IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 931

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Rise in obesity is a chronic problem plaguing people of all ages today but the worst affected are the children. Unthinkable it may be, but it’s a reality that children under 10 are experiencing same levels of obesity as that of the people above 35 as per “National Health Census Bureau”. Leading theories for this issue blame two main parties, the government and the parents. In my opinion, both contribute significantly for this pediatric overweight.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Advertisement is a tool that helps consumer to identify a product or service. It is a way of sharing a story about a product or service. History shows that story telling had been a part human evolution. The method which has changed since the days of cave paintings to today’s graphic designing.

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Improvements in health,education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations.However,the governments of nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.

Today's world has been devided into developing and industrialised countries which the main difference between them is the amount of money that government apply in important sectors such as education,health and commerce. Most of the poorer nations are buried in depts as a resultof their unbalanced finances which are reflect in a failed health carean unstructured education system and weak international trade. This viciouscycle will continue indefinitely unless weathier nations show interest i...

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school than secondary school

Language is the most important tool for communication ,and is different in parts of the world .Even local areas of same countries have their own local languages .So in order to communite and learn efficiently you must know the specific langauge .Most of the people speak their mother tongue very fluently but when it comes to other langauge they are not able to communicate so well r reluctant to take part in conversation.Now english has become international language so most of the educationa...

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent days, it's been argued that, only governments and large companies can do something to improve the environment and individuals cannot make any much difference. This essay disagrees with the statement eventhough the contribution from the individual for improving the environment is less and it takes several number of years to improve, if we work as an individual.

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It is Generally Accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays people generally beleive and accept that excercise is good for children and teenagers. Because of this mindset, there is a common talk going on, to make the physical education and sport should be made compulsory for all students in all school. I would agree with the point of making the physical education and sports compulsory for all students in all schools across country.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In modern era, advertisements play important role in sale and marketing of all products. Some people believe that the advertisement influense to buy products while others argue that they provide imformation about new items. This essay will show partial aggrement towards both the views.

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These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

It is undeniable true that a globe is unimaginable without profession. In fact, career is omnipresent. Just as every coin has a flip side job from at home brings both the positive as well as negative impact on our life. I would elucidate the pros and cons of it in the following paragraphs, but in my ideology, I am in consummate dis-accord with the following paragraph.

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Some people say that now, we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals state that since movies can be viewed on mobile devices, their is no reason to watch movies in the film house. Likewise, others believe that movies are best enjoyed in the film house.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Undoubtedly,the usage of modernized machine revolutionized the agriculture industry ,but still partially unsuccessful in producing adequate amount of food .However, such intimidating obstacle could be overcome by the effective farm management policies.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Alot of the people who make up the workforce are uninvolved in exercising activities whether during the week, on weekends or when less busy and this has resulted in some health challenges.

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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees play a vital role in having life on the planet blue. Many individuals believe that rather than spending on real estate building structure in urban area, it is better to do more for plantation drives. I fully support the notion.

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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees play a vital role in having life on the planet blue. Many individuals beileve that rather than on real estate building structure in urban area, it is better to do more plantation drives there. I fully support the notion.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent somewhere elsewhere. To what extant do you agree with this view.

Arts having a distinctive place in the evolution of human history. In contemporary time, governments are spending money on arts in varied proportion while some people argue that it should be utilized for other better means. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the government needs to invest a balanced amount on arts.

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Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.

It is true that consumption of junk food is increasing day by day and becoming a routine habit for people in few locations. It is assert by few individuals that excess and regular intake of packed food will have negative repercussions on the way of living and eating habits. I completely agree with notion that convenience food have adverse effects on human life.

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People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

Extreme sport has gained popularity these past few years as one of leisure activities for those who love daring stunts. Although these type of sports can be exhilarating, it could potentially harms one's life. Some agrued that rescuers should not risk their life to save those in danger while participating in those sports as they must already realised the consequences of joing it. I have to agree with the fact that rescue workers should allow to choose whether to save or not.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern times the world has become globalized, and the influence of occidental cultures over the entire planet has made people think that a good society position and having a lot of money and properties are the most important things for an individual to pursue hapiness. I agree with this statement, but I do not share this way of thinking.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, electronics play a major role in day-to-day life. Most importantly in the lives of kids. This essay below discusses the different pros and cons and my idea of kids using a computer daily.

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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country rather than living as a separate minority group with different lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is a trend to move and live in another country among educated peoples. Owing to this some country has become cosmopolitan societies. In the current scenario some people opined that immigrants should gel up with host nation where others says to live as a minority with own lifestyle. I agree that immigrants should accept new culture. In this essay I shall put forth my arguments to support my view.

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You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic. Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer. You should write at least 250 words

The total human population is a staggering eight billion, and growing every second. The number of languages spoken throughout the worls is truly remarkable. However, it can be seen that there is an exodus of people travelling to native English speaking countries, to name a few - Americal, Australia and Britain, their pourpose is to entroll in schools, colleges and universities. In this essay, I would like to express my opinion for this mass migration and what exactly makes English such a vi...

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