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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries government are investing new technology to deal with the public. Why this is happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

With the recent advancement in technology, more and more governments now invest in modern technology in order to tackle public concerns. This is an effort to mitigate environmental and health issues of the citizens. I believe this is a positive approach, which could improve the overall quality of life.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Thanks to technological advances, there are numerous types of social media application introduced. While there is no doubt that these applications benefit humans in different aspects, like communicating with family members, making new friends, and developing their own business, I believe that there would be catastrophic if we excessively focus on online platforms.

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Some argue that teachers should focus on academics more than motivating students.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about whether teachers should focus more on academic knowledge rather than motivating students. Some people think that having strong subject knowledge is the most important factor for success, while others believe that motivation also plays a key role. I agree that academic learning should be the main focus, but motivation is also necessary for student achievement.

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Some argue that teachers should focus on academics more than motivating students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that instructors ought to pay attention mainly to lectures instead of inspiring students. While some argue in favour, I oppose this notion.

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Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are there more negative or positive sides to this trend?

Nowadays, the new generation tends to spend less time with their family than in the past. There are several reasons for this, including negative circumstances and consequences, as well as more than a few positive relevant impacts for youths, adults, and societies. I believe that lack of connection with family members creates disadvantages more than advantages.

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Many feel that students today should learn Practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many kids need to have knowledge of vehicle maintenance and taking care of their finances while they are at school learning another subject. This essay will show you how important it is to learn practical skills at an early age and explain both opinions with relevant examples.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

In the current world, it has become increasingly common shopping to shop on the Internet. Analysing the circumstances, the benefits can overtake the drawbacks. This essay will discuss both views of on online shopping followed by my personal opinion on this subject.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who some times disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some people that it is better to choose friends who always stick on the same opinions as them, while others believe that it is good to have friends who some times disagree with them. In my opinion, having friends that disagree in certain situations might bring more benefits.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very young age, while others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The decision behind the age children get formal education has sparked considerable debate. Some believe that they should start as early as possible, while others contend that they should be old enough to go to school. While both perspective have merit, this essay will discuss both points of view and give my own perspective.

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Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

The proliferation of ample high-tech means of recreation has made traditional enterprise become less popular to children which derives from game addiction and a lack of self-discipline. Nevertheless, this can be confronted by educating children about healthy lifestyles, including showing the vital of outdoor activities and having a strict time schedule.

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Some people believe that the effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary epoch, a certain number of people think that taxing the companies which cause industrial pollution is an effective way to reduce these emissions. Others believe that there are other ways to help the environment. Analysing these views a combined approach of implementing taxes and public awareness is the most effective strategy to decrease the levels of emissions.

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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their works from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, modern computers and modems have enabled office employees to work online, making some people think it is beneficial for workers. I believe it should be encouraged by employers as long as employees are productive.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Last research, said that, in the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday, because economic problems in the world will continue to increase. In this essay, I will try to explain why I agree with this view.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job .On the other hand, other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skill is more important .Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In today's competitive job market , some people believe that obtaining a university degree is the most effective way to secure employement.Others cintend that practical experience and soft skills are more valuable in the work place.This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The issue of the lack of outdoor community centers has been debated many times. Some people argue having outdoor squares and parks provides more benefits for the public who live in the cities. In my point of view. I partly agree with the given perspective for several reasons to support my view.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments should not ban gasoline-powered cars and replace them entirely with electric vehicles. This essay disagrees with the statement because battery-powered cars require long charging times for extended journeys and are also expensive to manufacture and purchase.

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Some people say economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger, while others say economic growth is damaging the environment and must stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

An arising concern in recent decades relates to whether the development of the economy is the only solution to solve poverty and hunger or it should be stopped as it may be harmful to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this argument and then give my own perspectives.

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Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few think that having office mates as friends and spending time with them is appreciatable. However, others believe that work-life balance is important. In order to achieve this, one should not have colleagues as extended friends. In my view, i strongly agree that work and social life should be separated to have a peaceful and calm life.

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Some people believe that getting a degree from a university is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. discuss both views and give your opinion.

More and more people think that having a certificate from a university is the best method to guarantee a good job. However, others argue that job owners appreciate job experience more than an academic degree. In my opinion, I believe that both views are equally important.

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