IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 595

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

It certainly cannot denied that machines are very Common in this thechnical era people are depened on these devices. Electronic Gadgets replacing human each and every field. This has some positive effects on us, however, due to this some people "face problems. In upcoming paragraphs I will give proper explanations and describe it's positve and negative effects on people.

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some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Experts throughout the developing and developed world have debated whether we should apply ourselves to prevent climate change or just adapt to such a situation. Although people might have to sacrifice during the process of minimising the impact from climate change, this essay will argue that we cannot live with it and have to take action, using the example from Oxford University to demonstrate points.

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Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

These days, people usually spend their cash to buy everything they like.However, if they understood the value of money, admittedly, they would not waste it.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goals. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some authorities that growth in the economy of the nation should be focus on, while others argue that government should focus on others essential progess as they are crucial. In this essay i will discuss both view and explain why i believe that others factor are important to achieve economic progress.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,population of few countries in terms of younger people is huge as compared with older individuals. As per my standpoint it will surely outweigh it's demerits. So, in the forthcoming paragraphs I have mentioned both its merits and demerits.

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MORE AND MORE PEPLE TODAY ARE VISITING EXTREME PLACES SUCH AS ANTARCTICA OR THE SAHARA DESERT. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF SUCH TRAVES?

Nowadays, every human-beings like to explore such places in which the weather is quite different from their surroundings. Also, visiting some places like, Antarctica or the Sahara Desert has its own benefits and drawbacks too. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive as well as negative sides of visiting such kinds of places.

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MORE AND MORE PEPLE TODAY ARE VISITING EXTREME PLACES SUCH AS ANTARCTICA OR THE SAHARA DESERT. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF SUCH TRAVES?

Nowadays, every human-beings like to explore such places, which weather is quite different from their surroundings. Also, visiting some places like, Antarctica or the Sahara Desert has their own benefits and drawbacks too. In this essay, I will discuss both positive as well as negative sides of visiting such kind of places.

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Some people spend a lot of money attend cultural and sports events. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a trend among people to spend a lot of money for buying tickets of sporting events and cultural shows. Some people think that this is a positive development and it should be encouraged Others disagree with that view. Both opinions will be discussed in this essay.

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

These days, the importance of worldwide trade rises up. Many products which consumer use regularly are manufactured in other countries, leading to these must be transported long distance. The main reason why the process is going like that is companies want to make more profit thanks to this. I strongly believe that this advantage far outweighs any potential disadvantage such are the pollution which transporting system caused.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways lines for very fast trains etween cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving exising public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The introduction of new transportation means like a new fast train is believed to be an essential factor of human living, while some others argue that the existing means should be improved. In my opinion, both statements come with their own benefits and drawbacks than can have greater impacts on human life.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that child could be taught to be a good sports person or musician. Discuss both this views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and give relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a popular knowledge that some people are born with talents in sport or music, but sometimes it can be taught. In my opinion, I believe talents can develop at different age with the right attitude or passion and guidance.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days, the population of some nations have a higher number of young adults rather than the number of old people. The question is, is the benefit of this situation more than the downside? In this essay I am going to discuss the advantages and the disadvantages and draw my conclusions.

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In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. IS this a positive or a negative development ?

Nowadays In many cities across the globe shopping malls have been constructed. Mushrooming of shopping malls has created survival problems for small store owners . With the advent of malls , and shopping centres small shop owner face survival. It has become survival of the fittest. Small shop owners can't afford huge rent and cant offer heavy discounts during the festive season . It has created lots of negative effects in general for small shop owners . let's discuss why shopping malls have created a negative impact on small shop owners.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

It is observed that some people purchase many things even if they cannot have enough money and it is not necessary. There are reasons contrubiting to this phenomenon. However, there are solutions to this incident which I will explain in this essay.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today’s world, alternative treatments are highly trendy. Many citizens are now relying on these procedures and products. This essay will discuss the disadvantages of this situation while giving examples of possible health problems and public-related issues.

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Many people, nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this. Do you think is a positive or negative development.

In this ambitious world, Due to the development in the technology industry, a lot of people prefer to spend their leisure time using their phones, rather than spending it with their friends. In my prespectives, it is a negative development and I will elaborate more in the forthcoming paragraphs using lucid examples.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Young people today are under pressure to do well at school and go on to higher education of find a good job. For this reason many people think that non academic subjects are waste of time and that schools should only focus on more academic subjects. I would disagree with this opinion and in this essay will explain why.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done with this problem?

Despite the improvements relating to agriculture, a considerable number of people are suffering from starvation all over the world. This essay will discuss the causes of such a problem and propose ways to deal with it.

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Every country in the world has its road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. Why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many drivers disobey the traffic rules which are legislated by the government. The main cause of this problem as well as a few solutions will be discussed in this essay.

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The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?

The most effective method of improving health is to practice regular exercise. In my opinion, I completely agree that regular exercise is the best way to improve individuals' health however, a healthy diet is also considered another key factor. There is no doubt that following daily exercises will lead to improving one's health.

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