IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 60

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing interest in teenagers learning music. Many teachers argue that all pupils should be trained on how to use musical instruments. I completely agree with this notion to a great extent, and I will delineate my reasons in this essay, supported with relevant examples.

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Some people think educational success depends upon good teacher, others believe that it depends upon attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There has been a constant debate on whether educational success is the responsibility of the teacher , or whether it is an individual's ability to learn. In this essay , I will elaborate on both views and give my personal opinion on this matter.

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The presence of scholars in class will provide more benefits than online teaching.I believe that in-class learning has more pros than online learning , as students can gain more practical ability , face-to-face interaction , boost their confidence level and active participation in tasks.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think of the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The tendency of offense is becoming a major issue in many countries, poverty and lack of education are leading to this, which can be resolved after taking some measures by governments and individuals, that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have? •someone who is quiet •someone who we are similar to •someone who is supportive Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Migration and living abroad have become easier nowadays, therefore many different cultures around the world are gathered in a single neighbourhood. Neighbors are families and individuals who live near each other, however, there is a debate about which type of neighbors are the best. In my opinion, I believe that people who are similar to each other are the best option.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Oil has become a primary source of energy production,major countries are spending big sums of capital in the search of crude oil. However, I believe that it is advisable to utilise this part of bill for the development of renewable sources like solar systems and wind power.

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The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What other solutions can you offer?

The recent rising environmental issues are undeniable. To overcome these problems, some argue that raising the prices of fuel is the best way. However, I do not tend to agree with this opinion as fuels are not the only dangerous materials here.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, it is quite common to believe that technology such as TV and computer games has a tremendous effect on our lives. Many people opine that the violence shown on TV as well as games impacts society negatively, while others refute the notion. I firmly believe that these things do not influence individual’s severely, which will be discussed further in this essay.

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You learned a piece of news from your friend regarding a part-time job at a new international company near your house.

I am writing to express my interest in the part-time position at your esteemed international company, as informed by a friend. As a motivated and hardworking individual, I believe this opportunity will allow me to gain valuable work experience while contributing to your organization.

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Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area, others prefer to live in many different places in thair life time? Discuss both views & give your opinion

Nowadays migration in many countries is higher than in others, there are many aspects to consider when people want to stay in the same place while others prefer to live in different places, this essay will show both sides.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

In several countries, most people prefer to have their own home rather than renting it. Being an owner can have lots of positive points.

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In the past, the older generation were a source of knowledge and experience. Nowadays, the older generation have little understanding or experience of the modern world. Has this had any negative impact on the way the elderly are treated by society and the family? What could be done to solve this situation?

Ageing is the natural process that all human beings go through. Without a doubt, as humans grow older, they become wiser through cumulative knowledge and experiences. However, due to enormous technological evolution in the past centuries, this is no longer applicable. This essay will discuss the effects of age advancement on how older folks are treated and suggest ways to improve their situation.

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Some people believe that art, such as painting and music, does not improve people’s lives, so the government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

Some people argue with the government to stop funding for art-related schemes such as painting and music . In my opinion, the arts are the treasure sources and prestigious ones. Therefore, in this essay, I will explain the importance of the arts with examples.

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Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer

Every day nation have to choose products but they don't know how they were made, by humans or machines. 70% of clients prefer handmade items because they consider that they are better quality.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend, in your email: Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Hope you’re doing well. It was great to hear from you and I’m delighted that you have decided to take in a new sport. As I can remember you have been always interested in new adventures and I reckon the best sport that you can choose is tennis.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many students have a trend to study more second courses besides their main subjects.

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Some people say that it is the parents who have to make children good citizens of society while others believe this should be done at school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Taking care of children is one of the most important things for parents to raise them to be proper citizens of society, while some people argue that it is the responsibility of schools to shape their children instead. This essay will delve deep down into both perspectives and include my own experiences.

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The plans below show a student accommodation building 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps compare the layout of an apartment building for students in 2010 and its current one after undergoing significant improvements.

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It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, conventional habits such as going to the cinema are on a downward trend due to the impact of technological advancements. In addition, these attitudes will decrease even more. Since humanity stepped into the digital era, it has been inevitable to stop technology, because it clearly eases human life. It simplifies tasks by reducing them to just a few clicks, so people do not need to conduct traditional procedures, like buying a ticket and going to the cinema. Also, it shortens distances, and individuals no more need to go out of their houses.

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Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A sizable share of citizens consider that countries dedicate too much costs and attention to the matter of wild animals and birds protection. Personally, I do not agree with this position.

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