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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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下圖提供了 1970 年至 2020 年四個亞洲國家居住在城市的人口百分比信息，並對 2030 年和 2040 年進行了預測。

The provided charts illustrate data about the residents in four Asian nations living in urban areas between 1970 and 2020, and the predictions from 2030 to 2040.Overall, it is clear that percentages of the population in countries were increased, among that Malaysia had a sharp growth.

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Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Will the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated with it?

Nowadays, there is an opinion believing that vreating a completely new mean of language is necessayry for humans from different countries around the world to communicate with others. From my own perspective, I suppose the drawbacks of cost aand social disapproval overshadow thepotential advantage of exchanges and the essay will explain my view in detail.

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Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music performers. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals opine that celebrities performing pop music should be paid higher salary in comparison to those majoring in classical music, while others are not in consummate accord with the aforementioned idea. This essay would delve into discussing the two perspectives as well as stating my support for the former one.

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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many health problems including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

There can be no doubt that the topic of changes in people’s habits of eating are leading them to health concerns including obesity. Although this scenario has resulted from busy schedule, hopes can be found in the form of meal preparing.

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Some people believe that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes.Other think that it is better to produce these locally.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that importing foreign movies and TV programmes is a good way to promote a country 's culture while others argue that those social platforms should be only produced on a local scale.Persuading people to view foreign movies and TV programmes helps them to understand more about any country 's cultural values on a global scale whereas producing their own movies and films can greatly cut cost . This author agrees with both of these statements and will demonstrate why throughout the essay.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent days, several states implemented laws against maturity discrimination while hiring. This can cause both pros and cons to countries.

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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a controversial discussion about whether it is better to import films and TV programmes from other countries or local products. This writer believes that it will have benefits for both viewpoints.

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some people belive that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A number of individuals say that the traditional culture will be more well-known when the movies and TV channels are opened globally, whereas some people believe that it has a lot of benefits when produced locally. In my opinion, I do totally concur with the first statement because importing our films and programmes brings a myriad of advantages for the country such as profit or reputation.

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Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign film and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The majority consider that importing international films and TV channels is good for a country's culture. While others believe that manufacturing these as local products is better. This essay stands for the former statement, it also discusses both sides which variety of country culture and maintain the uniqueness of our culture.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than produced locally. Why people buy imported food?What could be done to encourge people to buy local food?

Nowadays, many people prefer buying imported food to purchasing local food. This author believes that people choose food imported from other countries due to its standards. However, this can be solved by improving the quality of products.

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Nowadays young people prefer to move to big cities, older people, however are the opposite and prefer to live in the countryside. What are the positives and negatives of this trend?

The older people tend to spend their lives in the villages but the younger populace migrate to metropolises. Its resulting outcomes may affect them in a positive or a negative way. This essay will evaluate both to explore more about the effects of this trend.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is said that many individuals spend a large amount of time using smartphones. The increase in the variety and accessibility of apps and online services has made smartphones incredibly appealing. Lack of public awareness and hectic schedule are the cause of this situation. In my perspective negative effects of this habit outweigh the positives.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Significant number of parents may prefer to occupy their children’s free-time with various activities, whereas some others believe that the education time in schools is enough for their children. In my opinion, although education systems in recent years faces significant developments in the field of diversity and enrichment in topics, many aspects and topics should be taught in a separated timetable.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some people claim that encouraging children to work hard to reach their goals is a must in this modern-day, while others have a different view on that. The following essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this point.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the current layout of an airport and the proposed changes following its redevelopment next year.

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Write advantages and disadvantages of co-education.

Since the revolution of education in this era,we have been introduced to various different education systems .Co-education is also a part of this change,playing a pivotal role in bringing the minds of all genders.Despite the mixed views about the topic,it has become important to be aware of such change,creating both positive and negative impacts in our lives.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In the contemporary era, the telecommunication system and information technology have gained remarkable progress and development, making it easily accessible for anyone in this society. Some assert that, the rapid increase in the usage of popular websites of social media have many unfavourable influences on the population. My stance on this issue, which is totally disappointment with the above notion will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary societies, owing to globalization, there is a belief that having occupations in an international corporation is the essence of comprehending other traditions. This writer firmly disagrees that there are also some ways to broaden their horizon about different cultures on account of traveling to another nation and language learning.

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Some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others claim that they should have freedom to choose their favourite activities. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

Many people have different views regarding dangerous sports. Some people state that the government is supposed to ban some sports which bring more danger to the participants. Others believe that it is a social freedom to let society choose what they want to express in sport.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

There are ongoing debate where some college students argue that it is important to learn another subject in order to supplement their main subject, while the other think that they have to devote all of their time to deepen their knowledge on their subject. Personally, I believe that learning another field could improve abilities not only in the main subject but in other fields which still important to support our lives.

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