IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 373

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g., film stars, pop musicians or sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

One of the most prevalent trends in the contemporary world is the cumulative increase in entertainment businesses, where people go and see their heroes. A portion of individuals believe that some stars are making huge amounts of money, some of them say it should be limited, but some think higher pay should be paid to the professionals. I agree money should be paid for their talents but we can not ignore scientists or doctors who contribute to society.

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There are many inventions in human history, but some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe the vital turning point in history was the invention of the lightbulb or electricity. However, it is plain to see the internet has changed our way of life as human beings and has offered us a future full of opportunities. In this essay, I will explore how Bill Gates' discovery in the 1970's has led to a digital revolution benefitting our world and education in a variety of ways - both in a positive and negative way.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and poluttion problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures fdo you think might be effective?

As society develops, it is becoming clear that we must change how we affect the climate of our planet. Our species, through its evolution, have gradually polluted the planet to a point where temperatures are drastically changing and natural disasters are pillaging our ecosystem. I completely agree that hiking up the price of gas, also known as petrol, could be beneficial in stopping the decline of climate change before it becomes too late.

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantagous?

With the rapid development of technology, driverless vehicles are becoming a reality and within a few decades, all cars will run without driver intervention. Personally, I believe that driverless cars will bring more benefits than possible disadvantages.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

The question of whether learning English or learning local languagues is more important, is always a controversial issue in our contemporary society. This essay will discuss whether it is imperative for everyone to learn English and whether we should preserve our local languages.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than work for a company or organisation. Why is this the case ? What are the disadvantages?

In recent times, more individuals are opting for self-employment instead of working for a corporation. This is because it provides the person with more freedom with decisions regarding their work life, however, it also means that they cannot experience the stability that a company offers.

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The data below shows information about energy production in a country in two separate years 1995: coal (29,8%), gas (29,63%), petro (29,27%), nuclear (6,4%), other (4,9%) 2005: coal (30,93%, gas (30,31%), petro (19,55%), nuclear (10,10%), other (0,10%)

The data provided delineates the information regarding energy production in a country in 1995 and 2005. The pie charts compare energy being produced in the nation, which were coal, gas, petro, nuclear, and followed by several others.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advanced technology has taken over people's lives in recent times. It is argued that life was less complex in the past when there was no technology. I completely disagree with this statement and believe that sophisticated technology has made our lives more convenient and less laborious and improved the education system.

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The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the news media influence an individual's life a lot because of having a negative mentality which develops distraction. It is agreed that this matter will change the way people live in the current scenario; firstly, the news media provides the platform where people get all the updates about the weather forecast and other is crime rates.

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Some people say that government should fund the performing class (drama, music, etc.), but on the other hand the other people say it should be self-funded by the organization or student’s parents. Discuss both view, and give your own opinion

The ongoing discourse regarding financial support for the performing arts has sparked a divide between those advocating for government funding and those promoting self-sustainability. Supporters of government funding argue that it ensures accessibility and equal opportunities, fostering cultural enrichment. On the other hand, proponents of self-funding emphasize financial responsibility and creative independence, despite concerns about limited access for low-income individuals. Striking a balance between government backing and self-sustainability emerges as a key consideration for fostering a vibrant and inclusive performing arts scene.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

The trend to study overseas in college is increasing. Although students struggle with the cultures and languages in other countries, they will also gain valuable experiences for their careers in the future. In my opinion, it is better to study in a different country despite the challenges . I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

In this rapid development that is centralized in big cities, people who live in rural areas start to settle in metropolises to seek bigger opportunities. I believe this condition brings detrimental effects to our natural environment because it reduces green areas and contributes to global warming.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary world, the debate of whether mature individuals should accept their dismal conditions, such as an unpleasant job or shortage of money, or whether it is better to try to deal with such situations and to enhance current conditions has aroused in people's discussion. Nevertheless, this essay agrees with the latter statement and will present both views.

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Despite health warning, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concerned about this? what solution would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary era, smoking has become a common trend all around the world, although people are aware of its deleterious effects. In this essay,I will delve deeper into this topic and come out with some reasonable responses.

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The music industry has changed vastly since the golden days of Beethoven and Mozart. With the rapid growth of the internet and smartphones, listening to music has become easier than ever. Instead of having to attend concerts, listeners can just plug their headphones into a smartphone and listen to music online. While this has its fair share of benefits, record labels have been hesitant to expand into the online music industry since it has various drawbacks, including piracy issues and monetization. In this essay, I will discuss the aforementioned issues as well as giving my own opinion.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend ? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Convenience foods have gained immense popularity in recent years, enabling people to cope with the fast-paced modern lifestyle. While convenience foods offer numerous benefits, I would agree that there are some drawbacks that must be considered.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

The contentious issue of whether violence depicted in television programs and computer games adversely affects society has sparked heated debates. While some contend that such depictions do not influence individuals negatively, I am of the firm conviction that they indeed have detrimental effects. In my view, exposure to violence in television and computer games desensitizes individuals to violent acts and fosters aggressive behavior.

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school should stop using books for teching children as they find them boring and use films TV and computer instead. to what extent do you agree with this ?

There has been much debate regarding the controversial topic of switching from books to technology in classrooms across the world. It can be said that the use of several mediums can be beneficial for students, but this does not negate the fact that pupils need to learn how to read and write with actual handheld texts. Therefore it is imperative that educational institutions keep using textbooks, workbooks and novels in the hopes of cultivating a love for the library and the handwritten novella.

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“Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programmes regardless of their level of academic ability”. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that admission to a higher education is more competitive than it was back in the day. It is argued that people should have the same opportunity to apply for a university or college without considering their level of academic knowledge. Although I agree that everyone should be allowed to submit their application, academic ability should always be considered in the application.

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Celebrities play an important social role in the community. What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a celebrity?

It certainly can not be denied that celebrities play an important role in the community is becoming a serious matter of concern. Therefore, some people feel that they are not socialized with the population. This has many advantages and disadvantages.

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