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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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A REPORT INDICATED THAT MANY CHILDREN BETWEEN 7 AND 11 SPEND TOO MUCH TIME WATCHING TELEVISION AND / OR PLAY VIDEO GAMES. HOW DOES THE PROBLEM AFFECT THE CHILDREN, THEIR FAMILIES AND SOCIETY? WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO CONTROL IT?

Spending much time in front of a screen is a big issue at present days . A study reported that many children , whose age is ranging from 7 to 11 years old , are used to consuming a lot of time watching TV or playing video games . This behaviour affects their concentration ability and retard their relationship with their family and society . Consequently, parents should develop their awareness about how to utilize their time and put limits to control screen time for children .

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals suggest that in all grades of studies, from nursery to ,universities maximum time is invested in gathering facts. However, a very less proportion of learning practical skills, which is necessary to provide scholars reality of life in the future. In my view, I completely agree with the statement, and this essay will dictate pointers to support the same.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, taking danger has become an essential element of success. While some believe that taking risks is important for success, Others argue that it has disadvantages. In this, essay I will discuss both views and draw a conclusion.

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The health benefits of physical activities are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them exercise regularly?

While some acknowledge that frequently doing work out brings positive influences to human physical and mental health, a number of people are indifferent in it or could not spend time exercising for certain causes. It is vital that several methods need to be taken to tackle this problem.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep. What are the problems caused by lack of sleep? What can be done about this lack of sleep?

It is widely claimed that many people have been experiencing insomnia. There are causes and solutions that can be reckoned to solve this issue.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's globalized world, the fashion industry is a rapidly expanding, multi billion dollar market. It has a considerable impact on people's lives and the economy. Fashion items are often debated, with some claiming they are overpriced. However, others argue that high prices are reasonable due to fashion's significance in society. I will discuss both perspectives in this essay.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Recently, an increasing number of people make the decision to put off the time to have children. This may be caused by several reasons. I personally believe that young men deciding to have children later in life has benefits exceeding its drawbacks/has more benefits than defects.This essay will set light on/ discuss both merits and the possible defects of this phenomenon.

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

In some countries, mainly in developed settings, young people are rich, safe and healthy, but they are not happy as elders. There are so many reasons for that. Also, society can do many things to avoid this situation too.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Lack of sleeping is becoming increasingly popular. As time is passing, the Complains of lack sleeping are increasing. This essay will discuss what kind of problems are arising because of Short sleeping and put forward several solutions for this raising issue.

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Some people think that technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful for the studying process. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Technology is seen by some people as the key to success for young students. Others, however, argue that it has a negative impact, but I think technology is a positive force for the young as they study.

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Looking at the task below, which is concerning the prison as the best solution to provide a better education through the question that the task reports, it's evident the way in which two wide opinions try to prevail over each other, giving the opportunity to share a proper idea.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The world has become a global village after the industrial revolution. Different Nations are having many similarities with each other due to having access to whatever they need regardless of their geographical situation. In this essay, I will explain in detail why I believe this phenomenon is a positive development for human beings.

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Women play quite different role in society than twenty years ago. They make career growth, earn money, drive cars and spend less time with their children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days, in many societies women have more rights than twenty years ago. Now, there are some changes in gender roles, such as females have freedom to earn money, create a startup, make career promotion and less take care with their kids. In this essay, there are some benefits, which more otweight than drawbacks.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In some countries, many people consider it progress that only a handful of people earn very high salaries compared to the rest of the population. Other schools of thought prefer the government to regulate how much people earn. In my opinion, I think the government should be allowed to control people’s wages for transparency and to prevent fraud.

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The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the most pressing causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

Increasing levels of airborne pollutants have proved to be a major obstacle for humanity in the 21st century. This trend is predominantly caused by consumption patterns associated with rising global affluence, namely the increasing demand growing economies have for fossil fuels. These triggers and the effects rising rates of atmospheric pollution have on the planet will be examined in this essay.

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Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Give your opinion

Probably everybody would agree that telling the truth is the right thing to do. However, sometimes there is only a fine line between being honest and being rude or being polite and lying. Telling the truth may not be socially acceptable in every situation. In my view, it can sometimes be wiser and more socially acceptable not to frankly tell the truth to everybody.

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Some peoples believe single sex school are more beneficial to students because they achieve better academic results .other however argue that mixed school are better since student can develop better social skills

There is an ongoing explanation as to whether the advantages of single-sex schools out wight the advantage of mixed schools. The research found that single-sex school children are better achieved to their academic results when learning with the same sex.Many peoples believe mixed school Children are more social skills and cooperation compared with the single-sex school .Although both schools have valid points,I would argue that mixed schools are better for most children

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In this era, technology has been remarkably advancing, and people also apply it to educating students with a new method, compared to the conventional way of using lectures. From my point of view, a modern approach could bring many merits, yet concurrently, there are several demerits following those.

In the changing world today, we are moving to a technology driven era, where technology affects in many aspects, education is no exception. It is considered by some that it should have many benefits by replacing traditional study in the early days by applying technology study in modern times, whereas I believe that a wide range of drawbacks from that increased technological change.

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Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mostly when you find work in different companies they required interviews to check if you are qualified for the position. But some people believe is not required for employment. I disagree with the statement interview is not necessary for employment.

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rich countries should aallow jobs for skilled and knowlegeable employers who are from poor coutries. Do you agree or disagree.

The issue of whether people who live in poor countries with experienced skills and knowledge should be allowed to work in rich countries has long been controversial. In my opinion, it is good for a country to have people who are skilled in specific fields, thus providing a competitive environment to society and in turn improving the quality of the country.

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