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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT HAVING A SET RETIREMENT AGE (Example 65 YEARS) FOR EVERYBODY, REGARDLESS OF OCCUPATION, IS UNFAIR. THEY BELIEVE THAT A CERTAIN WORKERS DESERVE TO RETIRE AND RECEIVE A PENSION AT AN EARLIER AGE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH TYPE OF WORKERS DO YOU THINK SHOULD BENEFIT FROM EARLY RETIREMENT?

There is a considerable bias when it comes to old age pensions. One school of thought believes that a set pre-decided age regardless of any employement is fair. On the other, there is a group of people who is seen opposing the trend and advocates for different pension ages correspondes to toiling level of employment. However, I found myself agreeing with the latter standpoint and believes that some set of employment deserves early pensions.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every individual is strongly connected with the country where they were born. At the same moment people are citizens of the world. Public concern has arisen about whether professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work just in the country where they did their training or in another country if they wish. In my essay, I will explain this.

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

In this modern era, people used to use credit cards rather than using cash for buying items, but in the past there was no chance to get rid of using cash and people were carrying several cash in their pockets and exposing themselves to thiefs.

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The best way to solve the world's enviromental prolem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that the better way to reduce the environmental problem is to raise the value of the fuel. While some people tend toward the viewpoint that, the most dangerous material in the earth. I would have to support the idea that we have to change our minds about using too much fuel.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that having English as a Global language is beneficial. As in this globalized world, a common language is essential, English does have some positive counterpoints in its favour compared to other languages around the world. Some of those vantages will be pointed out in the next further lines. An opinion agreeing or disagreeing with this statement will also be given.

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Nowadays, many people have easy access to computers and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games. What can be done to minimize the bad effects?

The emergence of technology is influential yet a failure however it became part of our lives that gives amusement to people, so many youths were influenced and enjoyed recreating a digital world.

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death penality is best way to control and reduce the crime rate to what extent do you agree ?

Nowadays, something that has always been discussed is Law. In specific conditions in some regions. There are various ways to manage the crime. One of them, is the death penalty. In this essay, the author will examine their stand and make summarize in the end.

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The money spent by governments on space programs would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some governments spent their budget on space projects although it is believed that subsidizing public services like educational and medical services is a priority. I strongly agree with this idea.

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The plans below show how the ground of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by seclecting and reporting the main features.

Presented for consideration are 3 pictures showing how a building changed in the three main periods.

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Topic: Student should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To achieve a goal of study, academic subjects must be prepared for students to succeed in exam. On the other hand, Some practical aspects are not required the same with academic ability in facing exam. Prioritising academic subjects is a must considering not all students in readiness for various subjects. However, there is another side about what the route of students towards their career plan. In this essay, I will elaborate more below.

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Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, there is a debate over the complexity of entering universities.In addition, this way is being sophisticated more and more over the years because of several causes.The following essay takes a look at both sides of this phenomenon.

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There is no denying the fact that computers have positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step so it is a good step to use computers, but its time should not proceed so long.This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers

Nowadays, technology has to be exposed to our children from an early age. It aims to maximize their computer skills considering how important it is to have such ability in this era both for working purposes and in giving an easiness for other activities. However, the negative effect would appear on using computers if parents neglect to control their children. In this essay, I will elaborate more.

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Nowadays, people all over the world are spending more and more time apart from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that because of industrialisation masses across the globe are spending a hefty amount of time away from closed one.The following paragraphs would shed light on their causes and impact on the life of individual and families.

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some people think that more money should be spent on developing public transportation, others believe that, instead we should spend this money in enhancing the roads Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This is one of the important debatable topic that we are going to discuss in below, about developing the public vehicles and investing more on developing the road lanes. We will discuss both the views and will provide my concern over here.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

The news editors have the main responsibility for giving the decision for publishing news either on Television and Newspaper. This essay will explain several factors behind this important decision. Regardless of the flooded from bad news, society need a balance while exposing to the bad and good news.

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Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) do not improve people's life and, therefore, government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts is used as one of the methods to convey the characteristics of nations, including statues, paintings and buildings. While some criticise regarding fewer contributions derived from such behaviours, I strongly agree with the necessity of trading in money for the perks of diversity in different countries.

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Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are a controversial perspective heating up a debate over constructing houses in native regions. While some claim that brand new buildings should be similar to the style of houses in the past, the others hold a strong view that governors should permit citizens to erect their houses by their own styles. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that countries have invested substantial amounts of money in space exploration. While some people think this activity is a waste of resources, others argue that humans must continue to explore the universe. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this topic and explain my support for the latter view.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Animals are widely used by humans for different purposes at various times. It continues to be controversial if they should have right equality with man and their exploitations by individuals should cease. Although there are valid points to both views, I am of the opinion that it is fair to treat these lesser creatures the same way as homo sapiens.

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26. Many people believe that majority of children in western countries are being obese. Is it true? Agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples.

It has become common now that children all over the world suffer from numerous health, whether bad nutrition conditions in Africa or obesity in Europe. Despite, the perfect healthcare system in Western countries, children are being obese, There are potential reasons for this phenomenon. In the following essay, I am going to elaborate on these reasons with relevant examples.

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