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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Today more peoples are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for teh travellers ?

In today's era,peoples want to go with some place where they never went before and want to explore more places on this earth. That's why travelling become some popular topic and become passion to everyone. In this essay, I will explain why travelling is increased as compared to earlier and its benefits.

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Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally agreed that poor people in the world cannot be supported by world communities and simple citizens. Instead of this, people and their governments should protect and increase living standards of their communities. This essay disagrees with that suggestion partially but supports the idea that countries and individuals should protect poor part of their community. This essay will first look at how countries can impact poor nations by help of international organizations and then, ...

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers . Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reason to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

It is rightly said 'Health is wealth. ' A healthy body and a sound mind strikes a perfect balance in an individual's life . Physical education and sports should be mandatory in the curriculum. It enhances various aspects of an individual.

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Now, people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes? What are the effects on individual and society?

Undeniably, the present scenario witnesses meager presence of folks at home. This is probably due to the work load and targets one has to accomplish, and the other plausible cause is that masses like to detach themselves by partying or by just being with the pals. Pernicious implications are gauged on the person and the whole community.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.

Nowadays, a great number of children waste their time playing games, just a small deal of their time is used to play sports. From the point view of mine, this is not a positive way for children to develop.

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It is common aspiration among many young peopleto run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

Earlier people used to prefer to work for an organization throughout their lives and retired from there after a lifetime service. But thesedays, trend has changed,. Usually, young people aim to start their own set up no metter small or big. So that, to avoid being on someone lurch. I agree with this point of view, in this way, they take several bold steps and bear both pros and cons. In this essay, i will discuss the merits and demerits to start a business.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is becoming very expensive nowadays and there is a debate among people whether government should provide completely free education or not. I strongly believe that education should be available to everyone for free of cost.

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Some people believe that schools should group their pupils according to academic ability. Others believe students should be grouped together regardless of academic ability. Write an essay supporting one side of this debate.

There is no doubt that teaching methods vary from one educational institution to another. However, some people think that streaming is very beneficial for students' academic progress, while others oppose this view and prefer classes to be formed spontaneously. In this essay, I will explain my support to the latter view, with examples. Firstly, sorting Students on the base of their marks and learning abilities may have a negative impact on students who are ranked to be at a lower level than others. In other words, pupils donut like to be seen less intelligent than their fellows. Therefore, such action can injure their feelings and dignity, and create a sense of envy among students. My nefew, for example, has suffered from this Strategy after being s aparated with a number of his mates because of their poor performance in exams. Not only this made him feel shame and destroyed his self - esteem but also he was bullied by ether students for being Stupid, as they dese...

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Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there more important priorities for the tax-payers’ money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, prioritizing health care could bring great benefits. Firstly, the health system these days almost cost people an arm and leg which makes it hard to access good health assistance. As a result, some individuals looked for alternative medicine which is a lot cheaper; however, it does not have proven therapeutic claims, unlikely sometimes; caused worsening of their health condition. Another reason is that, some remote areas still do not have decent hospitals. To illustrate, som...

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individual and companies to shopping online?

Today, the world is transforming in different way. one of the rising sector in which affect dynamic changes in our society and economic system-most commonly in the sector of IT (information technology) it's enchance the capabality to buy a product without moving at home. online shopping is started grip in the market and people make it mind to get easy. In Pakistan mostly woman, children and people especially they don't travel easly in market due to some reson (old age, transpotanction).

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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer.

Nowadays, there are plethora of new technologies have emerged and it has both fruitful and bad effect on many children. They spend most of their time indoorsand have little contribution to the natural world because technology have developed at a great extent and new attractive things have came by which they have addicted and spend most time in their homes and do not come outside by which they have overwhelming effects on everything.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?

These days, even though people are busy with work, vaccation has immense importance. Some argue that employers should give longer holidays to employees to motive them in working. I strongly agree with the above statement.

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In developing countries growing population is a significant problem should government provide new homes in cities or countries?

In this present era, population have been increasing, which creates a lot of problems in developing countries. Providing adequate shelter to the blooming generation is a major concern of the government. Nevertheless, this essay will examine which is the better place to build new shelters, whether in the urban or rural area. I personally believe the countryside is the best option.

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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In most part of the world today, we find out that fashion is dictated by the current trends which includes hair styles and clothing.

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Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

Energy is main source of sustainbility of human race on the earth. As of now, major source's for it is Solar, Wind, Hydro. As they doesn't meet the requirement's, scientist found Atomic energy as main alternative source, for fulfillment. Eventhough, it can be alternative source, it has it's own advantages and disadvantages, which we will discuss in the later part.

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

Nowadays, children are being examined on regular basis from an early age, not only they are evaluated in exams but also on day to day basis in form of quiz, class participations and presentation. However, this examining culture has some merits and demirits. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of examination from the early grades to higher grades.

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Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

I disagree with the statement that people do not entertain themselves as much as they used to because of modern technology. I believe that modern technology has not made people less creative. In fact it has changed the definition of leisure and the lifestyle of people. Modern technology has changed our definition of leisure. Earlier, leisure meant going out and meeting people, playing outdoor games, going to cinema to watch movies and so on. However, today, leisure time is full of choices. We have so many things to do within the four walls of our house. We can watch countless programs on national and international channels; we can play online games; we can chat with friends and relatives in any corner of the world; we can do arm-chair tourism by which we can visit any historical place or museum sitting in our arm-chair. That is why perhaps it looks as if we people do not entertain ourselves as much as we used to in yesteryears. Another reason why people don’t entertain as...

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Because of technology and mass media, competitive sports have become increasingly popular, in recent decades. Therefore, some people believe that sports professionals deserve to earn higher than individuals in other professions while others are of the opinion that this is highly unfair. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and justify why I believe that there are several other professions that deserve the high pay that sportsmen are fortunate to recieve.

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Some people hold that we should spend money and time on the protection of wild animals while others suggest that the money should be spent on populations living in the poorest areas of the world. What is your opinion?

In recent years, animal protection has become a constant subject of ongoing scientific research and an issue of concern. Some individuals claim that wildlife conservation is in need of the enormous devotion of money and time. Others state that the spending should be conceded to facilitating human populations. From my perspective, i espouse

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Childern have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

Nowadays, childern are being examined on regular basis since very early age, not only they are evaluated in exams but on day to day basis in form of quiz, class participations and presentation. However, is it beneficial or has some drawback? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of examination from the early grades to higher grades.

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