IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 930

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days both parents work to cover all life expenses leads to some of them to send their children who are in pre-school age to childcare center to recive a better level of care .On other hand, parents prefer to leave their children with grandparents to get best career.Personally, i would argue that the best choice is to send the kids to childcare centers.

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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Some school kids are taught monetary value and how to take special care of it, however, it is a major life skill that should be included in the school’s curriculum and taught. This essay agrees that monetary value should be included in schools curriculum and taught as well because of its importance. In my opinion, teaching school kids monetary value will make them more responsible and also learn how to make money rather than been spoon fed. Firstly, responsibility...

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Compare the percentages of travelers to go to work in a country in Europe

The bar chart gives information the proportion of commuters go to work in a Europe country by four types of transports such as bus, car, bike, and on foot in the year 1950, 1970 and 1990.

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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

Environmental nuisance to soil and water have been on the increase over the last two decades as a result of the increased usage of polythene sacs for shopping. Despite the advantage of its light weight,I strongly agree it should be made illegal so as to create a clean environment and encourage the use of better alternatives.

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Some people think that residents should be responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is a government responsibility. Discuss and state your own opinion.

• There is increasing awareness in the cleanness and tidiness of an area, however, some individuals believe that is the responsibility of residents to keep their environment clean and tidy, while others think it is the responsibility of the government. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Modern days have become more accustomed to improper diet and irregular food habits with varied reasons like busy schedules at work, rush to office or household works, timings with family, children, friends and many more. This has made drastic change in human beings' life with many negative impacts resulting in numerous health problems. An individual is facing too many medical issues right from infants till the age of nineties.

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These days many jobs require people to travel and this is disrupting families. What effects do traveling parents have on their children

Nowadays, one needs to move to different cities in order to work. Although this is a present day job requirement, but it has adverse outcomes by affecting family life. Drawbacks of the situation will be shown by looking at the negative effects it has on children's personality and the parent-child relationship quality.

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In spite of the advances in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case? What can be done about this ?

With the advent of science and research, newer improving strategies have been introduced in the field of agriculture. However, despite of these advancements a large share of worlds population is still deprived of food. In my opinion global warming plays the key role in this and I would recommend introduction of new laws regarding environment protection.

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• In many countries small shops and town centres are going out of business, because people tend to drive to the large out-of-town stores. This results in an increase in car use, and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores. Do you think advantages of such development outweigh its disadvantages?

With the development of cities, increasing number of families has got their own vehicle, which promoted the business of large out-of-town stores. Meanwhile, a great number of small town-center shops people used to go are running out of business.

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Doctors in many countries say that people do not do enough physical exercises. What are the causes of this trend? How can the situation be improved?

In this modern globalized world, there is increase in number of people who are suffering from diseases. According to doctors, people are physically inactive. There are many reasons that has led to this situation. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and possible solutions to get out of this unhealthy lifestyle.

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Nowadays many adults have full time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore their other. What are cause and effects?

Whilst, some men and women do full time placement and segment of their lives exhaust on is completely elevate while some grow up are under high tension and ignore disdain other part of life. I would discuss both views in the following paragraphs.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you this is the case. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

There is no doubt that people prefer fashionable cloths, but what influences them in doing so? While some people contend that wearing fashionable cloths is fine, others think that it is trivial. This is both a good and a bad thing under certain situations. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and show the arguments.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this question. Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In this world of contradiction of opinions and actions, on the one hand it is often said that sports is a vital phase of school life for Kids and youth, while, other people believe that sports have various negative effects. This essay will discuss why enhancing sports is important initiative even if it is criticized in many aspects by opponents and considered as a waste of time.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that a lot of students are trained to push themselves and compete to their classmates instead of studying in a group for mutual benefits. While I acknowledge that there are some advantages of competition, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?

It is true that currently a majority of people make a decision to have their offspring late. In this essay, I will illustrate some reasons for this trend and the correlation between having children late and socieaty .

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the crime rate can be exponentially reduced with the use of high-end technology. In my opinion, cutting edge technologies can really prove to be a boon in the depletion of crime rates. Installation of CCTV cameras, biometric machines, cameras at doorbell for person recognition can prove to be very efficientA in reducing rate of committing crime.

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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

Owing to the convenient transport and advanced communication technology, people’s habitat is not fix and they are able to live in the place where they prefer. Although a large population in one area is likely to lead to the huge consumption of the local natural resource, people will also gain superior living quality what they can not achieve in other places.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Today computers are used almost everywhere, it is impossible to imagine our life without PCs, Internet, mobile phones and other computer devices. It is reasonable to think that people look forward to the future of computers. In what field will be computers used for and what role will human has in this world in future?

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Entertrainment mediums plays a crucial role in an individual's life. Some believe that the attitude of people gets influenced adversely by playing computer based games and watching serials or movies which delivers negative lessons, on the other hand, other argue that the behaviour does not get impacted by television and computer games. In this essay, I completely accord with the former one.

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Some people say that physical education should be required part of every school day. Other believe the whole day on academic studies. Which view do you agree with use specific reasons and details to show your answer.

Few individuals considered sports a vital element of student life and argue that it should be made a compulsory part of schooling. However, many other contradict stating that full day at school has to be focused on acadamics only. Favour of former view and my inclination will be justified in ensuring paragraph.

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