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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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oday the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learing a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

I strongly believe that, studying a second language at the primary school will gain lots of benefits, than its drawbacks. This essay will discuss about, mislead disadvantages such as a way of increasing children’s work load. Moreover, help that given for future educational goals and easiness of communication when students travel for foreign countries will be dicussed as advantages of this positive trend.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I partially agree with the statement, for better academic performance , Discipline in studies is very important for better education,getting things done in a rightful way, teaches them about being obedient, therefore spanking a child may seem only helpful in shot term.

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Do you agree or disagree? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.

It is common believe that although motion pictures are good source of entertainment, reading fiction books like short stories and novels are more fun to read. This essay will discuss, how fiction stories are far better than movies.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Many people argue that someone’s success is attributable to luck instead of their own hard work. However, I totally disagree with this opinion. First, I do believe that being successful requires determination and huge effort. For example, Thomas Edison had continuously failed hundreds of times before inventing a variety of creations, in which the light bulb is the most popular invention. Without his infinite patience and diligent work, the scientist could not possess many different patents which remarkably influence our daily life. Another case of success through determination and passion is Steve Job, who kept pursuing his dream despite being kicked out of his own company. Passion and persistence led him to spend thousands of hours coding and experimenting to finally create a new operating system which strongly/significantly changes the world of technology. Therefore, passion, determination, and hard work are the key traits to succeed, which illustrates a greater import...

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that the best way to master any language, including English, is to learn from the country that uses the language as its national communication tool. However, it is not necessary the only way to do it. I wholingly agree with this statement.

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Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that his is improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Today's world, money and possessions are considered valuable things in each individual life's ,but some thinks that this only secures our lives. In this essay, I will be discussing both positive and negative aspects and also my opinion with few example.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

These days lots of employees occur health issues since they do not have proper time to do physical movments. It can be happened to some people who cannot manage work and life balance.

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With the recent improvements to internet, people can leave views or pinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. Is it a good or a bad thing? Discuss both, giving your own answer with examples.

Technology has affected all aspects of our life and one of them is the way we do shopping through internet. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool. However, if used for the wrong purpose, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and corporate business.

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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Everyone have their own perspective for education system. Few people believes that rewarding the most talented student can make better result for them and for the society. However others have a mindset that instead of talent, improvement should be considered as key aspect for reward. I intend to delve supporting arguments for both notion in the following paragraph.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Mothers will try their best to provide the best environment for their children. Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible, other children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they reach six or seven years old. In this essay, I am going to discuss the advantages of children attending school at a young age.

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In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. what has caused this ? what solutions can you suggest ?

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Question 3 Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Nowadays computers have become an important subject in the school lessons. The technology is rapidly growing and it's very important for computers to be a part of student's learning. However, computers have also become an addiction for youngsters where they use it outside of school lessons as well.

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More and more companies allow their employees to work from home rather than going into an office each day.Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In developed countries, working from employeers’s local going to be increased, moreover, these days majority of administrators and professionals spend their work’s time indoor.This issue has advantage and disadvantage policy for people in much reasons.

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The cost of living is higher in many countries. What is the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?

In this day and age, the world is become more and more modern. It devides people into 2 type: rich and poor. The apearance of new store and brand upgrade daily life to higher cost of living. Futhermore, it will be hard for the people who do not have money and become more comfortable for rich people.

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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online education/ e-learning.

In this essay, I would discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online education and why I think we have more to gain than to lose.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara dessert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Humans are wanderers which brings a streak of adventure in them .They love to explore places which are difficult to visit, and in quest of achieving something impossible they go to any extent, for example visiting remote places like Sahara desert or the Antartica.Of course,visiting such places has both advantages and disadvantages.

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The world of work is forever changing at a fast pace. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare themselves for work in the future.

When it comes to work, it's forever changing the world. People are not ready to depend on one single job for their entire life due to current working conditions; which is not same as before.

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