IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that success is the best measures for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Some people choose their job based on the salary rate, while others are concerning to have a satisfaction in working. I believe that job satisfaction is better than a high salary, because it will generate a good mental health and loyalty of workers.

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion?

In this contemporary era, technology is progressing at an exponential rate, and it is an irrefutable fact that the vast majority of people are dependent on technology as it has become an integral part of our lives. I strongly believe that the advantages of technology outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these view and share your opinion.

Some individuals believe that it is beneficial to educate boys and girls in separate schools while other people think that boys and girls become advantaged more from going mixed schools. I personally believe that whilst going to separate schools allow students to concentrate more on their studies because there is no possibility of being attracted by their opposite gendered peers, studying in the same schools is actually beneficial for both boys and girls because they learn to respect and understand each other.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic packaging and items like bags, and bottles are harmful to the environment. It is a man-made, and non-biodegradable product which damages the eco-system. Henceforth, to solve this issue government can create awareness and policies where individuals can avoid wastage.

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Many people join distance-learning program and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowday days a lot of people like to join online courses.However, that will not bring the same as studying in person like in uni or college. In this essay I will demonistrate the reasons why I agree with that.

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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

It is known that watching TV is beneficial for some kids when it comes to their learning habits. Thus, TV watching is necessary for children and they should watch it at their school as well as at their house. I do not agree with this statement. I believe that exposure of that much of screen time will lead to drawbacks of children's development such as anti-social behaviors and problems in their cognitive abilities.

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The best way to solve world’s environment problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion

Some people believe that increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to solve the world’s environmental problems. While I understand why they think this, I do not fully agree with the idea. I believe that increasing fuel prices alone will not be enough to solve environmental issues.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

As urban populations grow and immigration rates rise, the demand for housing continues to increase in many areas. While some argue that the countryside must be preserved at all cost, others believe that using rural areas to build new homes is necessary to meet this demand. In my view, it is crucial to strike a balance between addressing housing shortage and preserving the environment. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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Some people think that university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that students are very important things for countries. While there is a commonly held belief that students should learn whatever they need, there is also an argument that students are required to study more science and technology. In this essay, I will discuss both views and express my own perspectives in the end.

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It is a good idea for people to continue working in their old age if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that people should continue to work in their old ages. I totaly agree with this statement, because it has a positive impact on people's life.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is more useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some individuals state that television is useful to educate people whilst others think that it is more beneficial for entertainment. I personally believe that while television offers educational programs to educate people, viewers primarily watch television for recreation because it provides a wide range of entertainment options.

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Some people think that it is better for a country's economy for people to spend money, while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. (2015, 2018, 2020)

Some people believe that it is better to spend their money rather than save it, because it will positively contribute to the local economy by expanding the gross national and domestic product of the state and also strengthening the country's currency. At the same time, other people are convinced that for people it is better to preserve their financials, since the population will be able to buy more costly belongings in the long term, however saving money has many disadvantages. In my opinion, it is better to invest the capital.

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Government alone cannot be expected to solve environmental problems. It is also the responsibility of businesses and individuals to help. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I strongly agree that solving environmental problems cannot be only the responsibility of the government.Enterprises and individuals must also play an important role in protecting our earth. First of all,enterprises have a significant impact on the environment.The waste and pollution generated by many companies damage our air and water .Therefore,it is very important for enterprises to dopt environmental protection practices.For example,companies can reduce waste by using permanent materials and recycling .In addition,solar or wind energy.When enterprises take action to protect the environment,they not only help the earth,but also improve their reputation and attract more customers. Secondly,individuals also have the responsibility to prote...

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a kind of situation in the US, in which the authorities implanted a rule to do not let youngsters out of their homes after a certain time at night.There are multiple causes of this curfew such as a rapid increase in illegal activities and motor vehicle accident rates. Let us delve deeper into these given schools of thought in the following paragraphs.

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Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?

No doubt, increasing physical activity has many benefits for the body. Some people argue that building more gyms will benefit the population; it will be a good incentive to start practicing exercises. This essay highlights the associated problems and possible resolutions to improve health.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Holding new meetings, whether for business or simply for offering services to customers, is replacing the traditional form of communication. The upsides outperform the downsides due to more time efficiency and lower cost of business maintenance.

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In Some Countries,More and more people are becoming interested in finding out abut the history of the house or building they live in what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is no denying the fact that historical buildings have experienced a long history and various events. While it is held to belief that these kinds of building have become more popular recently.

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The number of people who are interested in and wearing fashionable clothes is increasing. Is this a positive or negative development

These days, fashionable clothes are gaining popularity among people and following a fashion become a habit for ordinary people and give rise to spread all over the world. While this trend may give individuals a sense of happiness and stylishness, I believe it is a negative turn of events overall.

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Many people have now poor memory. What is probably the reason and what should we do to improve?

It is undeniable true that nowadays most of individuals are more forgetful and have a weak memory. This essay will examine the major extents contributing to this issue, while suggesting some measures to enhance the memory.

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I disagree with the statement that travelling in a group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. While there are some benefits to this way of travel, I believe it may not be the best option for everyone.

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