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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on whether the most tricky situation in this era is the extinction of creatures. While I can understand why people regard the loss of particular species of plants and animals as the main environmental problem, I do believe that there are more challenging problems needed to be addressed.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a house is the mandatory item that should be had for people in some nations. As an implication of that it might be a positive or negative instead. In my point of view, having a residence could be a negative situation and I would like to explain with some reasons.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that should focus on subjects that they are good at or that they find the most interest discuss both side and give your opinion.

It is generally believed by some people that youngsters must be focused on all materials at school, while others think they should take only one subject that were they really keen to learn more in-depth and master on it. Thus, I would discuss the merits and demerits of the given statement.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is true that some kids spend a lot of their time on using smartphones daily. There are some reasons and I believe that this trend has demerits.

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Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Nowadays, some people consider getting married and having children is a hard decision to make. While, others would argue that the best age to take this step is in the twenties age. However, I partly agree with them I strongly support those who choose to wait until their thirties. In this essay I am going to explain my point of view with clear examples.

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Without capital punishment(the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crime of violence increases. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some critics ague that not having death sentence our existence are not safe and misdeeds enlarges. Death penalties is crucial to manage misdeed in the community. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this view because capital punishment waste limited resources and it is irrevocable.

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally argeed that most people belive that paying taxes is a deety and a contribution to society.However others view that paying tax is not crucial. I partially agree with this opinion.

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Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While it is sometimes argued that the death penalty is playing an important role to control violence and security in our society. Some people believe that without death punishment causes more serious cases. In my opinion, I agree with this idea.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regards it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the past, shopping was defined as a routine domestic task, but nowadays many people are starting to define shopping as a hobby. In my opinion, I think it is a positive trend.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is the better to try and improve such situations. Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that acknowledging an undesirable situation is to be the best; however, others believe that ultimate attempts are a better solution in these cases. In my opinion, not surrendering to life challenges and difficulties are always the best choice.

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Due to so many young people dropping out of school, the rate of unemployment is increasing, and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?

Education plays a Consistent role in the early growth of students. Nowadays, the rate of unemployment significantly shot up, and the major cause behind this is, that the young generation is not focusing on education and leaving school. In this looming , essay i will briefly discuss all points how this condition can be resolved.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

In today's rapidly developing era not only adolescents, but also middle-aged and even old people are eager to study. Humans are learning foreign languages perfectly, following the proverb "a person who knows business has a coin, a person who knows language has a thousand coins". For this reason, they are also going to study abroad in order to further improve their knowledge. In this essay, I am going to explain all pros and cons of studying abroad.

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

Nowadays, the quality of living declines in urban areas. I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding a suitable solution to resolve it.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around whether environmental issues must deal with locally. However, some believe that these problems should be made globally. I agree with the latter and I think any ecological issue should be addressed by means of an international community. This essay will examine both views.

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It is claimed that one of the most important elements for life is happiness. However, depending on types of personalities and social status, it is impossible to describe its meaning exactly.

It is undoubtedly certain that happiness for everyone might not be the same. Mindsets, attitudes, personalities and standards of people differentiate it. For example, old generations would be blessed if they are healthy while youngsters are passionate about success in their lives, and for children, passing exams with flying colours may bring delight to their lives. Some people who have financial hardships may feel stressed to have babies, in contrast, for those who are rich, bringing up babies is a blessing. Therefore, it would be silly to explain how to be happy in life since there is no definite method for it.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, many people are concerned about a misbehavior problem that teachers are facing in schools especially with high school students. This essay will discuss the reasons of this issue and give solutions to get over this problem.

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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to gentically modified crops to increase the productions of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

In our constantly changing world, it seems that the growth of population in advanced countries is increasing rapidly as well. Some people feel that it will be more wise to use gentically processed products, to rise the productions of food grains. In this essay I will examine what could be the benefits and draw backs of such a decision, and will explain why I strongly believe that the advantages uprise the disadvantages.

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Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer-planning or not planning for youe leisure time?

certain people choose to not have any plans when they have their free time, while others plan their free time very carefully. This essay will elaborate this ideas.

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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at a record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how stress could be reduced.

There are several reasons why people are suffering from stress nowadays. Problems and its solutions will be mentioned in the following paragraph. This essay elaborates on the reasons for high stress in human lives and possible ways to overcome this state.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries these days, physical punishment is not legal but is still being carried out. it is argued that parents should possess the right to punish their offspring physically. I agree with this argument because this will make our children more cultured and well-behaved, and this will also create fear in the minds of children to protect them from unethical indulgent.

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