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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia.As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Obesity is becoming increasingly problematic in younger children, especially in Australia more than half of the child population is affected by overweight. Many consider that schools are highly responsible in supervising the kind of food intake and excercise routines of their pupil to ensure a healthy future generation. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with the above statement.

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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, people have different views about how modern lifestyles is. Some people believe that having a healthy style is really hard in this developing society. Meanwhile, others find it easy to have a good way of living. In my opinion, it cannot be denied that modern life causes many health problems and leads human to an unhealthy style. However, people need to aware the importance of having a healthy lifestyle and follow this model of life.

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Topic: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages

It is true that new technologies have tremendous effects on the way children spend their free time. While this may have several benefits, I believe that overall the drawbacks are more significant.

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the percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

It is true that the propotion of obesity children in Western nations has grown by 20% in the past decade. This essay will take a further investigation into the basics of the issue and figure out the rationable behind it as well as the related repercussions.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, taking up an occupation straight after finishing high school can bring some advantages especially in term of finance and practical experience. Firstly, students can earn money and pay for their living expenses . Particularly in rural areas, parents cannot afford university tuition fees. Furthermore, universities might be far from their home, hence, in addition to tuition fees, they need to cover other expenditures such as house or apartment rent . Secondly, following th...

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The following are measures which will be considered to assure the reliability of the research

- Replicability: It refers the act of repeating things for another time in order to avoid the error which was done at first. This will be achieved through preparing research materials for instance, and revise them a couple times to ensure the accuracy of what is meant to be in the search tools. Also, replicability will be done during data analysis phase, where transcripts will be written carefully and rechecked another time, and when they are being used.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is obvious we all get sick at some point as a human being. But now a days we can see there is a drastic increase of the number of people getting sick. Diseases can be categorised in to two, where as communicable diseases and non- communicable disease. There is a rapid increase in the number of patients of non- communicable diseases because of wrong food patterns, busy lives and many more reasons have led this increment.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Visiting countries has become a recent and popular trend that allows people to experience some new thing such as trying different food or sightseeing cultural monuments. While some people claim that travelers should obey to the host's culture and their habits, others consider accepting international differences important.

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Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle or should people make their own decisions?

It is the right of every individual to decide about the lifestyle he should lead. Though, the government cannot pose any view on people's way of living but certainly it can help the public in leading a good life by creating equal opportunities.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Our youth these days spend a lot of their lesiure time in the shopping centers. Some in the society are afraid that this under utilization of our youth's leisure time has a negative influence on them and in result is detrimental to our society. I partially agree with this view because of my view that everything in excess acts as a poison, and therefore a balance must be reached.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centers. It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society.

I agree with the premise. The explosion of the middle class resulted in a requirement for avenues where they can spend their hard earned money usually for relaxation purposes. Shopping centers are one such avenue that provide them with options to pursue latest trends, entertain themselves and utilise their leisure time. But should the time spent be regualted?

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Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

While it is believed by many that TV programme, friendship and song are the major elements impact on the development of a child in today's life, others think that parents obviously play the most important role in their offspring growth. This essay will examine both sides before declaring a preference.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, elementary education program in various countries includes another language besides their mother-tongue one. Many experts approve this early approach to foreign language than starting to learn in secondary school. This essay of mine shares the same opinion. On the one hand, disadvantages of learning languages at primary age. Some people argue that a new language should not be introduced to children as they believe that learning a new language is confusing and wastes time, could delay development of child's first language. Actually, primary students’ schedule is more open and flexible so a wide range of time can be utilized for acquiring a second language. Second, primary students have to devote much of their time to their schoolwork, learning compulsory subjects. Furthermore, students have to learn many more subjects and other subjects are more important at that age (maths, mother tongue language, science), which means that less time is contributed to learni...

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Some people think it is better to give donations to local charitable organizations, while others choose to give to national or international bodies. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, donating money to the needy is a humanitarian activity that has been embraced by individuals around the world. While some people deem that donors should do charity straight to the local community, my conviction is that it would be better to support the national or international charitable foundations. On the one hand, a number of philanthropists opt to directly give financial support or contributions of tangible items to the local funds. The reason is that local charities have a better understanding of their locality’s demands and local context via hands-on conversation with suffered people. For example, knowing the issue of fresh water deficits in south western Vietnam, local foundations prioritize to build water supply station instead of roads expansion. In addition, people who give donations to local charity are aware of their social responsibility for local community where they live or work. This means that they often give direct donations to local organizatio...

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that business meetings and trainings via the Internet has gained enormous popularity in recent years. Although this has some drawbacks, I concur that the benefits should be paid more attention to.

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Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

The issue of whether tertiary education should accept well-qualified students or scholars of all ages without good performance, causing some public controversy in recent years. Although choosing the students with the highest marks is prominent, my conviction is that accepting all applicants of all ages is a high priority. There are several reasons why young people with good academic results should be exclusively entitled to further education. First, to apply to the courses such as economy, science fields, students are equipped with good fundamental knowledge which are assessed by passing the examinations with flying colors. For instance, in order to a programmer whose job is to create the programs through lines of code, student certainly needs to be fluent in academic theories of algorithm, which are hastily acquired by well- qualified students. Second, young individuals or those with excellent academic backgrounds possess the skilled manpower for society to do well in an...

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the rate of violent crimes in society. It would certainly be easy to garner support for such a move, but solely adapting such a policy will do little to effect social change.

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Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

Some students prefer to study abroad because it offers them with wide opportunities and exposure to the outer world. Others prefer to study in their home country to be able to fall in line with the career demands in the home country. This essay will discuss why studying in home country has its benefits but why studying abroad is more beneficial in terms of exposure.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There would be a large number of factors impacting the job consideration. People often believed that salary is the most crucial element when choosing a company. However, I believe that other factors can play the alternative role towards remuneration.

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Inventors are not important as doctors. To what extent you agree with this statement?

Although some people think that physicians are more pivotal than inventors, I believe that both of them are important to the society.

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