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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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With The Increasing Use And Development Of New Technology, Many Machine Are New Able To Do The Work Which People Used To Perform. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether replace humans with machines in the manufacturing processes is a recurring argument. This writer argues that the benefits of high productivity and the quality of products outweigh the drawbacks of the loss of occupation seen in people.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Urban areas have always been places where people love to find their fortune which makes people move to town. This phenomenon led to numerous problems because of the overpopulation of the city. This essay will discuss the effects and solutions from both government and individuals.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or diagree?

It is argued that fine arts such as music, art and drama are equally important as other school subjects especially at the fundamental level. I totally agree with this statement, because these particular subjects improve the imagination, motor, and cognitive functions of students.

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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the rich countries should not give monetary aid to developing and underdeveloped countries as it does not combat poverty. I believe that the developed countries should give some other types of help to the poor countries and not direct financial aid.

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Some people think that government should not give international aid if they have disadvantaged people like unemployed and homeless in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the governments should not give aid to poor countries if there are underprivileged people within their own country. I believe that the developing and developed countries should always step forward to help the impoverished countries.

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Some people say the most important thing about being rich is that it gives you the opportunity to give back or help the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by some that the best thing about being affluent is having a chance to help the needy. While one benefit of being rich is that they can help the impoverished, there are many other advantages of being rich, which are perhaps more important.

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Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that governments should only help their own citizens as it is impossible to help everyone. While I agree that governments ought to prioritise their own people, I also believe that they should help countries which are too poor to help themselves.

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In recent years, many governments have brought in laws to ban smoking in public places, such as bars, restaurants and offices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with banning smoking in public places?

In recent times, there has been a significant increase in the number of people who smoke. These humans can be witnessed everywhere, however, the majority of governments have brought in laws to ban smoking in public locations, which means that people can not smoke in places such as restaurants and offices. I tend to agree with this idea, and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is irrefutable that branded products and services have become increasingly popular nowadays. This essay intends to discuss the reasons for this increasing brand consciousness. While there are some drawbacks of this trend, I consider it to be far more beneficial.

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People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get the newest fashion and the latest technology. Do the disadvantages of a throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?

It is irrefutable that more and more people prefer buying new things rather than getting their old products repaired. While this craze for novelty or the latest products and fashion has some advantages, its drawbacks certainly outweigh them.

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Some think that these environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved, while others think that governments cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people hold the opinion that individuals on their own cannot do much to protect the environment, while it is believed by others say that even governments can make a difference only with the active support of people. This essay shall discuss both views. I believe that while there are some environmental areas in which government intervention is paramount, I also believe that in some areas individuals must lead the way.

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Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the development of the internet stops the necessity of public libraries anymore. I strongly disagree with this statament, because public libraries are trusted facilities for reaching the academic source of information and these facilities will adapt to the technological development.

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Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business options. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that climate change is detrimental for companies, whereas others believe that climate change offers many business opportunities and so is good for companies. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives, but I agree with the former side.

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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Environmental degradation has become an issue of grave concern. While I believe that big steps to save the environment are needed to be taken at the global level, I disagree that no steps can be taken at the national and individual level.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, more offspring spend hours of their days on their smartphones than ever before.The main reason behind that is the recent technological advancement with smartphone penetration not only reached adults, but also the children. Moreover, with more parents entering the workforce than ever before, that has an implication with children left without their parents' control.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that some students are used to choosing subjects from the other fields besides their core subjects. I think that it is normal either to choose subjects from the side directions to further their knowledge or even to broaden their mind. However, it is argued whether it is vital for their further qualification as it can distract their attention from their majors.

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School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that schools must not oblige adolescents to study foreign languages. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement. Firstly, knowledge other languages can give an opportunity to get a degree abroad. Secondly, a forcing kids to learn a foreign language develops children’s discipline and teaches them to be responsible.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of water and air from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

In most of the developing nations, the quality of water and air is affected by construction and industrial activities. This essay explains causes like how carbon dioxide emission and sewage water from industries and construction mess with water and air. Furthermore, solutions to control this.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The development of technology has been increasing in recent years, especially about computer. Many people believe that computer is the most beneficial invention in the last past ten decades. In this essay I strongly agree that computer is the best thing that has ever been made by human.

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People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfil their needs. There is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, there are excessive amounts of ads for products,some people believe that to buy a product we only need quality and fulfil of needs.I believe that advertisements are really helpful,however, they can distract the customers.

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