian. Consuming a lot of red meat can cause a various kind of diseases. It supports by few modern researches showing us a positive correlation between the consuming rate of the red meat and the rate of the cancer diseases. Through these works researchers are trying to tell us that we should decrease the amount of red meat in our daily diet and include more plant-based meals. So, if we believe in this, it looks like if we decrease the amount of meat we would stay healthy for a longer period of our life. Despite of the results of the previous experiments we don't have any researches that support plant-based only diet. It doesn't look like having only the plants ...

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Some people say that a gap year between school and university is good idea ,while others disagree. Discuss both views and give opinion.

The popularity of gap year has risen significantly especially during last decade, so is the controversy related to this. As the benefits of taking an year off are hard to quantify, it is considered to be unnecessary but opposers recommend this highly. Both these will be analyzed prior reaching a relevant verdict.

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The exposure of international media such as films, TV and magazines has impacts on local culture. What do you think of the impacts have been? Do you agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the 21st century , international media ( such as TV and magazines ) and entertainment industry got a great exposure and it affects every age groups and on our local culure , tradition and customs. I am partially agree that the has the advantages of impacts outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people think that children’s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?

Nowadays children have lot of free time which they can utilise in many activities. Some people think children should use that free time in educational work instead of wasting it.

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Some museums have an admission charge while some do not. In my opinion, the drawbacks of an entrance fee are eclipsed by its benefits in the sense that the income will be ploughed back into operation and development of the museums.

Nowadays, there are many museums charge fees for entrance while some do not. Although the benefit of admission is that help the government develop museums, but the drawback will outweigh due to the declining number of visitors.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since the post -modern era, in the most of the families have required to work both husband and wife in order to provide better facilities to their family members. However, by having full time work, sometimes resulting in serious issues with children's character.

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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

Dear Mr.Sam,

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Describe a person you admire the most. Why do you admire she/he? How does the person affect you?

Today,I would like to talk about a person I admire.I suppose most of you will be familiar with this symbol.Yes,this is the symbol of the famous company Alibaba. This company It is one of the most successful companies in China.Some famous online retailing business websites ,like TaoBao and Tmall,are both the business of Alibaba.Those services really improve our living standards.When I talk about this company I think most of you have already know who I am going to depict.Yes,he is Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba.

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