IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 162

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Most individuals think that state-of-the-art technology has experienced by making strong bonds with individuals, However, the rest of the people believe that it has not effective way. I strongly agree that the latest platforms have enabled and enhanced individuals to find more meaningful engagements with others.

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Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

Some people suggest that if people want to achieve success, they must strive to work, and also make up their minds to advance toward their goals. Effort and determination are the most important factors which decide whether we can complete things. However, others think there are other significant causes that affect our road to the success.

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The rise of social media influencers has changed the landscape of advertising and marketing. Do the advantages of influencer marketing outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, many people enjoy using Social media. Some of people think marketing in the network has more benefit. while, others believe that markiting in social media has drawback. In this essay will examine my prspectives and present personal opinion.

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Some people think that history has nothings or little to tell us, while others think that studying the past can help us better understand he present.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The debate between whether should history tell something useful to us remains perennial in these years. While some people think that history telling little to us, I find myself more aligned with a proponent of history is quite significant to us and we can learn deeply through history.

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To what extent has the internet made life convenient?

We live in a technological era where the development of new technologies is fast and the online platforms capture the entire world. It makes our existence easier, aiding us in completing tasks or search for information without putting much effort. In my opinion, the internet dramatically changed our lives in a positive way, however some aspects of it such as bots that can generate data and task achievements lead to our degradation. It makes us idle and in general it is a double-edged sword.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Somepeople say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, as healthcare improved, more and more people gained a longer lifespan than ever before, particularly in large cities in the developed world. While some contend that population aging brings several benefits to the public, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.

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Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there has been a steady increase in the number of people who can do their work at home, thanks to the advance of modern technology. However, some people hold the view that this trend is only beneficial for staff, not for bosses. From my perspective, I partly agree with this view.

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There was a time when people only shopped out of necessity, but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity. People don't appreciate the value of money anymore. To what extent dou you agree with this view?

In the past, people only did shopping to fulfil their necessity. However, these days people use shopping as a favourite leisure activity. Some people believe that people do not accept the value of money anymore. I completely agree with this statement because today people do shopping to statisfy their pleasure, and they want to show their wealth to others.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, people make children believe that they can have whatever they want by hard working. This message comes with several advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed in this essay.

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Scientist agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health, some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people while others believe that this education will not work. Discuss both view and give your opinion

The current lifestyle of people is very fast paced and stressful. As a result, masses have started resorting to junk food as a means to fight their hunger. This has negative consequences as researchers agree that alot of oily food impacts adversely. It is believed that the problem can be addressed by bringing awareness to consumers while others believe that this technique will not work. I will discuss both views followed by my opinion.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that students should learn a language at the very primary stage in school. However, others believe that languages should be taught later. I personally believe that students should learn a language at the very early stage, and later age is not a suitable time to learn a language.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Othe people think that in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both points and give your opinion

One of the most controversial topics on education today relates to whether history is one of the top priority subjects or whether the importance of other subjects such as science and technology outweighs that of history. In this essay, I elaborate on both views and describe the reasons why I believe both subjects are equally indispensable.

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In many cities and urban areas around the world, crime is increasing. What is the cause of this? How can governments help to prevent the crimes?

The rate of crime has risen dramatically in some regions in the world. That is to say, individuals are suffering from criminal accurances in their neighbourhood or cities. It is clear that there are several reasons for this fact. In this essay, I will present some significant reasons and also, I will propose some effective solutions to prevent the crimes.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Numerous individuals consider that social networking sites—such as Facebook, Ig, and X—cause immense adverse impacts on both people and society. I generally disagree with this opinion and think that it has a positive impact in terms of socializing. However, it is significant to consider negative impacts of social networking.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

There are lots of professional sports where a growing number of athletes use several types of banned substances to increase their result. I believe that they do it because they want to achieve the highest level in their field without giving their all. And one of the solutions is to completely disengage those kinds of athletes from any official competitions for a long period.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, people have different prespectives about advertising. While some believe that advertising has significant achievements in convincing us to purchase specific products, some others claim that advertising has become remarkably repetitive to the public's eyes, so nobody is affected by them. According to a couple of reasons, the first notion is closer to my viewpoint.

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The plans below show how a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The plan illustrates the significant changes in the layout of Porth Harbour from 2000 to today. Overall, the area has undergone extensive development, resulting in a more urbanized layout with new facilities.

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Globalisation has positive and negative effects on culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Cultural exchange has both positive and negative impacts on culture.This essay will discuss both sides of globalisation’s impact on culture. In my opinion, I believe that cultural exchange is crucial and potentially harmful.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extent do you agree or disagree with opinion

Health problems are now crucial issues, resulting from inappropriate eating behaviour. Many people believe that the government should be involved by raising tax on junk food, while some believe that having some exercise and eating healthy food are more sensible. In my point of view, I agree with latter view with the reasons discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In order to make youngsters able to control their micro-economy, lessons of financial literacy must be involved in schools' curriculums. I completely agree with this view on the grounds that by obtaining more information regarding economy, next generations would feel secured with their savings and can efortlessly evaluate financial opportunities.

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