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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.other.believe that school is a place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion?

it is considered by some people that a child's family should teach to become a good man. other, say it is the duty of schools as children spent a lot of time in school, but in my opinion, both have their responsibility for a child.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.other.believe that school is a place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion?

some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.other.believe that school is a place to learn this.

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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint

Firstly,those who prefer the same job for same company,there are so many advantages

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In some countries quality of life in larger cities is decling. Why do you think is happening and what measurebcan be taken?

It is believed the living standards of people is degradating day by day in some countries which have large cities. This essay will discuss reasons of this types of problem and also discuss on method which need to carried out by government and people to tackle this problem.

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Rich countries give money to poorer countries but it does not solve the problem of poverty.Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree

The world is combination of conuntries, each one has their own existance. They are devided into three categories, rich countries, poor countries and developed countries. Few decades back developed countries are also in the category of poor countries but they have developed and make growth which help them to consider them as developed countries.

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Some people say that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others say that it is getting easier. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

The way of living in cities is quite debatable topic. There are different takes by people regarding the life in cities. In this essay we will discuss about the positives and negatives of living in cities and argue why living in city is easier.

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Goal of making a film is to boost the educational system. Agree or disagree.

Through which, Homer living, begged his bread.

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Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists? Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience

From the topic I choose to disagree that entertainers are more important than scientist and I will give reasons with each paragraph. Before we begin, we need to know who is an entertainer and who is a scientist .

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Job satisfaction is more important than high wages. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it dose not appeal to you. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more crucial then salary.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, education is considered as a passport to the future. People find academic degrees as essential milestones for future success while others believe that apart from education there are other relevant factors which are crucial as well. I take the opinion that success cannot be guaranteed by conventional education.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rate of juvenile crime is increasing within a fraction of minute in some countries. Some people think that it can only be reduced if there are more police officers patrolling the different areas. From my perspective,this method of controlling criminals is not always effective and definitely not the only in the century of cutting-edge technology. To begin with, there is a misconception that if authorities allocate more police to areas where the rate of offenders is high, the security status in those places will probably be improved. There are some examples which are worth mentioning. Despite great number of police workers in developed European countries such as Belgium, France and the Netherlands, numerous terroristic crimes in recent years have not been prevented. It can be seen that as soon as the police leave the hot spots, the criminals can come back and this measure fail to address other crimes that may occur online or indoor. Additonally, many hardened crimi...

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. What extent do you agree or disagree?

The rate of juvenile crime is increasing within a fraction of minute in some countries. Some people think that it can only be reduced if there are more police officers patrolling the different areas. From my perspective,this method of controlling criminals is not always effective and definitely not the only in the century of cutting-edge technology. To begin with, there is a misconception that if authorities allocate more police to areas where the rate of offenders is high, the security status in those places will probably be improved .There are some examples which are worth mentioning. Despite great number of police workers in developed European countries such as Belgium, France and the Netherlands, numerous terroristic crimes in recent years have not been prevented. It can be seen that as soon as the police leave the hot spots, the criminals can come back and this measure fail to address other crimes that may occur online or indoor. Additonally, many hardened crimina...

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oday the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learing a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

I strongly believe that, studying a second language at the primary school will gain lots of benefits, than its drawbacks. This essay will discuss about, mislead disadvantages such as a way of increasing children’s work load. Moreover, help that given for future educational goals and easiness of communication when students travel for foreign countries will be dicussed as advantages of this positive trend.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I partially agree with the statement, for better academic performance , Discipline in studies is very important for better education,getting things done in a rightful way, teaches them about being obedient, therefore spanking a child may seem only helpful in shot term.

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Do you agree or disagree? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.

It is common believe that although motion pictures are good source of entertainment, reading fiction books like short stories and novels are more fun to read. This essay will discuss, how fiction stories are far better than movies.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Many people argue that someone’s success is attributable to luck instead of their own hard work. However, I totally disagree with this opinion. First, I do believe that being successful requires determination and huge effort. For example, Thomas Edison had continuously failed hundreds of times before inventing a variety of creations, in which the light bulb is the most popular invention. Without his infinite patience and diligent work, the scientist could not possess many different patents which remarkably influence our daily life. Another case of success through determination and passion is Steve Job, who kept pursuing his dream despite being kicked out of his own company. Passion and persistence led him to spend thousands of hours coding and experimenting to finally create a new operating system which strongly/significantly changes the world of technology. Therefore, passion, determination, and hard work are the key traits to succeed, which illustrates a greater import...

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that the best way to master any language, including English, is to learn from the country that uses the language as its national communication tool. However, it is not necessary the only way to do it. I wholingly agree with this statement.

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Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that his is improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Today's world, money and possessions are considered valuable things in each individual life's ,but some thinks that this only secures our lives. In this essay, I will be discussing both positive and negative aspects and also my opinion with few example.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

These days lots of employees occur health issues since they do not have proper time to do physical movments. It can be happened to some people who cannot manage work and life balance.

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