IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 132

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Saving money is crucial for everyone, including young individuals and for their future. I totally agree with this statement as saving money is beneficial for adults.

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Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Numerous countries around the world celebrates a lot of festivals with lump sum money. Which is not considered to be good by some people as they think this money can be used as resource for many existing issues in the societies. Whereas, there is importance of celebration among people. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss about both before getting into agreement or disagreement.

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Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Media is playing pivotal role nowadays. Many other platforms other than Television and radio have given a lot of opportunities to journlists . Such media is going too personal and publising news everywhere for TRPs. Some people supports it whereas other opposes it. In the upcoming paragraph, I will discuss both views and will give my viewpoint at the end.

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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face.

It is argued that relationship which can be build via social media networks is not always good and valuable rather than in the real life where we can face each other in person.Although,generating online friendships has several benefits,I am in favor of making friends face to face.

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are both entertainment and fun, discuss both the views and give your opinions.

There are people who find that it is a big problem to put animals in zoos while others find it funny to have zoos. Both sides have their advantages and disadvantages so in this essay I will discuss all the ideas and will share my own opinion.

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Several people think that it is understandable to give the state permission to our phone call records and online text to ensure security, However, others argue that this information is private, and it needs our allowance to be accessed. In this essay, I will explain about this notion as well as my argument.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary Public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is well known that people pay taxes for the country necessities. Some individuals belive that authorities should receive much higher fees from citizen's pockets for better public services such as transportation and education. However, the remaining are convinced that heavy taxes are a misery . Moreover, it is important to have a balance between high fees and the population needs.

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The table below provides information about the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation during the year. Additionally, the chart illustrates survey results indicating visitors' satisfaction levels over the same two periods.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays jobs turnover frequency is escalating, leading to a distracted employment conditions, thus, Experts believe that deciding on a specified career path is more beneficial than bouncing over from one job to another, I absolutely agree with this statement because it will lead to job progression, in addition to financial stability.

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Some experts believe that it is better to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Children are encourage to learn a foreign language, some believe that teach them at primary school is better than secondary school. Although there are disadvantages teaching new language in the early age, I believe that the advantages are far greater.

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Percentage of people arrested in 1990 and 1994 and the reasons why they arrested

The charts illustrate the percentage of males and females arrested between 1990 and 1994, along with the reasons for their recent arrests.

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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people argue that cooking is a valuable skill which goes on throughout our lives and youth of today should learn how to cook basic meals as it is a survival skill and many benefits, which can not be overlooked, many other believe that it is a wasting time and resources. This essay intends to discuss both perpectives. I believe it should be a personal choice and can not not imposed on the children.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

It is observed that large cities around the world have become overcrowded with private vehicles over the last three decades.

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not-too-distant future, technology is completely replaced the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , artificial intelligence is believed to be becoming an advancement level in our lives, especially, in education. With the appearance of artificial intelligence and sophisticated learning platforms, some predict that technology could soon replace human teachers entirely. While, technology undoubtedly offers tremendous advantages. Also, I agree with this opinion becouse for some reasons, but I still believe that there are other aspects to consider.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many companies try to influence their consumers by advertising. I completely agree with the statement due to company finances and how they lose their customers. I will express my points in this essay.

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The values that we learn from our parents and family have a greater influence on our future success than any knowledge and skills we learn at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, people think that future success is the function of families' values, neither knowledge nor skills that schools teach. I do not subscribe to this idea owing to the fact that the population who is really good but does not have an academic diploma cannot find nice job opportunities and live, but when people have family values, they are good humans who help other people .

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In many places, new homes are needed l, but the place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

Housing requirement is among the basic requirements of humans . However , due to population expansion, there is a limited space available to build these homes in cities. And , the only place where these homes could be built is in the countryside. Some sociologists argue that it is the vital to protect the countryside and one should not build new homes in rural areas. In my opinion, I think rural areas need to be equally developed like cities and one should consider building homes in the countryside.

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Many countries spend large amounts of money on world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead these monies can be spent on encouraging young children to take up sports at a young age. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a contentious issue whether huge international sports events are a good investment or an unnecessary spending. Some people believe it is better to use this budget to organize activities for kids. In this essay, I will elaborate on this subject and give my point of view on this situation.

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More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development？

It is notable that there is a trend of growing populations living in accomodations with less spacious spaces or even without outdoor areas. However, while some people could get benefits from it, I believe that it is a negative development in regard of residing in smaller places.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bar. To what extent do you agree?

While it is a commonly held belief that prisoners must remain in jail, there is also an argument that prisoners should participate in community work for free. I strongly agree with this idea, because it allows them to enroll in the community and decrease the percentage of crimes after they released.

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