IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 938

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In today's world, advertisement has become a significant tool for marketing a product. While some argue that advertisement increases awareness about products that may improve our lives, others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things. I strongly believe that the latter is more correct, as will be explained.

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With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

n the present day world, an increasing number of people opt fast food over homely meals. Fast food outlets like KFC, Pizza Hut etc has become commonplace in almost every nook and corner of the world. Thus, people find it convenient to replace home-cooked traditional dishes with junk food.In my opinion, this development has more negative effects than positive. There are countless hazards that are brought in by fast food. First, eating a regular diet of processed food is the main cause for obesity. This increase in body mass make our body prone to lifestyle disorders like increased blood glucose, pressure and cholesterol levels.It will in turn deteriorate our health and may even lead us to depression. Thus it is evident that dining out regularly would negatively affect out physical and mental helath. Furthermore, as people turn away from traditional dishes, they would soon loose its significance. This will lead to decrease of diversity of various indegenous dishes. Moreove...

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Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that animals have a crucial role in maintaining the ecological balance on earth. It is argued that only those animals are to be protected those are imperative for the human being. Although, I am at completely discord with this statement as the animals play an indispensable part in human's life. This essay intends to elucidate the argument against the favour of my stance in the upcoming paragraph.

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Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like.

Youth are the citizens who need to takecare of soceity for next generation. They have have right to decide in which profession they need to choose, while some people say that parents need to select particular course and tell them to study or else they may take wrong decisions.

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

Who does not like to spend money? Now, people likely spending more money more than saving it because they would like to enjoy their life or show off to their friends. It happens to most people and it is a negative development which affects a lots to their future.

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some believe that government should provide free health care.However some think that government may not able to provide health care and people should pat for it. what do you think?

Authorities find it challenging to subsidies the health care system, due to the increase of financial requirement, which in turn, drives some people to suggest that the patients should provide themselves, on the other hand, others insist that health care should be governmental responsibility.

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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that technological imprivements will eventually lead to a loss on traditional culture from different parts of the world, as these two won´t be able to get along together in the future. It is not agreed that traditions are not going to be relevant with the advances of technology, because these last ones could even help the cultures to survive. The essay will firstly, describe how technology may help traditions not to disappear, and secondly, explain why some traditions will not ge...

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While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

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What are the advantages of maternity leave? Which side for you feel outweighs the other.

In this 21st century, companies are giving more importance to human power compared to the old age. The owner of the organization is now aware that to enhace their business and keep running business smoothly, skilled people are the top most need with long term commitment. To coqure this, nowadays, companies are offering a number of benifits to their employees such as paid leaves in the pregnancy emergency. I honestly feel this is the best way to encourage lady skilled workers to work for any...

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

People believe that the expenditure of art by government is unnecessary and some other sector deserves this money more. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement.

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Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are different stages of life. Most people enjoyed as a teenager and many of the people likes their adult life. Teenager life is totally different from adult life, both have different taste. Many people have assumption that teenager lives bring more happiness, on another hand the concept is totally different some of people consider adult life happier. I will discuss both point of views and give my opinion.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays people don’t have much time to spend on reading newspaper, so they mostly try to find the easiest way to get up -to -date. Obviously internet is playing vital role in people lives to get all kind of news faster and in easier way. But newspaper will be always valuable because mostly older generations like to read news from newspaper.

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Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays television has become very important for most of the people. Television is one of the most attractive scientific technology for people, many people have habit of watching only television in their spare time. Although, people have lots of work to do in their free time but due to dramas and programs people ignore their other activities. I am agree with this statement and I will share my views related to this.

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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

Nowadays undoubtedly crimes are increasing more as compared to the past in both developing and developed countries. Many of the people want to live in a secure environment and they want to spend their lives peacefully, therefore most of the population of developing countries want to migrate to developed countries for the good quality of life. I will share my views about this topic and will also give some opinions.

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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The common feature of the internet today is that people are more socially involved with each other. Both Mobile phones and internet serve the same purpose. I believe, that the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For a major proportion of the people, there’s a perspective that the primary reason of work is wages but there’s a substantial herd who still believe that a mere handsome salary can’t be only factor of satisfaction unless it offers good work culture and ambience. So, In this essay I would like to portray both the perspectives and hence, outline my personal interpretation to it.

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