IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 915

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time . Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present age , education has become a priority for many parents seeking to secure a good future for their children. So many parents hold a strong belief that their children should do educational activities during their free time . According to others, in this way children are under pressure.

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The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that violations of traffic rules and regulations and also offensive behaviors exhibited by drivers are major causes of road accident. I agree that such actions should be punishable depending on the degree of offense with the following reasons.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

First of all what is an advertisement in simple language a simple definition of my own is that if you are selling a product and you want the audience to know about your product you just simply let the people know about it by different means i.e. sign boards, newspapers, radio, television and internet etc. Well this was about the advertisement.

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The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree.

A charged up body performs better and is able to get a way out from any difficulty. Doctors advice every patient to keep exercising in order to keep the blood circulating and stay fit.

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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Many people are of the view that growing traffic congestion can be solved by adding some kind of charge on personal car use and use the collected funds for betterment of public transportation. In my opinion, there are both pros and cons of this approach.

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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Man people are of the view that growing traffic congestion can be solved by adding some kind of charge on personal car use and use the collected funds for betterment of public transportation. In my opinion, there are both pros and cons of this approach that need careful evaluation.

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Some parents believe children’s leisure activities should be always educational, but others think it will cause more pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this era, parents concerned about their children's leisure activities morethan ever. Some people belive on education realted leisure activities and spend lots of money to send their off springs to different extra curriculum classes and in other hand some people give full liberty to their children about their spare time. Now the question is what is the best way for children to spend their leisure time? In following i will discuss this issue in detail.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

In recent years, enrollment in the STEM courses (Science, Technology, Engineering and Maths) has taken a sharp nose-dive. Every year, the universities are producing fewer and fewer STEM graduates. This essay will discuss why STEM is loosing its sheen and also point out how it will slowly but steadily deteriorate people's standard of living.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem

It is true that people sometimes purchasing unnecessary things and can't afford it which, stuck them into debt. As we live in the era of technology, some appealing advertisement and the excessive use of credit card force them to do it. This essay will discuss drawbacks of owe money and suggest some several steps to solve these issue.

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In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?

The spirit of sportsmanship is often an analogy used for the masses to accept defeat with a gleaming smile. In days of the past, the primary motivation of sporting champions were the desire for a gold medal or a record breaking event. Although, nowadays the only fact that motivates sport professionals are the lucrative prize money and that of fame.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, As the population is increasing tremendously the need of safe and fast transpost system is rising in order to match the requirements of people. some people claims that the money should be spend on railways rather than on roadways by the ministry. Personally, I believe that the goverment should alot their budgets more towards railways. Further, In this essay we will discuss some reasons.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

According to some people, home and workplace should be kept clean and everything should be organized and kept properly. I agree with this and this essay will provide the various benefits of it.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.Do you agree or disagree?

Today people are being dominated by the television programs.These advertisements or shows on the television make individuals dig into it ,which make them tired of meeting with their own individuals.There is no-doubt that indulging in these kind of activities make them lazy.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

People values have changed and tent to consider science, technology and business most important than arts .Even tough have been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Many people around the globe suffer from hunger despite recent advancements in agriculture. This seems to be due to the unaffordability and lack of facilities to store and transport the food. These both causes would be resolved by creating the equal opportunities of source of income and bringing up the proper reservoir system and transportation.

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With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Whether Genetic modified food is the ultimate answer to address the need to feed the ever growing population has been a topic of fierce argument among the intellectuals across the world. While one portion of the world argues that growing food genetically can tackle this issue. This essay will put the spotlight on the pros and cons of this esteemed topic

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Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to local communities who need it. Others, however, prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Its a matter of choice on how best to reach out to the poorer Nations. A number of individuals render help directly to the under world countries. While some others give funds to various local and international charities. This essay seeks to discuss ways of reaching out to the local communities and my opinion shall be given.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT SPORT TEACHES CHILDREN HOW TO COMPETE, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT CHILDREN LEAN TEAM WORK. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

By engaging our self in any sort of sports activity it may increase our health in a positive manner and our mental strength also boost. Children should also know that how to be part of any competition and achieve the goal. And get to know how to be survive them self in a team work.

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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other thinks that face-to-facec interaction is essential. Discuess both view and give your opinion.

Some would argue that, it is good to make new friends through social networking sites. While others say one-on-one interaction is very much important to judge a person. Although, social media platform is meant for connecting people and making new friends even beyond countries. However, I believe meeting somebody personally and having chating creates a magic in becoming genuine friendships.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In present time different modes of transport should be used instead of private ownership.Introducting international laws to regulate the ownership of cars is a method which should be applied.In my opinion both of these suggestion should be helpful for controlling the outburst of privately owned vehicles.

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