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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that physical education should be required part of every school day. Other believe the whole day on academic studies. Which view do you agree with use specific reasons and details to show your answer.

A group of humans supports that physical education should be learned as a subject in each school. The other group thinks that the whole day is spent on academic studies. In my opinion,the first idea is an essential fact about children and their study life.

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Many research found that some food and drink products containing bad substance for human, therefore it must be banned from the market. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is being said by researchers that specific food and drink products contain bad substances for humans, therefore they must be banned from the market. I agree with the statement as it is crucial to provide the best food quality for everyone.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increasing prevalence of obesity is a concerning global health issue that demands effective solutions. While some propose raising the prices of unhealthy foods as a remedy, I strongly disagree with this approach. Instead, I believe that combating obesity requires a multifaceted approach that encompasses education, promotion of healthier lifestyles, and regulatory measures.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A plethora of people think that the major problem concerning the nature nowadays refers to the extinction of some of the flora and fauna representatives, while others believe that there are other sufficient difficulties, like the air pollution and the violated ozone layer. I agree with the latter statement, as it concerns every creature on the planet and could lead to catastrophic consequences.

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As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Houses are the basic needs of every resident. People with limited opportunities should be provided with free housing. I totally disagree with this statement, due to many consequences.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that, nowadays, the attitude of pupils in educational environments is seriously becoming a problematical concern of many nations. There are a variety of reasons why these problems have been raised and there also are solutions to this situation.

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International tourism brings great benefits to many places. However, there were serious concerns about its impact on the local environment and residents. Do the negative effects of international tourism outweigh the benefits?

International tourism brings many benefits to many places, however, there were serious concerns about its impact on the local environment and residents. Personally in my opinion the positive effects of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages.

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In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?

Traffic on roads has become an issue in almost every country in the world. I believe that the amount of traffic can be reduced by creating flexible working hours at a society level, and by increasing the usage of public transport than that of private vehicles at an individual level.

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Every one of us should become a vegeterian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people in the modern world consider their meal pattern than before due to they want to a take balance diet, it will help to have a healthy life. So, all of us want to be vegiterian due to meat will be a cause to health issues. I totaly disagree with this statement and in this essay I will eleminate the major reasons for that.

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some people think that schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability. others think that it is better for young people with different abilities to be educated together. discuss both views and give your opinion

Schools tend to choose their pupils according to their abilities. Several people say that students should be selected according to their academic level and others say that being educated together will have a good impact to pupils with different abilities. I agree with these two statements due to everything has positive and negative sides.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of the national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some societies believe that children must be taught to be hard-working people so they can obtain everything they want. This attitude obviously contributes to their success. However, there are also some disadvantages that must be aware. Both views will be discussed in the following paragraph.

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72.The plans show information about the first floor of a library in 1998 and the same area now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Both maps display the first floor of a library before and after it was developed.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying that violent crimes have increased significantly in recent years. Even though people believe that the death penalty is not the ideal solution to stop this violence, the death penalty is mandatory in some cases.

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People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportation, while others think govt should be responsible. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

In current times, pollution is a major problem in developed countries. There is an argument about who should be responsible for these problems. Some argue that citizens should be liable for such issues which are mainly caused by transportation whereas other believes government are responsible for it. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and conclude with an opinion.

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Some peopel think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

It is argued that finances have a major role in providing positive emotions in human’s lives . This essay will highlight the opinion that cash is not capable to guarantee happiness , but it can help to attain goals which are a great source of joy .

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling goods are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Technology development in recent times has massively impacted consumer behaviour and their lives. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement in two respects, first gadgets likely make the process simpler that affects human's mobility and health, and second, technology changes will lead to disruptions in industries in order to win the market competition.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In present days, companies are underlining the new features of their products in their commercials, because in the modern world, it is harder to stay on the market and gain popularity. I think that this is a positive thing because it leads to improvements.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, citizens are aging more than in the past. Some argue that this poses problems for governments, while others contend that there are benefits. This essay will argue that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages because governments might lose money and waste time caring for the elderly.

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Some think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that, the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. I agree to a larger extent to the given statement and my inclination is elaborated in the following write-ups.

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